You Only Live Twice-PariJat FF:Mod note pg6

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Hey.everyone!
Maybe you people haven't forgotten me as I was inactive for a very long time
..this is kind of my first work on PariJat..hope you guys like it!
Acha..Let me introduce myself..
I am Sheetal..Sheetal Rajput..Naam Toh Suna Hi Hoga..(haha)
Meet you at the bottom!
Here's the first chapter,Enjoy!
Sorry for typos..didn't proof read!

Chapter - 1
He rubbed his eyes as the alarm clicked,it was 6:00 a.m .. time to go,go for jogging!
By 6:10 .. he was in his track pants,sport shoes and t-shirt.He jogged on the lanes of his colony where he has lived for the past 15 years.
Meatpacking District,New York..hmm..He was born here.
This place has given him a lot but he always wanted to be in India.Ofcourse,He was an Indian.He jogged while he listened to some random "Hindi" music tracks..Bollywood..He has always loved it..The Hollywood movies..however he liked them too were never able to make a place as the Bolywood movies and stars always did.He jogged with almost nothing in his mind,
When he felt a tap on his shoulders.
He stopped jogging and took out the ear pieces from his ears
and turned around to see one of his schoolmate and neighbour standing before him.
"Oh! You?"said he.
"What was her name?Oh God! I forgot?!? Not again!" he thought trying to remember what her name was.
"Yeah!"She said in her extra sweet British accent while fluttering her eyes and continued..
"How are you,Rajat?"
He rolled his voice and replied "I am fine."
As soon as she was going to open her mouth again his mother came near them and asked him to get ready for school.
He thanked his mom a thousand times in his head and quietly followed her.
He was 15 years old.Dark brown..chocolaty eyes,bright glowing face,
perfect shape of lips and an amazing
Indian-British accent.
He had a nice physique too.
Thanks to one of his friend,Mac who was a gym instructor.
He lived here with his parents while he had one of his uncle with his family and his grandma in Delhi,India.
He never understood why all these girls turned pink while talking to him,he wasn't that handsome or was he?
There were only a few girls who would talk normally to him.But he would never think much about it.
As he was a BOLLYWOOD FAN,He was waiting for that special girl who would love him genuinely..There were lot many girls who loved his smile or his eyes or his complexion,or his four-packs..but there wasn't even a single one who loved him..genuinely.
But his Mom.. Mrs.Pramilla Tokas..
she would always want him to have a girlfriend.
"Achi ladki hai woh!"said she from the kitchen while kneading the dough for
his all time favourite 'Aloo Prantha'
"Kon?" he asked sinking on the sofa.
"Wahi..Teri friend..jisse tu baat kar raha tha."she said rather teased him.
"Mom,Please!"he said totally irritated and continued..
"Naam bhi nahi janta hun uska"
"Woh toh pata kar lenge.."She said.
"Mom,nahi! please! koi naam nahi pata karna!" he said standing up.
"..and I am going for shower." he siad while climbing up the stairs.
"Kya hoga mere bete ka..?!?" she mumbled in utter disappointment.
He took shower and wore his blue denims and black shirt and let the top button open,hung his guitar by his shoulder and sat in front of the study table.

{There is a window behind his bed and a study table besides his bed which is facing a window and through that window he could very clearly see the room of the house exactly opposite to theirs.All the houses in the colony are constructed in the same manner}

He put some of the books from the shelf into his bag and walked to the school with his bag and his guitar while listening to songs.
He entered the campus..South Hampstead High School..he was now in the corridor and there was again that hustle-bustle.
He walked to his locker..opened it and put his guitar in his locker and soon as he locked his locker and turned he saw a few girls surrounding him.

Basketball team captain,class topper and amazing dramatist..He was a famous and known personality of the school.

"Bro,the practice is in 2 hours,coach asked me to tell you" said one of them.
"Oh! Thanks,Ash! I would be there..see you later."He said and turned and left for class.

She was Ashley (Nickname-Ash) the captain of cheer leading team.
She was one of those girls who wouldn't go tounge twisted in front of him as they both shared a brother-sister relation and was his best friend's girlfriend.

Many girls in the cheer leading team had a crush on him except for her.
He went for his English class .. there were still 3 minutes for the bell to ring and for the class to start.
He entered the class.

"Hey Dude!"he said and hugged Daniel.
"Hey Rajat!"said Daniel hugging him back.
"R-a-j-a-t..It's Rajat!" said Rajat.
"That's what I spoke..R-a-j-a-t.." said Daniel quite offensively.

"12 saal ho gaye sath me..play school se mere saath hai abhi tak naam bhi dhang se nahi bolna ata" he said irritatedly.
"Oye! I Know how to take your name it's just that I like to irritate you..haha" He laughed while holding his stomach.
The bell rang and they sat on their seats..

{The link is here for the classroom : http://www.brocku.ca/information-technology/teaching/av/brock-university-s-crestron-co-3 }

This was like roz ka natak..from the last 10 years when Rajat would time and again pin point him to pronounce his name correctly.
Daniel (Nickname-Dan) and Rajat were the best of friends..they were like brothers.
The day went smoothly..It was lunch break now,and as usual he sat in the canteen playing guitar and singing an english song.
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Okay,so that's all for Chapter 1..please tell me if I should continue..because I am very sure for this one..It's going to be good..please review .. be it *tareef* or criticism..all is welcomed!
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This is going to be a long..very long ff.
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Wait for the PM as I will not update regularly!
Love you all
Sheetal!

INDEX
1.) Chapter -1 (Page-1)

2.) Chapter-2 (Page-4)
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