AKDHA FF: 'No Name To My Desire' THRD 2: Chap 7-10

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

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haan PP dont waste time update karde jaldi

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tabi and bhabya...main ofc me hoon

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Parijatrocks

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teek hai kab ofc khatm hoga bol...tab teaser likhde

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 11 years ago

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nice update, tks for the PM,

waiting for the next update & ur PM

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Deepa

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part 7
awesome dear...
lovely...
so this is how they met...
and Jodha has vacated that place...
she came to know about Jalal visiting...
still Jalal hasnt understood that Rico is his son...
cont soon dear...

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Soumya

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Beautiful update Pri di...🤗

Trust me..Jalal pe bohttt gussa aaya iss chapter me..esp when he forced himself on her, itna lust that couldn't even control himself!😡 Poor poor Jo...was so helpless, felt terrible for her!😭

So Jo vacated her house cos of Jalal..hope she gets a good place to go to..and plus Rico's school, her job..she needs all of this wherever she shifts to!😒

Abdul seems to have guessed the Jalal-Rico connection...interesting!😎 Can't wait for more..! Update soon!🤗

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Samanika

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome update!😃

So, Jodha and Jalal do have a history. It is really dark with Jalal not only going crazy for her at first sight but he also broke his principle of touching a woman without her permission!😵

I must say that you wrote that scene really well. Even though it was supposed to cause a certain amount of disgust while reading, I must say that I did not feel anything of that sort while reading it! It was written really well!👏

Anyways, lets see whether Jalal manages to track Jodha down. Please update soon! Wanna see how this turns out and I wanna know what connection do Rico and Jalal have!😳

Awesome update and please update soon!😳

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Parijatrocks

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Posted: 11 years ago

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PP good morning wednesday che

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Superb wonderful chapter Pri my love... 😃 I really hate Jalal for what he did to Jo🤢😡 [But LOVED the way you wrote that part😳] ... The chap was very intense.. I still don't get what his desire is all about... he just wants to fulfill his strong desire...and Jo has got him insane to fulfill his desires cos her beauty is unmatchable. So, last mein, Jo left before Ja could reach to her. Whereas Abdul ko thoda thoda sab samajh aa raha hai😉...

Lovely update pri... excellent writing..👏⭐️

Keep it coming!😃