OS That one mistake

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Posted: 11 years ago
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This thought came in my mind if instead of what happend in show something like this happns

After jalal leaves jodhas hojra .jodha sit on ground and start thinking all scenes again.
shanshah is in so much anger today .I never saw him that angry.
I promise sujamal bhaisa that i wont reveal that i met him but now he knows everything but half .
and if some promise became reason of destruction that promise would be broke down.
I dont know why i keep silent when he was asking me.

when he was putting that serious allegation on me and my character.

I commit a mistake by hiding a truth but now ill tell him everything.
After that if he punish me ill tolerate that punishment but i have to pacify him.
Before he commit a sin i have to stop him
I bend down on my knee and ask forgivness
Ill tell him that i didnt do adultary

I met sujamal bhaisa .
she ran towards his hojra .outside his hojra maham is waiting and when she saw jodha is coming to meet him .she try to stop her but jodha wont stop


.she enters in his room and saw he is breaking all furniture of his room.one table in his hand and he is about to
throw it on ground suddenly he saw jodha standing infront of him and he stop and threw it on a side and turn his face.

Why you stop shanshah?

Hit me .I am the one according to you who did adultary .


why you came here jodha?


Just get out from my room .I dont want to listen anything on this topic.just leave me alone.


No shanshah you have to listen me.
I came here to ...


Shanshah that rajvanshi killed our soldiers and he is trying to run from jail an informer said in an anxious tone.


So this is your plan .you came here to distract me so that your lover escape from here but i wont leave him and you jalal said
and take his sword and ran towards jail

Shanshah please listen to me jodha ran behind him but he dont listen


Jalal wont believe you jodha begum.You tried but failed to pacify him .poor you i feel pity for you .

doubt

doubt break strongest bond and look your weak relatiob dont survive .Maham said sarcastically.

Jodha dont pay attention to her words and again ran towards the direction of jalal .


Shanshah please stop please listen to me once she yelled but he wont stops.


For god sake stop shanshah.
he wont stops



For my sake please stop shanshah and jalal stops at the point and turns i told you i dont want to see your face in my life .

why dont you spare me?


why creating a scene infront of my whole palace.


You make my life puzzled .




My life became a nightmare the moment you enters in my life.



jodha taken aback just say shanshah.
she returns to her hojra .his words ringing in her ears .Tears rolling from her eyes.
She wipes her tears and wrote one letter to ammijan one to salima begum with same content and tell moti to send it to them.


Pranam

I dont know how to say it but it is necessary to save shanshah 's life.On the day of Jashan my brother sujamal is not attacker.Attacker is someone belongs to this palace who joined hand with abul mali. I cant tell you who is culprit because i am unable to find him.Shanshah's life in danger please save his life and find culprit as soon as possible.I did a mistake and lost his trust so he wont believe me Cant disclose much about it might he became more angry .If he ask about me tell him i am not cheater .i just did a mistake. Please take care of him.




Jodha



After reading the letter both hamida and salima begum ran towards her room.

Outside jodhas room

salima begum you here and what is in your hand hamida enquire


Jodha begums wrote this letter for me ammijan salima handover the letter to hamida bano.

It is same letter she send to me.I think something is terribly wrong between jodha and jalal. we have to do something immidiately hamida said to salima.

They both enters in jodha's hojra and saw whole room is broken terribly .Its very difficult to move an inch in room and there is no trace of either jodha or jodha' s kanha.There was only a crying moti bai left behind in a corner.


Where is jodha and her kanha? salima enquire.


Jodha is here a while ago but when i returned after giving you letter.she was not here .I dont know her whereabouts moti replied.


Salima called guard to search jodha in whole palace but for their disappointment they unable to find her.


Ya allah what all this happens with my children.please show your mercy on my jodha and jalal a crying Hamida bano said looking towards sky.

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madhutanu thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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this must have happened in d show... instead of that fit for nothing letter...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: madhutanu

this must have happened in d show... instead of that fit for nothing letter...


thank you for liking my thoughts
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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is really good! Atleast here Jo tried to tell everything to Jalal...
Jalal's anger is justified..
Now jo has left after handing the letter to Salima and HB..
Lets see what happens next!
Update soon please..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally read it...its fab yaar...
really liked your idea...
very nice...
keep it up dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow...
Really loved your idea.
It is really fantastic...
Continue sooonish...
Do pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

This is really good! Atleast here Jo tried to tell everything to Jalal...

Jalal's anger is justified..

Now jo has left after handing the letter to Salima and HB..

Lets see what happens next!
Update soon please..!


thanks nancy
In the serial when jo goes to jalals room and return back without telling him on mahams suggestion i cant digest it i love the jodha who always do what she thinks is in favour of everyone which is right and for that she do everything but in this track cvs show her dumb and
us par bhi cvs ka man nahi bhara to wo bakwaas letter track dikhaya aur jodha jisko hum pasand karte hai wo apne pati k prano par sankat ya unkii hatya hote nahi dekh sakti par yahann ...
so express my thought through this os
i would like to see something like this.
thank you for supporting my idea
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part...
poor Jodha...
cont soon...
pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ppluvkuch

finally read it...its fab yaar...

really liked your idea...
very nice...
keep it up dear


thank you for appreciation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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superb OS ... Looved it

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