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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123


I must thank YOU for commenting dearie... So happy you liked it. Next update will be next week. No earlier than that.🥱 I rushed through yesterday to complete it. No more now. All you guys are too much.😆


How can u stop at the cliffhanger and say we are too much?? 😆
Now for a week... Our minds will be thinking of all sort of scenario.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Woah... unexpectedly fast and unexpected twist.. 😲 Naaj.. you thrilled me with ur PM.. 😉 and my my.. what I get to see here, a drunken Jodha.. wow.. you finally made her confess "Because I don't actually hate him.." ☺️ beautiful Naaj.. 👏 so you deviated from serial line and brought in a new cute scene.. eagerly waiting to see his reaction.. 😆


Honestly, the line Because... I got it from Anu. Her post. Dahum. I forgot to tell her only. I deviated because, well it was the story and as I said earlier, there are only 3 more parts remaining... So. Thank you. It was fast honestly, because, I was really excited with all your replies... All of you expected Jalal or Rukaiya and all. And I was like, let me tell them who it was. That was a red herring.😆
So the more you guys keep guessing and playing about, sooner I will update. An awesome or nice or amazing isnt enough.😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kutty58


How can u stop at the cliffhanger and say we are too much?? 😆
Now for a week... Our minds will be thinking of all sort of scenario.. 😳

Keep thinking and keep POSTING all the scenarios possible. I will get really excited to tell you guys what the actual story is and type out like a jet train. Otherwis,e it is hard to motivate me.😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Anushka8722

Jodha Begum... !

He's my Shahenshah! Am loving Benazir track here.. in show also that time was just too good!.. way better than the crap they are showing now, nahi?😕 Anyways, show ko chodo.. let's talk about the update!😃
'Because I Don't Actually Hate Him!'- I toh love him!☺️ and chapter 7.. mashallah.. how beautiful it was.. from Jalal's outburst to Jodha's prasad.. everything was quintessentially written... how I love our writing di!👏
Plus, Benazir's realization that Jalal's using her to make his Khaas Begum Jealous!😳 I liked that, Benazir😉 Accha haan, Khaas begum se yaad aaya.. di Jalal referred to Jodha as Khaas Begum!☺️ I don't know why but am falling for your Jalal.. reminds me of those good old days- Jodha Akbar mein bhi kisi zamaane mein Jodha aur Akbar ki nok jhoks dikhate the...😭 But ye sab chodo, let's be happy...!😳
The last part grabbed my attention.. the line when she said- do you have the audacity to stop Khaas Begum Jodha.. I was like- woah!😲 Now this is what I want!Go for it Jodha Begum!👏⭐️
'Jodha Begum!' Shahenshah uttered that, to stop her..
then an intense confrontation will take place, where Jodha might probably explain her side of the story.. the happenings of that night.. that how she never mentioned in the letter that she wanted to spend the night with him in that sense.. and then... I don't know😆 writer toh aap ho!😳

Anu I forgot to credit you dear. The last line is yours from Part 8. I copied your dialogue and felt this was an amazing way to end it. Thanks dear. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
Very interesting chappy waiting for jalal"s reaction when he comes to know that jodha doesn't hate him. Plz update jaldi
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: anabella

Very interesting chappy waiting for jalal"s reaction when he comes to know that jodha doesn't hate him. Plz update jaldi


Thanks for reading dear. I will try.😛
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123


Honestly, the line Because... I got it from Anu. Her post. Dahum. I forgot to tell her only. I deviated because, well it was the story and as I said earlier, there are only 3 more parts remaining... So. Thank you. It was fast honestly, because, I was really excited with all your replies... All of you expected Jalal or Rukaiya and all. And I was like, let me tell them who it was. That was a red herring.😆
So the more you guys keep guessing and playing about, sooner I will update. An awesome or nice or amazing isnt enough.😉



Oh.. was that line from Anu.. I thought since it is the title you used it at a prompt place.. 😉 it blended beautifully into the flow.. yeah.. I thought its rukayya only to pull Jodha's leg.. but that was a pleasant surprise to see drunken Jodha.. and imagining Jalal as Moti 🤣
nasha is blissful sometimes.. 😆 and why do you say just 3 more parts.. I know how long your parts are.. 😛 I don't want this story to be wrapped up so soon.. yeh dil maange more.. 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: najma123


Thank you. Thanks a ton. Actually the romance in the face off is always more intense than romance.😉

True dear😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Najma🤗
what a sensational update re. I just loved it😳


She opened both her eyes. Two angry eyes were looking back at hers 👏

"Nice joke, Moti. You really think, I can't make out the difference between Shehenshah and you? He is so strong and muscular and you are so tiny like an ant in front of him. His voice is so husky that you can melt hearing his voice..."🤣 omg drunken jodha😆

"Because I Don't Actually Hate Him..." Jodha whispered slightly blushing.☺️

Tho small update, but it's just like an atom bomb dear. Loved it. Keep on update dear.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: hemakeerti



Oh.. was that line from Anu.. I thought since it is the title you used it at a prompt place.. 😉 it blended beautifully into the flow.. yeah.. I thought its rukayya only to pull Jodha's leg.. but that was a pleasant surprise to see drunken Jodha.. and imagining Jalal as Moti 🤣
nasha is blissful sometimes.. 😆 and why do you say just 3 more parts.. I know how long your parts are.. 😛 I don't want this story to be wrapped up so soon.. yeh dil maange more.. 😳


I know. Well, I am not sure whether they will be as short or as long. Depending on what I want to be add in the chapter. I don't want to be like the CVs unnecessarily stretching a story. This will have to end there. 😳
Not promising at all since I am not interested in the show and I have shifted to other Forums where I want to start writing, I may write another story... Later. If I get a brain wave. Don't be so disheartened. Oh. Rukaiya will feature sometime.😉

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