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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#501

Originally posted by: hely
the chappy was amazing...👏full of emotions..
jalal's care were shown with brilliance...
no words 4 ur writting
he really cares jo...i like whn jalal scold ..😳

Meri biwi ko chappy acha laga... Me too happy😃 Jalal scold Radha... or Ruku... which one U like? lol... Yes he does care for her a lot...

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#502

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni
Bhaviii 🤗 Itni lambi update ... Kitni pappi Aur jhappi doon ...?? Bata do ... 🤗❤️

Muje kam se kam das zuppi chahiye🤗

I am going crazzyyy , this story is really different ... My god ... Ye jodha aur jalal mujhe pagal kar rahe hai ... I love them sooo much ... Jalal ko kabhi pata chalega ki ye Radha bandhi nahi princess hai karke ...

Jab use pata chalega to vo khus hone ki jagah sochega ki vo yaha dasi banke kyu aai hai... Use pata chalega to doubt karega na use pe... thodi na usko zuppi dega... AA gale lag ja mere dushamn😆

N I hope that time Radha should be unaware ki jalal ko pata chal gaya that she is a princess ... Yaar bhaviii Kitna Maza aayega ...

hope kar Jalal ko pata na chale...Varna bahot bada panga hoga... pehle un dono ko

Btw I hope Hamida ka sapna bahaut jald sach ho jaye ... !!!!

me too... Hey Varsha i have many things planned ... Uske sapne sach hone me thodi deri hai😆

I loved each n every convo ... Be it rahim - radha , Hamida - Radha ... N my most favorite jalal- radha 🤗 N I am loving the way jalal is changing ... But I don't see Radha changing 😔 Her misconceptions about jalal ... Ab ek hindu bandhi ke liye law kaise badlega bolo ... ??? Impossible na ... I feel, Radha bhi kuch zyada expect kar rahi hai ...

Bichare Radha ne kaha kuch expect hi kiya hai😆 Vo bas fast karke Jallu ko rula rahi hai...😆 Par she is right too... She has given vachan to Salima so she can't leave palace and without pooja She can't eat or drink anything... She request but Jallu is stubborn😃

Lekin I know jalal he will not allow Radha to go from the palace ... I think jalal will change the law

He can't see Jodha leaving palace... he is in dilema... dharam sankat me hai... vo law change karega to ... everyone in the palace will know... that Jalal bend down for Jodha... and If he doesn't he will loose her... Jodha Vese kafi shani hai...😆

... Bhaviii sword fighting Karaogi ki nahi ... Jallu Aur jodha ke beech ... ???

Not Just Sword ... Many other fight will happen between them too😆 They are just coming close to each other little by little... they both are getting comfortable with eachother...

Jalal meri jaan Tabassum the painter ko bulao ... Radha ka painting karao ... Tab tumhe pata chalega ki Radha ek shehzadi hai ... 😆 Nahi toh jodha tumhe ullu banati rahegi ...

Jodha came with full proof plan... It is going to be tuff for him to find... In this case Jalal has not even heard about Amer princess...

Lambi lambi update ke liye lamba lamba jhappi 🤗🤗🤗

Thank U so much sweetu... 🤗🤗🤗

Yaar muje lagta hai yeh story sab ko pasand nahi aa rahi... every chapter pe like cum ho rahe hai... par Yaar thank U for your encouragement...😃

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JalalLovesJodha

@JalalLovesJodha

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#503

I loved everything in this chapter. I will add more detail soon. thank u for your email and long update

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ash

@ashpat

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#504

u're welcome Bhavini! love u 2!!

My internet has been on and off since I talked to u.

I know we discussed the chapters but I did not like always told u what i liked most so I can leave it in comments.

As always there are so many things happening in each update that one does not know where to start and stop and sometimes forget to comment one couple of things.

