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Anushka

@...Anushka...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#171

Awesome update! 👏
Sorry for delay! *Holds Ears*
Wo I started reading ur update at night but couldnt complete it.and so I finsihed it today!
Another master piece by the most talented Bhavi di!! 👏 👏 👏
Di the precap is soool dreamy Itni saari cheez hongi next chapter mein!
Update sooon 😳

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RSlovesJA

@RSlovesJA

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#172

wwwooowww.

Perfect combination of all feeling...

U made me laugh

U made me cry...

Everything is perfect dear,,,, continue soon & do pm

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Sush

@Forthislifeonly

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#173

Chatpter 36----really very good.Just awesome...eagerly waiting for next part...

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Ruthshalini

@Devilicious_ME

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#174

I kept my promise, 👏 update was too fantasticly magically awesome nd next update soon 👏

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#175

Uff bhavviii ... just cannot get enough of this update ... itna time lag gaya ki pata hi nahi chala time ka ... i knw i am late ... lekin kya karu .. baki ka kaam karte karte ... wapas update padhte padhte comment likh rahi hoon ... aur comment bhi lamba hone wala hai ... tum padhe padhte bore ho jaogi 😆 ...okay,now let me start my ranting ... 😃

1) I loved the way jodha showed immense trust on jalal ... & both confessing their mistakes to each other ... what I love in these characters are, their is no ego absolutely ... bhale hi ek ne galati kiya ho toh doosra bhi usi galati ka maafi maangleta hai 😆 omg that is sooo cute ... I just love both of them to the core of my heart ...

And the changes we have seen in jalal ... is tremendous !!! you have shown him change slowly in each & every chapter very beautifully bhaviii 👏 ... I have seen all the shades of jalal !!!

2) Aur hamari jodha begum bhi kuch kam nahi hai ... taana maarne mein toh ek number hai ... bechare ko baat baat pe ... akdu aur teda bol bol ke paka deti hai ... aur mera jallu sunke leta hai 😆 ... kaun shehenshah itna sunke lega ... ??? 😆 ...

now, I so much loved when jodha said she sees him in the murti of kanha ... god that shows how much she loves him & devoted to him ... I could sense jalal's feelings when jodha was saying all this to him ... & jalal saying about him recognizing jodha only by her voice ... UFF ... what an epic couple is this ... no less than laila majnu of 16th century .. Jalal was so proud of jodha being his lover ... yaarr mujhe dedo ye jalal mein toh leke bhaag jaungi ... 😃bhavvii that was a really emotional write up by you 👏...

3) And jodha asks him to do mooh mitha ... poor fellow's GM is automatically activated & thinks she needs a kiss ...😆 ... kya re bhaavviii tumhara ye jalal bilkul hum dono pe gaya hai ... 🤣 ... ahem ahem ke alava aur kuch soojhta hi nahi bechare ko ... & i love him for this thing 😆 ...

And my jodha getting annoyed at him ... soo cute yaar

4) I just loved when jalal said even he shall fast for a whole day just to teach jodha a lesson as to how he feels when she does something like this ... aweee ... mein mar jaava ... kya pyaar hai dono mein ... this shows the intensity of love for each other ...

5) ye bechara bharmal ko dono beti aur jamai milke tension he dete rahenge kya ... poor chap 🤣 whole update mein bharmal ka BP high low hota rehta hai ... 😆 kabhi jamai ke behaviour pe , toh kabhi jodha ke ... 😆 ... OMG !!!

6) Jalal with mischievous tone... Kya shadi ke baad, shadi ke baad ka bhajan ga rahi ho meri nakchadi Junglee billi... bhool gayi humari shadi ko ek saal hone wala hai... Aur yeh ek saal me pehle paach miasat (month) tumne larhaee me nikal diye aur phir pichle che miasat (month) se tum hume chod ke chali gayi... ab tum aese hi nakhre karti rahi to humari aulad hote hote hum dono buddhe ho jayege... Me ab tumhari ek sunne wala nahi hu...

OMG bhaviii I just loved this whole convo ... ooohhoo my jalal ... hez just irresistible

7) Aur jodha .. bechare jalal ko nautanki bol rahi hai ... madame toh khud hi kitni nautanki baaz hai 😆 ... ek toh 6 mahine gayab .. milne ke baad amer ke liye gayab ... aur abhi jab jalal ahem ahem ke liye utawala ho raha hai ... toh 3 chunoti rakh di ... he bhagwaan bechare shehenshah ko kya kya karna padh raha hai jodha ko pane ke liye ... 😆 ...

And when he accepted the challenge ... jodha ka confidence hawa mein udh gayi 😆 ... fir maharani ne aise revealing kapde pehen liye ki bas hamara jalal apna hosh kho baitha 😆 ... upar se jab jodha pe tooth padha toh jodha ne chillake usko beech mein hi rok diya ... poor jalal kitna embarrassed feel kar raha tha ☺️ ... & when jalal won the sword fighting ... he took her inside the cottage ... udhar bhi chalu ho gaya tha ki kabab mein haddi reva beech mein aa gayi ... kya timing tha 😆

aur hamara jallu ki nautanki chalu ... janab ne soot samet jodha se wasool kar li ... aur fir lage haath drama bhi kar li reva ko bhaga diya ... 🤣 ... OMG that part was dammn hilarious bhavviii ... teri dimaag ki daad deni padhegi ... kahan kahan se aise ideas aate hai tere dimag mein ... OMG 🤣

baaki continued in next comment 😎

Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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Sundari1

