AkDha FF Destiny #2 Chapter 18-19 updated 13/10 The End pg 21 - Page 14

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Recap: She gently removed Jalal's hand from her, which clanged on to her as if it was his lifeline. She slipped into his satin silky nightgown and lay down on the circled shape bed. She nuzzled herself on Jalal's masculine chest and was about to fall asleep when she heard Jalal mumble something. She looked up at him and pressed her lips on his forehead. Then he murmured in his sleep "I love you Jodha." Jodha stilled.
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Jodha could feel her body tense and her breath hitched rapidly making her vision fuzzy. Is this for real? The betrothed she lady pursed her lips in anticipation and fluttered her eyes towards Jalal to ensure whether he was sleeping or not. She could sense herself unwind when she saw him quiescent like a baby. All of a sudden, she had an urgent surge to fish her fingers through his ruffled hair in order to show a rejoinder to his feelings towards her. He perceptibly wasn't deceitful about it, after all he fast asleep.
Jalal's admission to her left Jodha in perplexity, confusion of what was feeling and what she should feel. Her heart quivered around in enjoy... Someone in her life had feelings for her.. Loved her.. Cared for her... Worried for her well-being.. Was possessive about her... Never in her dreams she had the least idea that Jalal would be the person who detained all these things for her. He loved her and tonight she saw it in his eyes..
But Jodha was anxious. A part of her screeched to her that Jalal prized her and on the part declined the fact to be factual. It was too good to be true. Initially, Jalal had detested her from the bottom of his heart. He was an egoistic man with no real emotions and for this ego of his, he had married her to seek retribution... But he never really caused any damage to her and now he unknowingly professed his feelings to her... It seemed like a fairytale.. Hatred turned into love.. It was no less than a movie and this is what Jodha was frightened of...
She whooshed a good amount of air out of her mouth, with it washing away the doubts that were submerging her mind. She shook her head as she thought of her idiocy. Of course whatever her said was true... He said it all in his sleep and no one in the world would lie during his or her sleep.. It was not humanly possible. Unless, Jalal was some sort of vampire who had all along planned to entice her in him and then one night make her his feast.. Jodha choked a chuckle out her mouth at her humor.. " He loves me.." she assured herself, caressing his forehead gently. Now the million dollar question was whether she loved him or not.. She looked at him wearily "Do I love HIM?"
Next morning
Jalal rolled over to the other side of the bed, only to find it cold and empty. His ears shot up to detect any sound around him and that his when he heard her humming melodiously. His eyes gradually opened, adjusting with the lights. Lazily, he sat up and stretched his elbows until he heard it click.
Jodha was busy brushing her long dark hair and she didn't realize she was being scanned from top to bottom. Her spectator had all his eyes and ears all over her... Desire fumed into his body.. But he decided to control it as his relationship with Jodha was turning for the better and he didn't want to push her any further. They had to take baby steps to reach the ultimate stage of their relationship, love.
Jalal, at first, deliberated of calling her out but later he warded the thought away and decided to approach himself to her. Tentatively, Jalal put his hands on her shoulder that immediately stiffened but unperturbed instantly. He liked the transformation in her. His hands were itching to drape itself around Jodha's creamy waist and drag her nearer to him... To experience her all over his body again, like last night...
Jodha, feeling his warm converge on her shoulders, reddened heavily. He wanted more. She sniggered inwardly and exhaled noisily, she wanted it to but when the right time comes.. Everything progressed to speedily and now he had to inform her about his feeling and she knew that Jalal being Jalal won't ever confess. So she being the more responsible and mature one, had to inquire him about..
"Your up already? After the...ummm.. You slept late" Jalal broke the stillness, regretting the choice of his words.
She beamed ironically and creased her lips together as she turned. "Well actually, I wake up early all the time.. Even when I sleep late.." she pressed on the word late and her inner self was blaring her to wink and even though she tried to control herself, it just slipped out of her and she winked.
Jalal's brows furrowed deeper and a lazy, seductive smile made its way on his lips "Are you flirting with me Mrs.Jalal."
Jodha's muscled tightened, but she had to reply back. "What does it seem like?" she pouted her lips at him, making him bite the lower lip with his two teeth, he was still smiling. "I like it when you wink at me.. Makes you look hot.." he winked at her and then he realized he called her hot... Did he go over the board? He tried to read Jodha's expression, which was screaming to him that he loved him for calling her that.
Jodha was astonished when he called her hot... During her childhood times her friend had taught her that hot was a bad word but gradually she understood the meaning of it as she aged more. "Crap! Did he just call me hot? Oh my God he just did! So we are on with the flirtatious lines.. Bring it on mister... I will enjoy myself... Guaranteed" She threw in a flirty smile to him in response that made him go GAGA all over her.
"Do you love me?" she blurted out of the blue without wanting to speak of it. She hadn't want to ask him about it as she knew when the correct time would come, he himself would speak to her of his feelings...
