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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys well u guyz kinda liked it so am continuing i guess hehe
luv ya 😊


Chapter 2
Jalal POV
All i do is stand there maybe if is stand there long enough i can stop this distance from happening and she will coming running in to my arms and press her lips to mine. I don't know how long it took for me to realize that isn't going to happen, after that incident I heard someone say ' How her tears aren't worth my cowardice act i cant help but think how true that statement actually was. Her eyes don't fill with disgust and hatred anymore now i see emptiness in her eyes those pair of eyes just like the ones i saw that night. she slowly breaks the hug then Moti and Salima went towards the group for a sec or two we both just stand there not daring to utter a word my feet cant help but move towards her as i do the group comes in between and gives her a tackle hug her , feet isn't on the ground anymore seeing this makes me laugh a little it flashes me a beautiful (memory starts)every time I saw her she would run up to me for a hug and i would lift her up in the air , she would giggle every time i do that and then one time i told her that am not going to let her come down she cupped my face and kissed my lips delicately . I was so shocked and surprised i loosened my grip from her waist , she took the chance and ran. (memory ends). a smile crept on my face , it feels odd that i stood out from the group hug suddenly my phone rings thank god i thought.
jalal: hello
voice on phone: Sir would you like to take a survey
jalal: cut the carp Surya
Surya: man what how did you know that jalal
jalal: i know your voice to well dude
Surya: well i will definitely get you next time thought anyways i had a surprise for you but I will tell you later tum neh mera mood karab karthiya
jalal: sorry for being smart ok then bye
surya: bye jalal
i turn back to see that all are sitting down in a small circle i go over to sit with them i sit opposite jodha i know that if a sit next to her she will hate me even more but sitting opposite has its advantages at least i can see her face. jodha's expression completely changes there's fear in her eyes but as soon as she realized that i observed her expression, right that moment her expression.changes into dead hatred .
Abdul: now that everyone is here what you guys wanna eat?
everyone replies pizza!
abdul: okay maan and jalal come with me
jalal: actually can I stay here
Maan: yea let the man stay here if he wants
Abdul: dude you just wanna drive his car don't you
Maan started making innocent faces at him makes everyone laugh!
Jalal: ok you can drive my car But if i see one scratch on it hmm lets just say we will meet you at the hospital
Maan: okay okay i wont do anything to it ( excitedly )
and they both take their leave
Moti: So are we
Jalal: where are you guys going?
Moi: somewhere important you men won't understand
Jalal: let me guess taking pics in the bathroom
Jodha , Salima and Akshay laugh at this statement
at least i was able to make her laugh even if that lasted for 1.5secs
Moti: shut up jalal
Moti grabs Salima and jodha as she was grabbing jodha by her hand jodha loses her balance and was about to fall when jalal caught her on time, they both have an eye lock it's been so long till they actually looked into each others eyes with affection jodha gets up half way by the support of jalal then she rudely jerks of jalal's hands off. jalal doesn't argue with this and steps back as she wanted him to.
jodha whispers to jalal
jodha: (whispering) don't you dare touch me again
jalal breaks in the inside
Moti: you ok jodha am so sorry tumhara ankle kaisa hai
jodha: hum tik hai moti , koi baat nahi accident tha nah at least you didn't hurt me purposely she said the last part to jalal.
jalal soul talk: jalal you deserve this , you deserve it all
Jalal: am sorry jodha ( jodha wasn't in a mood to listen)
jodha : (rolls her eyes)
and with that she leaves with her friends leaving him and akshay alone.
akshay: what just happened
Jalal: ( trying to change the subject) long story anyways tumhara love life miss moti ki saath kaise chaal ra
akshay: the hell jalal kya kaha tum neh aur pagal ho gaya kya
Jalal: nothing am sorry please don't hit me ( fakely covering his face)
akshay laughs and jalal fake laughs
Akshay: hey you wanna go an spy on them
they both agree and headed towards the high school bathroom and there they were clicking photos .
Akshay: they are mad i tell you, how about we give them a little scare .
Jalal: are you sure that's a good idea
Akshay: of course with this he takes out his mobile and his fingers goes towards the light switch
Akshay: 1,2, 3 go he whispers with that he dramatically turns of the lights ( pretty creepy actually i thought) then he plays a loud crawling noises, which scares the life out of them. Jodha was screaming to the core joined by Moti and salima they both run out unaware that jodha hasn't come out they both chase akshay.
Its then i realize Jodha has a fear with darkness i run like a madman towards the bathroom she didn't see me so she hugged me as tight as she can with this she calms down , it's been so long since i embrace her in to my arms forgetting what could happen when she realizes me .

precap: the group goes to nightclub and jodha meets someone

so there you go guys
appreciate your lovely comment!!
luv ya
aniya😃😃





Edited by aniya879 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
o my it was good yaar i liked it...
jaldi jaldi update karna...

AND SOON REVEAL THE PAST IF POSSIBLE.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: princess_saumya

o my it was good yaar i liked it...

jaldi jaldi update karna...

AND SOON REVEAL THE PAST IF POSSIBLE.

Hehe u liked it and I will definitely try to reveal it as fast a possible kk
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful update😊

continue soon and make it long next one
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😛

Originally posted by: niveasree

Wonderful update😊

continue soon and make it long next one

Thx yea next one I will make it extra long 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: marshi

Lovely ff pm me when.u update

Glad u liked it and I will update soon
( I hope so) hehe😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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interesting dear.. continue soon & add me in ur pm list...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

interesting dear.. continue soon & add me in ur pm list...

Thx a lot am still trying to figure out the flash back correctly though so might take me some time but no too long I promise 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aniya879

😛

Thx yea next one I will make it extra long 😆


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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing ff
plzz pm me
and update a long chapter soon 😃

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