AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10 - Page 27

Originally posted by: spvd

part 7
awesome dear...
lovely...
so this is how they met...
and Jodha has vacated that place...
she came to know about Jalal visiting...
still Jalal hasnt understood that Rico is his son...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: baubles

Beautiful update Pri di...🤗

aww my love 🤗

Trust me..Jalal pe bohttt gussa aaya iss chapter me..esp when he forced himself on her, itna lust that couldn't even control himself!😡 Poor poor Jo...was so helpless, felt terrible for her!😭

So Jo vacated her house cos of Jalal..hope she gets a good place to go to..and plus Rico's school, her job..she needs all of this wherever she shifts to!😒

haan yaar...dont know how she will manage all these...

Abdul seems to have guessed the Jalal-Rico connection...interesting!😎 Can't wait for more..! Update soon!🤗

will update next week only😕

Originally posted by: justlovetv

Awesome update!😃

thanku love🤗

So, Jodha and Jalal do have a history. It is really dark with Jalal not only going crazy for her at first sight but he also broke his principle of touching a woman without her permission!😵

yeh toh ekdam bawra ho gaya😆

I must say that you wrote that scene really well. Even though it was supposed to cause a certain amount of disgust while reading, I must say that I did not feel anything of that sort while reading it! It was written really well!👏

really!!! PP faints...

Anyways, lets see whether Jalal manages to track Jodha down. Please update soon! Wanna see how this turns out and I wanna know what connection do Rico and Jalal have!😳

Awesome update and please update soon!😳

will try to update jaldi...dont think ho payega

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Awesome update 👏

Originally posted by: najma123

AWESOME!!!!!!

Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

Superb wonderful chapter Pri my love... 😃 I really hate Jalal for what he did to Jo🤢😡 [But LOVED the way you wrote that part😳]

main confused ho gaya kya reaction doon...well jallu ke kaan kichne padenge...and thanks for the bracket part😆

... The chap was very intense.. I still don't get what his desire is all about...

are yeh toh jalal ko bhi nehi pata...pehle use pata ho...tab ne hume pata hoga

he just wants to fulfill his strong desire...and Jo has got him insane to fulfill his desires cos her beauty is unmatchable. So, last mein, Jo left before Ja could reach to her. Whereas Abdul ko thoda thoda sab samajh aa raha hai😉...

ek hi toh samajhdar banda hai...

Lovely update pri... excellent writing..👏⭐️

thanks love🤗

Keep it coming!😃

Originally posted by: Parijatrocks

PP😡 was waiting for teaser ...tumne Dhoka diya

Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

SS padle darling😃