AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 65

Originally posted by: Pals2411

Originally posted by: Kritianya

nice one
pre cap is scary
please continue soon

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Hey dear, that was a really awesome update!

thanks dear...

Abdul finally got the reports for the DNA test! And they concluded that Jalal was Rico's father!😃

yap...wiping of the sweats...

But I must say, what Jalal felt for Jodha bordered on the obsessive. He wanted her so much that he was ready to kill any man who got close to her!😲 Even Abdul knew the reason why she had driven Jalal so crazy. He was ready to get hurt just to make her his. And he finally did! But how that happened remains to be seen😳!

haan yaar...yeh toh marne...maaarne pe utar aya...pagal ashiq kahika...

Jalal's happiness knew no bounds when he came to know that Rico was his son!😃 He now has something to look forward to in his otherwise dull life. He must have been terribly injured in that accident, which must have rendered him childless for the rest of his life.

yap ... that accident was terrible...you get to know about it later...

But that was after he spent a night with Jodha. But he did not know that one night would change their past, present and future forvever, for the better or worse!😃

yap...he met the acci only after meeting Jodha...Ek raat jo zindegi badal de...

Precap seems interesting. But why do I feel that Jalal has taken him?😕 Please update soon dear!

kitna sochti ho yaar

Your story is a little dark but I still love it and your writing style makes it an interesting read!😃 Please update soon!😳

yap its a bit dark...age ke 2-3 chapy thora jyada DARK hone wala hai...hope all bear with it...

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Hi dear ... loved your update ... & this jalal of your's sounds more passionate & angry than any lover in this world ...

haan yaar...ekdam MAD for jodha hai yeh jalal...

i can see it was a love at first sight for jalal but his way of approaching jodha was wrong ... no way he was a novice in these things & was pulled towards jodha like a drug ...

hmm...due to lack of experience in this field and...well...he is a man of different genre...he always got what he wished for...pehli bar refection mila hai...toh he got unnerved...

After reading the 9th chapter .. if my guesses are correct then our poor jalal must have ended up raping jodha & maybe in a state of alcohol i presume 😒 ... & then the accident & jodha running away from him & then the pregnancy ... & now the present parda faash of his son ... uff so much of thrill !!!

bapre...itna toh maine nehi socha...pagal

But whatever it is ... i just hope u'll unite jalal with jodha ofcourse with rico as well ...

are yeh toh hona hi hai...aaj ya kaal

I hope u'll not trouble my jalal for long enough ... he has gone through enough torture in these 4 years 😭...

but so does jodha...actually dono hi...

he yearns for jodha & for her love ... I hope he gets it ...

trust me he will...bas thora time lagega

& he get's it in the next chapter itself ...

chal hat

I hope even jodha understands his state & forgives him ...😭

lets see

Btw kindly PM when u update the next chapter ...😳

ok...i will

Originally posted by: RaniShanthappa

loved it... let them meet in next chapi.. do pm... love u🤗

Originally posted by: myviewprem

nice ff

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch