FF: Desert Rose (Chapter 7, Pg 35) 11/07 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wooow waooow waooow ... whatta a chapter it was !!!! breathtaking description ... i wonder who is in the hut ..?? i sincerely hope it is jodha 😉 btw one question ... did u add this fictitious character moinuddin as jalal's brother ??? & is moinuddin still the shehensha or he is dead ??? i am sorry to ask this question , but i am bit confused here ...
But all in all i totally loved it ... will be waiting eagerly for ur next update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshaakulkarni

Wooow waooow waooow ... whatta a chapter it was !!!! breathtaking description ... i wonder who is in the hut ..?? i sincerely hope it is jodha 😉 btw one question ... did u add this fictitious character moinuddin as jalal's brother ??? & is moinuddin still the shehensha or he is dead ??? i am sorry to ask this question , but i am bit confused here ...

But all in all i totally loved it ... will be waiting eagerly for ur next update 😃

Thank you so much!! 😃 So happy you loved this chapter!! Yay me! Haha, you will have to wait and see regarding the occupant of the hut but your guess is as good as mine 😛
And yes, Moinuddin is a fictitious character added because I wanted to put Jalal in a jungle and a King leaving his duties to cavort there sounds very unreal. The Prologue is a month later, and chapter one starts from a month back. If you remember, I wrote of Jalal as the Shahenshah in the prologue while he is a prince in Chapter Two. So, yes, Moinuddin dies within the month, making Jalal emperor. The story has yet to catch up with the prologue, so you will be seeing Moinuddin in later chapters till his death.

Hope that cleared the confusion. Tbh, I am quite excited about writing the next chapter. Mainly cuz my chapters are never planned. So even I dunno what is going to happen 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
Thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Very nice description...I hope he finds Jodha in there...Cannot wait for the next one...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
Wow. What a chapter...
Its Joha who is in the hut, right?

Please update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Lovely chapter...waiting for next episode d Ja Jo meetup 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
Awesome update 👏.

So jalal is still a Prince?
I guess he is gonna find jo inside hut...

Waiting eagerly for next update 😃. Plz Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gurl-enchanted

Thank you so much!! 😃 So happy you loved this chapter!! Yay me! Haha, you will have to wait and see regarding the occupant of the hut but your guess is as good as mine 😛

And yes, Moinuddin is a fictitious character added because I wanted to put Jalal in a jungle and a King leaving his duties to cavort there sounds very unreal. The Prologue is a month later, and chapter one starts from a month back. If you remember, I wrote of Jalal as the Shahenshah in the prologue while he is a prince in Chapter Two. So, yes, Moinuddin dies within the month, making Jalal emperor. The story has yet to catch up with the prologue, so you will be seeing Moinuddin in later chapters till his death.

Hope that cleared the confusion. Tbh, I am quite excited about writing the next chapter. Mainly cuz my chapters are never planned. So even I dunno what is going to happen 😃


Awwee ... thanks for clearing my confusion dear 😛 ... OMG so the chapter 2 is a month's back story ...awesome this story is getting intriguing !!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
The second chapter was beautiful. My Jalal 😳 . So he is still a prince. I hope its Jodha in the hut.
Can't wait for the next chapter. Pls update soon.
I love the name "Desert Rose "
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
part 2
nice part...
interesting...
cont soon dear...

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