do u like poems

I have created this three shayaries
on akdha's current situation [:)]
hope u like it [:D]

This is for jodha
[B]ek galatfehfehmi judai ki vajah ban gayi
palkonke khwab bhikharke chur huye
dilke her jakhm dard-e-nishani ban gayi
phir bhi hum us ek vaade se majbur huye
hamari khamoshi hamari jeenakari(bewafai) banti gayi
aur wo her gunaah karke bhi bekasoor huye
phir bhi hum unse koi shikwa nhi
gila to bas apne taqdeer se hai
muqadder me hi likhi thi kuch pal dastaan
Usi dard-e-dastaan ke sath hum apse dur huye[/B]

(This is fr jalal)
[B]kabhi socha na tha ki ye kaisi pyaas hai
aaj jana judai me dil kitna udaas hai
Pal pal her lamha tere didar ki aas hai
Tu bichar k b ho meri
Me ujarr k b hu tera
Tum jism se kitane b door ho jaan-e-man
par dil se tu hamesha paas hai[/B]

This is fr both ja n jo
[B]jodha akbar wo dard-e-kahani hai
Jise sunker aaya her kisi k aankh me pani hai
Aaj dharti bheegi hai
Shayd phalak roya hai unki judai me
aaj phulonper bhi os pde hai
Shayd chand roya hai unki tanhai me[/B]

Hope u liked n u wont bored
Plz let me know your feedback
Nd if u like to write shyris
Den plz do sum shyries on akdhas crrent stuation [:D]

lovely shayaris!! i cannot even write one line of any kind of poetry!

Originally posted by: ashpat

lovely shayaris!! i cannot even write one line of any kind of poetry!

btw, u wrote shayari for bhavini's story too? i loved it

oh thans 😃
Actually i used to write shyries fr sum webstites
Nd yaah i'd wrote sum poem fr her story

Originally posted by: taaniroyal

nyce poem

Thanks 😊

Originally posted by: rima4ever

nice poem

Thanks 😃

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Manisha... Omg... Superb!!!! Yaar U are amazing... I love love love shayari... Next time can u please pm me of your post...

Ooow thank u 😃
As u wish😉

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

So beautifully written dear ^^💔😭I would like to write one😭😭but I am not able to find beautiful and dreamy ensnaring words as yoursWill try to write one later and you will see how crappy . . .🤣🤣

Thanks fr ur cmment
Waiting fr ur shyri 🤗

Originally posted by: priyanischal

nyc

thanks 😃
Do u like shaheer sheik?
I like him too... 😛