First of all, I really liked how Radha is reflecting on Jalal and his characteristics. It is always nice when people reflect back on their preconceived notions. Second, I liked Jalal getting lost in Radha when she was praying and also how he learnt to take aarti but at same time he became Shahenshah next minute when she started leaving for pooja. I understand Jalal's POV but I also get Radha's pov too. Because I don't eat or drink unless I pray either.One thing I loved about Radha in this argument was she did not try to show Jalal that she is doing ehsaan on him bec rahim is attached to her now. I mean she could have left the job and followed her rituals and not fast but she stayed for vachan and also for her love towards Rahim. This vachan was not going to benefit her but Rahim and Jalal/salima. Rahim is not related to Radha at all by blood but it's great to see how far can she go for vachan which was for rahim who she knows now just sincle couple of days. I loved that about her.Third, Jalal's reflecting on her thoughts and his conflict regarding Radha and I also liked that he mentioned how he knows MA and Ruq does wrong things so it means he knows it and ignores it which is not good but at least he si clever enought to know. I liked how HB handled Jalal during breakfast. she was not pushing him but making him think on his own and let him take decision. HB is very impressed with radha. bechaari sapne dekhne lagi hai jab ki Radha does not like Jalal at all. Ruq is clever too she is making Radha do work and punish her by making her mop and she can do that bec she is harem0in charge, bechhari how will rADHA do all this work when she has not ate or drank. Thank god, Jalal came and saved her cleverly. He seems to start caring for her and liking her. Even Radha told him about Ruq and she understood why he did this. I really like this smart Jalal who knows his so called best frd ruq and her tricks. I love LOVE rahim-radha and also rahim-jalal. They are adorable with each other. rahim always brightens my mood. I liked radha and jalal's argument- they both were right in their place and how HB pacified rahim too. Omg, how can Ruq be this mean- I am so happy and relieved Jalal yelled at her and showed how much better radha being as bandhi is better than ruq even as begum. Jalal knows how to put ruq in her place and not let her dance on his head. i wish jalal in the show was like this too with ruq when needed. HB and Radha seemed like mother-daughter duo- they way they were talking. gosh, this radha is impressive. she rejected kings'propsoal too and wants to marry who is stronger than her and loves her only and not have sautan. HB ke sapne chur chur ho gaye...Is surya bhaan really coming to meet her there- then how would he feel to c her working as bandhi. I loved how Jalal tricked radha to touch him- naughty jalal. Rahim is so cute and love Jalal so much and defensive of Jalal. The story of Pari was really nice and how Jalal consoled radha afterwards and the dialogue between them where he told her about pain in her eyes and radha was so shocked to know how he understood her but also admire her guts as bandi to tell the shahenshah that she hates him.

wow- 10,000 words?????? I am shocked. Man, we will get update after 15 days- that's a long wait...but try to update soon.

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lourel24

@lourel24

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#505

super duper awesome.loved various parts.hamida n jodha convo was awesome.she has started visualizing her as her bahu n her internal talk where he says jalal how difficult it gonna be for him to win her was bang on.U have weaved the story of jallad n pari perfectly.It didn't felt anywhere to be imposed.jodha's breakdown,jalal's restlessness in seeing her in pain n her last word that she wud never forgive jallad wud deginately strike jalal.Their sweet moments where he called her as my angry tigress "was also nice.so,overall samajlo na yaar sabkuch bohot acha tha.

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PBDcrazy

@PBDcrazy

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#506

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Muje kam se kam das zuppi chahiye🤗
( Ye le bhaviii 10 kyun infinite pappi n jhappi ... for u ...🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗 )

Jab use pata chalega to vo khus hone ki jagah sochega ki vo yaha dasi banke kyu aai hai... Use pata chalega to doubt karega na use pe... thodi na usko zuppi dega... AA gale lag ja mere dushamn😆
( Haan lekin atleast woh usko mahal ke bahar nahi chodega na ... he'll keep her in palace & may be marry her even though he knows she hates him ... shaadi ke baad bhi fatake futenge 😆)

hope kar Jalal ko pata na chale...Varna bahot bada panga hoga... pehle un dono ko
(mein toh hope kar rahi hoon ki jalal ko pata chale , aur jaldi se shaadi karke harem mein rakh le ... fir iss jangli billi ko sudhare 😆 aur khud bhi sudhare 😃)

me too... Hey Varsha i have many things planned ... Uske sapne sach hone me thodi deri hai😆 (Bhavii tu toh surprise ki mallika hai ... no doubt about that ... pata nahi tere dimag mein kya khichdi pak rahi hain ... jo bhi hai ... end of the day khichdi acchi serve honi chahiye 😆)