@Sundari1

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#176

Hi Bhavini, Excellent chapter.. Loved it :)

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#177

Okay continuing my rant ... kindly bear with me 😆

8) Mirza, Mirza, Mirza, Mirza,Mirza ... Ohh mannn this guy is a cute lollypop 😆 ... gawd ... jaisa bada bhai waisa chota bhai ... dono shararat mein mahir hai ... ye mirza bhi na itne logon ke beech mein naughty comment paas karke dono ko embarrass kar diya ... ☺️ !!

hmm shivani bhi attitude dikhane mein apni badi behen jodha se kam nahi hai ... haaye haaye mirza carry on carry on ...

9) Jalal is soo much considerate about jodha's wishes ... shez so fortunate that shez got a husband a shehenshah who has more than 500 begum in his harem ... but still he cares for her like none other could ... he proved his love yet again by getting sujamal for their wedding ... this jalal is seriously & dangerously adorable king ... muahhha

Literally seeing everybody in tears .. even jalal couldnt control himself ... 😲 ... awwweee my cutieee pie 🤗 come near me sweetheart let me give u a tight hug for this 😆 ...

10) i liked surya & jodha's convo ... how he was dejected & came to amer ... i felt for surya this time .. poor guy !! & the way you have described surya's emotions ... hatss off bhavvii ... tu toh har chapter mein surprise pe surprise de rahi ho ... meri emotions ki mallika 😆 ...

seriously i really felt soo bad for surya this time ... lekin thank god sukanya was their to sumbhalofy him ... varna bechara devdas banke firta 😆 ... & thankfully he realised his love for sukanya & I am soo soo soo happy that jalal & jodha are happily supporting them in this matter indirectly ...

waise jalal ke dimag ki deewani ho gayi hoon mein ... waah kya shatir dimag hai yaar bhaaviii .. again credit goes to you meri jaan ... he made a plan where surya aur shivani dono ka shikar ho jaaye ... seriously kudos to u bhavviii to come up with such an awesome plan ... tu bhi bhavviii hamare jalal se kam nahi ho 😆

11) Again I have mentioned earlier in my comment about kanika ... & again i will remove my bhadaas 😆 gadhi , bhais ki aankh kanika ki aisi ki taisi ... haaye haaye chullu bhar pani mein doob mare ye chudail 😡 ... last wale chapter mein jo hua ... usse kuch sikha hi nahi isne ... besharam behaya aurat ... fir se apna muh uthake jalal ke samne gayi ... aur jodha ke baare mein boora bol rahi hai ... iske itni himmat ...

accha hua jalal ne usse sabak sikhaya ... 👏 ... thank you bhaaviii tune hum sabke gusse ka bhadas nikala diya uske 2 daant ukhad ke 😆 ... wallah ...!! i am sooo happy for that ... maan toh kar raha hai poore UAE mein party de doon 🥳 iss khushi mein 🤣

12) even after laakh koshish of kanika ... jalal didnt budge from the trust on his beloved ... that made me go all gaga over jalal once again ... tu bhi na bhaavviii jalal ko itna cute banake meri jaan le rahi hai 😆 ... & the way jalal explained jodha when he saw both surya & jodha hugging ...was such a royal gesture ... truly in all the sense he proved again that he is a royal king ... 👏 ...

13) Hmmm now bhaavvii i am thinking about that vachan which jodha gave to jalal ... kuch toh hoga baad mein jab jalal kuch toh maangega jodha se ... waise jalal ka kutil dimag ko mein bhi ab samjhne lagi hoon 😆 ...

14) btw bhavviii, jalal ko itna kya chul machi thi ki sabke saamne ghoshna ki teerandazi competition ki ... lol jab haarega toh sab kuch utar jayega ... poore rajvanshi uske baare mein kya bolenge ... chup chap dono akele mein ye nahi kar sakte the ... bechara bharmal ko wapas ek attack 😆 ...

15) I loved the way mirza was flirting with sukanya ... shivani & surya getting jealous ... maza aa raha tha dono ke shakal dekh ke ... jalal & his naughtiness ki toh kitni bhi tareef karo toh kam hai ...

bhaavviii awesome chapter yaar ... superbly written ... as usual another HIT chapter from you ... this chapter was a complete entertainment package again just like the last chapter ... this update again had everything in detail ... & 12500 words 👏 seriously bhaavviii I take a bow for the time & hard work u put in to give us such an exemplary update🤗 ... Love you ❤️aur next update jaldi dena ... saath saathh RKG ko update mat bhoolna meri jaan 😭... love you 🤗... & & I put a full stop of my rant 😆

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#178

comment from princess saumya

Shahbhavini mam... thank u for the pm... and your chapter i have read...

it was mind blowing...👏

really hats off to u...

i mean what a great power of imagination u have...!!!!!!!

i really relished ur writings mam... u r wonderful piece of creativity...really mam...

i used to wait for ur updates impatiently...and i am speaking this truly!!!!!!!!!!! when u update ur chapters there comes 5000 watt smile on my face cos i really like ur chapters they create wonders over the writers...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MAM I LITERALLY BOW DOWN TO U FOR THIS WONDERFUL FF...

U R REALLY A FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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