Jodha's Diary - Part 6 updated - Page 15

Originally posted by: Rasika29

Lovely writeups...
Love your writing style 😊

Originally posted by: sashashyam

It is too short, Kshiti. You needed far more for the narnaal episode and its aftermath, about her sending fruit to Jalal thru Rahim and especially the first meeting between them after he has recovered.

If you are, understandably, short of time, it is better to do one episode in detail rather than cover so much more, but in brief. It is a very interesting idea, this one of yours, and you should not shortchange yourself.

The reference to Jodha being afraid of Jalal fighting Pratap and camouflaging it is neat!

Shyamala Aunty

Thanks Shyamala Aunty.

Although I did not intended to write episode by episode entries, I will try to incorporate more details. Thank you for the suggestion. Really appreciate it. 😊

Love

Kshithi

Originally posted by: tamy267

Kshithi🤗

lovely! you know reading these entries Jalal looks more cute😆

Originally posted by: rima4ever

superb update

Originally posted by: ngayou

Lovely update, Kshithi. Kaash if they d shown onetenth of this as Jodha s self thought, I d have felt so much more sympathetic to her in those days. Continue the good work please, thanks 😳

Originally posted by: sw123

brilliant 👏

update soon

Originally posted by: spvd

part 6
nice part...
cont soon dear...

Originally posted by: sam_0506

Really good Kshiti. I've been reading these entries of yours. They are just fab👏

Hey, will you plz PM me next time you update? Would love to read it.

Originally posted by: Jaz713

She's so suspicious of his motives that it's almost comical. 😆 If only Jalal would pick up her diary and read it although I don't usually advocate that! 😆He would get a lot of his answers as to why she's always arguing with him and refusing to believe there is good in him.

Thanks for updating Kshithi!

Originally posted by: peepu

Plz add me to your pm list😊