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Posted: 11 years ago
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jodha akbar
Dear guys, i am fed up of our jodha akbar show's time pass and ruks drama. So i just thought to write a crazy story on akdha. Hope you like. No conection to history.

Chapter 1
Jodha has just completed her morning prayers and is just walking back to her work. It was the second day and feeling that atleast there are some people who are talking properly with her(hamida begum and salima begum). She was missing amer,her masa, bapusa, sukanya, shivani and dadisa mostly, as she was really special there. She was moving back to her room after tulsi prayers,moti and reva standing besides her. She hated most of the people there, they talk to her as if she is an alien there as if she was uninvited there. But she was getting sad as most people treat her so rudely as if she is an enemy of theies 😭 . But then some sweet voice was making her happy. There stood rahim waiting for her choti ammijaan to give him prasad. Jodha was really happy to have rahim with her. She gave him prasad and took him to the garden. Where they started playing, she was smiling and laughing as she was running to catch rahim. 😊

Up there on the veranda stood jalal who was looking at jodha who was smiling and laughing. He gave a smirk and came down where the two were playing. As he reached rahim gave him aadab and jodha stood besides rahim with a frown on her face. Rahim went back to his room seeing his mother calling him. Jalal : so begum jodha how is the morning here, better than amer na, i think you really feel better here.
Jodha : not at all shenshah, amer is far far better than your agra. People here are nice but people whom istay with mostly rude, not so stunning i expected the same, your badi ammi, your best friend ruks think they are most best people in the world, please tell them not dream so high, tell thme that there are many people better than them.
Saying this jodha went back to her chamber leaving jalal in his thoughts. Jalal thought this teekhi mirchi not same with everyone, she talks so nicely with ammijaan, salima begum and rahim but talks so badly with him.
Jalal (to himself ) : what is the problem with her. She is crazy. She totally differently frommhis other wives, they all die to talk to me and this jodha dosen't even talk to him.
Jalal leaves for diwan e khas and does some important matters. And then came back to his room where ruks was waiting was him to return. Jalal said : ruks do you need anything imp
Ruks : no jalal, cant i just come to talk to you.
Jalal: no you cn surely come.
Ruks: jalal what was jodha saying to yuo this morning i was just coming to when i saw jodha talking to you, what was she saying?
Jalal: nothing ruks nothing special ruks.



Guys thts for today. Hope you like you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting continue soon & do dm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I am new here so i dont know to dm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey dear...
Just a suggestion..change the Subject of your topic to OS( One shot )or SS (Short Story )and give it a beautiful name...😊
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Thanx radhika7 i will surely do it thanx for the suggesion
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amazing start
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interesting and continue soon... do pm😉
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Chapter 2
After all the arguments jodha was talking to about everything what happend btween jodha and jalal.
It was afternoon and everybody went to have lunch, as usual everybody was wairing for shehshah to first eat so everybody else could start. Jalal came and sat at his place. Ruks with all her atitude was going to feed shenshah herself. All the begums were jealous of her except jodha. This was unusual for ruks, all the begums are jealous of her but this jodha was showing her rajvanshi tever to ruks. This was fuming her. Hamid sensed what ruks was feeling like and to calm her hamida asked her to feed shenshah. As ruks was about to feed her jalal stoped her and asked jodha come and feed him. 😉 Jodha was shocked to see this and all the begums were as red as a tomato, ruks was shocked more than jodha was. Jodha sat near him and started to serve shenshah. Jalal said to jodha in less voice : begum jodha i am nott going to leave you so peacfull. I will make you know what i can do. You laid conditions which i will never break. But you didnt keep a condition that i will let you live so peacefully. Now you feel more worst. First only ruks and badi ammi were against you but mow all other begums will become envy of you. All the best! ! He started eating after he gave jodha his signature smirk. Hamida who knew jalal very nicely thought jlal wont leave my sweet jodha peaceful even for a day. She pitied for jodha and prayed to allah that soon everything to be fine, if they wont love each atleast they become friends. Ruks on the other hand was fuming in her room throwing everything she found. 😆

Everybody finished their lunch jalal was walking to ruks room and found the rooms state so bad and started laughing at her temper. Seeing this ruks said : first you gave my place to that new begum and now you are laughing at me. When did you change yourself jalal.
Jalal: no ruks there is nothing how you are thinking. I just asked her to sit there so that i could troble her and i was laughing because today i found that you are scared of a rajvanshi!! That unknown to me! !
Saying this jalal smiled on which all his begums would fall for him.
Ruks : really jalal you are with me. I also want to torcher her and crush her tever under my feet. I want her to know that her tever wont work here.
After their small chat jalal left her room and went to jodha s where she was frustreated about everything.
Seeing jalal come in her room she tried to ignore him. Jalal knew that she was just trying to but was fuming.
Jodha( in anger): shenshah i dont want to talk to you and dont pretend as if you didnt know. I had onf few begums as my friend and you even snatched them from now no begum is friend. Everybody is jealous of me just b'couse they think you are giving intrest in me. Please leave me alone. I HATE U FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART. She yelled so loudly that it made jalal angry
Jalal ( in anger ) : you are blaming me for this you yourself challeged me i told you not to underestimate me but u did and its not my fault. You think i married just b'cause you look beautiful. I accept that you look extremly beautiful that anybody can fall in love with you, but i dont have a heart so i won t love you. I hate you too. But i want to show how cruel i can be.
Jalal left her and went back to his room. Evening had already fallen. Outside the room someone was just getting sadder about this. This was hamida begum herself. Hamida begum came back to her room and was really very sad.
Hamid (to herself): why is this happening to jalal, is there no one who loves him more than anyone, is there no one who knows more than he knows himself, is there no one who gives him satisfaction of his own. Is there no one who can change him, no one who can understand his dreams his life his happiness.



Guys catch next chapter : jalal flirts wiht jodha : akdha nokjhok : things better than before not best but nice : akdha emotional moments. Please give me you reply this is my first story. Hope you like this. 😆 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was interesting and lovely...😊
Continue wanna read more...!!!!!!

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