Jalal's heart twisted into a knot.. How did she get to know about it? Why is she asking such a question? Is it that evident in my face? Crap crap crap! He wanted to take her by surprise with a very romantic dinner date and then he would have proposed her.. Tell her to marry him again.. But she had to ruin all his plans by asking this questions.. If he says no now that would break her heart and he couldn't watch her in despair.. He had to tell her the truth. He had to make this moment special right now and here! Jalal thought to himself.
Jodha blinked her eyes in anticipation and she wryly waited to get a reply from the other end.. But he just plunked there lost in some contemplation.. Only if she could just read his mind and keep updates with his thoughts..
He took some steps backwards making Jodha's heart grip with tension. What is up with him?
Jalal snapped open the cupboard door and started frisking it urgently. Nothing! He simply found nothing! He cursed himself under his breath and slammed shut the door behind him and headed himself towards the wooden drawers.
Jodha watched him trashing the contents of the drawers one by one on the floor and she began to wonder whether he has gone lunatic or not! If she had known that this question of hers would drive him insane like this, she wouldn't even had dared to utter a word about it.. Now she was left vexed..
Jalal ruffled his already tussled hair with his long sleek fingers in frustration. There had to be something.. Something worth of presenting to Jodha.. But Alas, he couldn't find anything in the drawers, nor the bedside table and nor the cupboard. His eyes suddenly fell open the mini refrigerator at the corner of his room and he prayed to his lucky stars to find something worth giving to Jodha.
He skidded towards the fridge and on the way he exchanged glances with Jodha, who wriggled her brows and gave him a confused look. He blinked his eyes in assurance and made his way towards the fridge.. He bent down and slowly opened the door. Relief washed over him... He knew it was crazy but it was definitely something different, something exclusive for his girl.
So he was hungry, Jodha thought to herself and felt like hitting her head against the wall. He was probably so hungry that he didn't pay heed to her words.. She thought gloomily.. She heard him tearing a packet and she sighed deeply...The minute she was about to turn to leave, she heard him utter her name in his husky tone "Jodhaa..." he stretched on her name making her heart fly away somewhere else..
Slowly, she turned around only to find Jalal kneeling on his knees and looking at her with copper eyes. Her breathing stopped.. He had never looked so breath taking since the time she met him.. His deep eyes spoke volumes to her and she tried to express her gratitude with her pearl-like eyes. He got the notion and ginned happily. He took her hand into his, brought it closer to his mouth and gently pressed his lips upon making Jodha's cheeks go red.
"Ummm... wait.." Jalal hesitated as he fished his fingers into the packet that sat beside him, and took out a ring shaped chip out of it. Jodha arched an eyebrow, trying to finger out what he was trying to do.. Jalal's eyes met with Jodha's and instantly he reclined it in embarrassment. "Oh boy! This is going to be embarrassing" he taunted himself under his breath. With his free hand he regained Jodha's hand into his palm and brushed his lips on it "I didn't get time to.. ummm.. you know... Plan something special.." he let out a gust of air out of his mouth.. "I mean I did.. But not here.." Jalal felt like slapping himself for this novice behavior! He pursed his lips together "So here it goes.." he said it out loud without realizing it.
Jodha could feel her pulse accelerating and that moment she knew he was proposing. What would be her reply? Did she love him? Yes. The answer had to be yes. All the feelings she had been developing inside her for him wasn't something she had felt before and the minute he knelt down in front of her she knew that she loved him.
"Mrs.Jodha Jalalluddin Mohammad, our journey began in a bad notion and we went through many bad phases together because of me...my pathetic ego.. But I am actually glad with this ego of mine.. Because if my ego hadn't pushed me to the edge, I wouldn't have had married the most beautiful woman in this planet and fall in love with her.. So that's it Mrs.Jalal.. I Love you and you have me marry me again.. You will.." He concluded gracefully sliding the potato chip ring into her ring finger... He glanced up to meet her eyes and what he saw made his heart go weak with anxiety. Puddles of tears rained down her eyes.. She was touched to her core with his confession and immediately she decided that this the best possible way anyone could profuse his or her love.
With the mixed batch of emotions flooding in her, Jodha couldn't find her voice..Jalal knew that this expression of her indicated something good.. She opened her mouth to say something but alas Jalal's cell phone intruded in between.
Ring.Ring.Ring..
It kept on buzzing until its master answered it.
"Spit it out and this better be something important because I am in the middle..." Jalal's commanding voice silenced... A deathly silence which made Jodha uncomfortable.. Jalal took a sharp rasp of air and in between gritted teeth "Find about that bast**ds whereabouts... He shouldn't escape.. I am on my way.."
Without even looking at Jodha, Jalal flew towards the bathroom and in a minute Jodha could hear the shower running. "Jodha can you bring out my clothes for me and hand it over to the bathroom. Jodha felt content. Finally they were having a proper husband wife moment. "Sure.. Anything for you.."
Before leaving, Jalal pecked on Jodha's forehead and warned her "Don't step out of the house until I come.. Alright baby?" All the other things he said went blurry and the word baby become the highlight. She nodded obediently and whispered to him "I love you most.." she quickly kissed his lips and pushed him "Now you can leave.."
Jalal brushed his fingers over his lips seductively "Huh?" he exclaimed. "Wait till I come baby.. I will show you who loves whom the most.." he winked at her, reluctantly releasing her hand from his, Jodha bid him farewell...