Bichare Radha ne kaha kuch expect hi kiya hai😆 Vo bas fast karke Jallu ko rula rahi hai...😆 Par she is right too... She has given vachan to Salima so she can't leave palace and without pooja She can't eat or drink anything... She request but Jallu is stubborn😃
(Na chate hue bhi teri ye radha indirectly bahut kuch expect kar rahi hai ... lekin jab mahal ke kuch kayde hain toh ek bandi ke liye kaise change karega , if she was a wedded queen n then if she would have been stubborn fir baat kuch aur hi thi ... tab jallu kayda badal deta ... thare jodha ke waaste 😃 , bechara mera jallu 😭)

He can't see Jodha leaving palace... he is in dilema... dharam sankat me hai... vo law change karega to ... everyone in the palace will know... that Jalal bend down for Jodha... and If he doesn't he will loose her... Jodha Vese kafi shani hai...😆
(Hmm ... uss bechare ko dharam sankat mein tumne hi daala hai ... dusht kahin ki 😆 ... jodha ko jaane mat do ... dono ke beech pyaar hone do ... beech beech mein thoda SR bhi deti raho 😆 waise bhavii the way u write jallu getting close & locking jodha near the wall , UFF ... i can feel the intensity here by just reading ...😆)

Not Just Sword ... Many other fight will happen between them too😆 They are just coming close to each other little by little... they both are getting comfortable with eachother... ( haan ... aur zyada comfortable hona chaiye ... baaki fights ke saath saath bistar pe bhi yudh hona chaiye 😆 woh bhi wild yudh 🤣 samjhi ki nahi 😉)

Jodha came with full proof plan... It is going to be tuff for him to find... In this case Jalal has not even heard about Amer princess...
(Kabhi sunega ...?? jaldi sunwao ... ameri mirchi kitni din tikhi bani rahegi ... thoda thanda karao usko ...😆)

Thank U so much sweetu... 🤗🤗🤗

Yaar muje lagta hai yeh story sab ko pasand nahi aa rahi... every chapter pe like cum ho rahe hai... par Yaar thank U for your encouragement...😃
(Awweee bhaviii thank u kisliye ...??? Thank u toh mujhe bolna chaiye ... tu itni achhi acchi lambi lambi update jo deti ho ... 🤗🤗 mera dil khush ho jata hai ... btw kyun re bhaviii aisa bol rahi ho ... mere liye toh ye story bada hi interesting jaa raha hai ... baki logon ka pata nahi ... but this story REALLY is very different & interesting ... sacchi mein ... meri kasam ... tu baki ki chinta mat kar ... atleast tumhare loyal reader's ke baare mein socho zara 😭 we love your writing bhavii ...⭐️🤗 kindly continue for us ... ppllljjj 😳dont get disheartened , we all love you & your writing a lott )🤗

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alinakhan

@RupRavfever

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#507

Omggg

Lovvveddd

Loved , n loved d update👏👏👏

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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#508

Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#509

Res. .
Ye kaun si 1000vi res hai meri bhavu. .
Mai soch ri hu ab res ke jagah speachless likhna start kar du. .
:D

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#510

Kisko story pasand ni aa ri * standing holding AK47 aiming*. .abe chinta na kar yar. .ek br PC se online aane de. .khud b khud ek like badh jayegi. .tu kahe to 12-15 fake ID bna lu. .abe its damn unique n diffrnt. .m loving it. .bt is it hate or love wil lwys remain my 1st fav. .cnt get over akdha there . .tht is so close to my heart :-)

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