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Originally posted by: jaskaran.kaur08
Yaar di its really amazing... the chapter is fabulous... i love your jodha but dont u think she has become very egoistic.. more than jalal...In this story Jodha's character is way strong... Jalal loves her for her character... he loves her attitude... he doesn't like it but he love it at the same time... Aur Jodha kaha egoistic hai...bichari ne khaha Jalal ka insult kiya hai... wo bade pyar se puri respect ke sath Jalal ko yaad dilate hai ki vo ek dasi hai... so us me vo kaha egoistic hui... She told him already that she hated Mughal and Jalal from her childhood... she said it without any fear... Wo ego nahi par her she opened up to him ... She is giving him warning not to fall for her but I think Jalal hi kuch jyada lattu ho gaya hai uske piche...😆 use Sab Jagah Radha hi dikhti hai... He has lost his control over his heart and even mind... heheheh usme Radha ka kya kasoor.😆thank god he is changing feeling towards her... i want jodha to fall in love with him soon... or i love the last part.. whisper and blush... woh kissed vohi kyu khatam ho gayi.. i wanted that they get lost in the moment but...ðŸ˜ðŸ˜... or woh drink karke jab room mein gaya tha .. tab to kuch ho jata ..yes Jalal is changing par... Radha ka kya... Jitna Radha use door jayegi Jalal utna hi uski aur khichega... Radha is getting attract towards him...little by little...but when something big will happen she will fall in for him...koi baat nai.. hum is kuch ka intazaar apke dusre ff mein karenge... plss woh jaldi update karna.. uske liye to main bilkul wait nai kar sakti...heheh bilkul wait nahi kar sakti omg... I will soon start writing other wise tere pm vese already ho gaye hai... aur jyada ayenge😆
And ruqaiya got a lesson atleast here in this ff... kyonki show mein to koi umeed hi nai hai...heheh Mere dil ki tamana puri hui... is story me Ruku ka haal bura karne vali hu😆 usko mamooli dasi se problem hogiupdate soon dear
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