Contnued in next post
Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 10 years ago
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She toyed the food in her plate with a fork, lost in her own dream world of love and joy. Finally, she could feel her pulse relax for good and slumped herself in the leather sofa, breathing abnormally. Jalal loved her and she loved him back. This was the fact that was to be remained unchanged. Everything seemed to fall in it place and the missing puzzle of love from her life had skidded its way to get solved. She apparently did nothing to entice him nor did she.. It was destined to happen.. A subtle smile made its way to the corner of her lips and she could feel her cheeks warming up even in the thought of him. Wait till I come back... The thought of it made Jodha shiver in excitement...what was her man up to? She blushed like a love sick teenager and threw her face into her palms, giggling aloud.
She heard the doorbell ring twice and slipped inside her shoes, flapped towards the door.. Wait till I come back... He was here, she thought as she made her way down the stairs. Taking in a moment, she brushed her hair with her fingers and patted her shoulders for confidence and she was ready to go! Wait till I come back.. She blushed heavily and strode towards the door. Wait till I come back... She turned the doorknob and grinned naughtily... Wait till I come back... She opened the door wide open and her smile disappeared into the thin air.. WAIT TILL I COME BACK...
Jalal put a halt to his Audi R8 as he reached the office building and threw the key to the guard to park the car. Just when he was about to enter the building, his phone started buzzing "Speak" he spoke urgently. "Sir, we tracked his phone and were able to determine his destination." Jalal arched a brow of his "Continue..." "S-sir he was last seen hovering in Colaba.. Near your house... then he switched his phone off.. That's his last destination." Jalal froze in anxiety "Whe-when?" Jalal cleared his voice. "Sir fifteen minutes ago.. I fear he will try to get in your house and fish out some information or try to harm you.. But the good thing is Sir, that you are here safe and sound.. He can't harm you.." His mind went numb in a tremor and he pressed his jaw in a tight line "Call the police! Immediately!" Jalal urgently cut the phone and barked to guard to bring his car back... Please be safe.. He chanted this mantra until his car halted in front of him. He hit ignition and sped away to save his Jodha from the devil who had once snatched his valuable gem.. He was not going to let that happen again..
"Excuse me?" she replied curiously as the man scanned her from top to bottom with his devious eyes, that made Jodha uncomfortable. "May I help you?" this time her voice louder and cleared. His eyes sparked after meeting with her face "I am Sharriffuddin, Jalal's sister Bakshi's husband.. Jalal has called me here for a business proposition and he will be here any minute.." he babbled honestly.. Jalal was coming, the thought of it made Jodha smile. Until Jalal comes, she had to take care of this man as he was Jalal's relative, it was her duty to serve him.
"Please, come in." Jodha spoke chirpily with a smile plastered around her face. Sharriffuddin entered the house with devil like smirk and as he went past Jodha, he brushed his body with her petite form, apologizing immediately. Jodha's brow deepened and she clasped her elbows to her knees and held them tightly.. Only for Jalal, she reminded herself. "Please, sit down.. Would you like some tea?" she spoke sweetly with subtle smile... "No thanks.." came his response..
Jodha's phone started to ring and she said aloud "Oh its Jalal.. Ill inform him that you are waiting for him..." She looked at the screen for a couple of seconds and was about to answer the call, when she found her phone snatched away by huge palms.. "I am afraid I can't let you answer that..." He finished with a smile, his eyes darkened, making Jodha take a few step backwards.. "Who are you?" she said quivering with fear.. He down casted his eyes and then looked back at her with confidence.. "I am Bakshi's husband.."
"What the fing hell!" Jalal grasped a good amount of hair into his palm and pulled them in frustration, first for this traffic jam and second Jodha was not picking up her God damn phone! Jalal quickly dialed her number again, trying his luck again... He froze right there when found the line dead, it was switched off.. What was going on? Jodha was definitely in trouble and this traffic jam seemed to be endless...
Without wasting a minute, Jalal shot out of his car like a coiled spring and started to run as fast as he could.. He had to save her.. Not only for her but for him too..
"What do you want from me?" Jodha sent out a shrill scream, as she watched her smashed on the floor into pieces. Tears threatened to escape her eyes and she tried hard to hold them back. "For now.. YOU" spoke Sharriffuddin with lust dripping from his sentence, the eyes explored her petite figure and he but his lips in satisfaction.. This chilled Jodha to her core and she stood there completely lifeless. Where was he?
"Jalal is the most pathetic and emotional head case I have ever met in my life.. So what I married her sister for money and beat the crap out of her? So what I pushed her off of the staircase and cause her to carry? So what I lured her to commit suicide? So what I turned her parents against her and her mushy brother? It caused me no harm.. Just five years of jail and look where am I now standing? Free like an eagle!" Jodha threw him a disgusted look "You devil!" she scowled at him making him laugh hysterically "I am not done yet.. I am here to avenge my insult of sending me to jail.. Jalal has to pay and he will after I snatch the little who*e of his from him?" Jodha felt her bile rising. "Jalal found himself wife cum who*e"His eyes darted towards her..
No.. she wouldn't let this happen.. She would punish him for wronging Bakshi... She would not let him touch her! Her first instincts worked over her, picking up the Chinese porcelain, which sat right next to her, she threw it in his direction. It was an unexpected move and before he could dodge it, the vase landed on his head making his vision fussy. Jodha ceased the chance and ran almost the rate of speed of light towards the bedroom and double locked herself. She began breathing heavily and stream of tears washed down her eyes. Jalal...The thought of him brought back her spirits and she jolted towards the landline, thanking her lucky stars that it was working.
The road was empty now and he had managed to hire an auto and promised the driver that he would reward him with a content heart if he sped quickly enough to his destination. His shirt was drenched with sweat and the lapels of his jackets were flying out from its position. He was a mess. In exasperation, he cupped his face with palms and started to hyperventilate aloud. The auto immediately slowed down, making Jalal twitch "Why did the auto stop?" he asked urgently. "Sir are you okay?" Outraged with the pathetic question of the driver "Would Ya just drive and stop Fing with my personal life!" The auto started right there and Jalal's pulse relaxed just abit.. His phone started to ring and it flashed "home" Jalal could feel his heart in his mouth.
"Hello Jalal! Please come home fast.. This crazy guy is here to seek revenge from you.. Please come fast.. I managed to knock him out for a couple of minutes.. Save me Jalal! He is going to kill me...Aaahhh!"
SMASH!
Then the line went dead along with Jalal's sanity...
"Don't touch me!" Jodha tried to ward him off with her edginess.. "You really shouldn't have hit me..." Sharriffuddin shuddered his shoulders as he advanced towards Jodha. " This is what happens when you give too much importance to a woman.. She starts thinking that she is more superior than men... The same thing happened to Bakshi... She was a pain in the behind.. Thank God she committed suicide or else I had to kill her with my very own hands.." Sharriffuddin said apologetically. Jodha couldn't hold herself together anymore and without thinking of the coincidence, she spat on him, right on the face. Without looking back, she made a run towards the bed, threw the cushions at him and made a quick escape through the entrance... She could here his long strides towards and for a moment she thought that she would herself caught, but someone pushed Jodha to go on.. Jalal..
The front door was open, which made some oxygen pass through her veins.. Idiot, she reminded herself of Sharriffuddin.. Just when she was about to cross the boundaries of the house, she felt a hand over her shoulders and then *tear* the side of her kameez had been torn, revealing a good amount of her fresh skin. This made Jodha rooted in her spot.
He was finally there! He almost threw his wallet to the driver and requested him if he would do him a favor and accompany him to his house. As expected, his good for nothing guards were missing from their place and he had to do something about them.. But now he needed to give his full concentration on Jodha.
The driver and he strode past the garden and when they reached the door, Jalal's eyes almost popped out from its place. Shariffuddin grasped Jodha with his hands and was trying to smooch her. On the other hand Jodha was crying and protesting at the same time. Anger boiled in his blood, with gritted teeth and clutched his fist into a ball and threw a blow at him. Sharriffuddin toppled down causing his nose to bleed. Probably, Jalal had gotten him a hairline facture.
He frisked a quivering Jodha in his embrace and held on to her as she broke down into tears. He let them flow... He heard the police sirens and then and there he knew Sharriffuddin's game was over.. Jalal would never let him out of jail again..
Jalal pressed his lips on Jodha's hair "Don't worry baby.. Nothing has happened to you.. You are all fit and fine.. Now Now stop crying."
Jodha nuzzled into Jalal's chest "I love you Jalal... I love you.."
"Back at ya."
Three years later
"The milk bottle is slowly moving towards Baby Salim.. Daddy Striker Jalal is worried if he is able to goal or not." came the commentary from Jalal as Baby salim half lay on his lap, excitement gleamed in his eyes to know more.. What would happen next. Jalal continued "Mumma Mid fielder Jodha looks quite worried whether the daddy striker can goal or not.. Daddt striker passes all the obstacles and now is on one on one with the lips goal keeper. Will he be able to shoot?" Salim opened his mouth wide open "Yesh de will!" He shot his hand in the air in excitement and Jalal took the opportunity and dipped the bottle inside his mouth "GOAL! What an excellent shot by Jalal!" Jalal patted his shoulders, showing off and his son started to giggle.. Jodha clapped her hands "Yayy we won again!"
Salim was a two year old kid, but he didn't act his age.. He was much more mature and understood everything and obeyed his parents.. Except of the eating part he was an obedient child..
"How are my Hassan and Hussein?" Jalal carefully picked up the sleeping son and placed him into the crib. He held Jodha from behind, trying his level best to get hold of her, but alas her protruding tummy stopped his futile attempt.
"Thanks Jalal..."
Jalal pecked on her lips "For what?"
Jodha spoke softly "For everything... If you weren't.."
Jalal ushered her from speaking "Ssshhh... We are meant to be.. Destiny had chosen us to be together and no one in the world can change it... No one.. You will remain mine forever..Mrs.Jalalluddin Mohammad."
THE END

Edited by ..Tahniat.. - 10 years ago
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Destiny has been a joy ride with you all.. I am really glad with the response and I really appreciate you all motivating to update my FFs... So this the end of my journey with Destiny and I hope I haven't disappointed anyone with it😉

I, TAHNIAT, FINISHED A FF








Thanks everyone..
Special names to be taken,
Nancy, Azra, Sreshtha, Varsha Di and my baby sara🤗



Cheers,
Tahniat
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Are you going to update today
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I am updating today I guess...Just have to make some corrections.

I have a little surprise for the readers🤪
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So you are updating today how did this happen lazy queen means after a month you remember this story to update 😆
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

I am updating today I guess...Just have to make some corrections.


I have a little surprise for the readers🤪

Update karo
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Wow sach Tahni, aaj update milega 😲 can't beleive what i am reading 😆
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