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Posted: 11 years ago
Here goes, Lashykanna, clocking in at 3:36 pm sharp. If you have managed to fill at least a couple of tanks by now with your ashru, you might like to ship them to Anne, for she tells me they are having a water shortage in KL. I am sure they have a desalination plant, for which your contribution will come in very handy😉.

NB:By the way, how does your worse half cope with this kind of emotional blackmail, which I am sure, going by personal experience, that you must be unleashing on him at every possible opportunity!😉

Jokes apart, your comments are, as usual, better than my original. Honestly. My additional comments are in blue.

Shyamala Periamma


@Aunty
🤗 this has to be my favourite amongst the masterful write ups of yours.. undoubtedly the favourite! This is a curious refrain among so many of you, my dearest girl, so much so that I am convinced it is the material more than me. I was really worried about this post, which took 4 hours to type and edit, plus one hour of watching those 11:56 minutes 5 times to soak it all in. And yet I did not know how it was going to come out, far more than I usually do, and in the end, it was not much like what I had originally planned. Anyhow, it was a relief when it was done, and a greater relief when you all liked it so much.

Or about the Keystone Kops sequence of Dilawar-Sujamal running away from the Agra palace soldiery, with his khwaja sera costume coming apart, piece by piece, in a kind of bizarre strip tease😉, while he flails about with his talwar like a farmer scything hay, laying low one unfortunate Mughal soldier with each sweep.

😆😆 It was quite farcical, that show of the invincible Sujamal. Wonder how anyone can admire it so profusely.

Or about the bizarre precap, clearly intended to make Sujamal seem to be one up on Jalal, since the bodies of the soldiers - had been deliberately stacked up to look a taller pile than the similar one shown when Jalal was attacked by Suryabhan's soldiers when he was escaping from Amer with the badly wounded Abdul.

The precap, complete with Jalal sporting his usual furious look, coupled with the total ineffectiveness of his whole band of courtiers, succeeded in bringing the image of the Mughals down to rock bottom.

You know aunty... I actually loved that scene..it was shown so well.. a man depicting anger and helplessness... 😳 No, my dear, I have not made myself clear. His charging up and down the Diwan-e-Khas was acceptable - where was Atgah Khan then? - though there was no logic in yelling at all of them equally, when most had nothing to do with the harem, which was the sole centre of action, for which he should have cornered his Badiammi more sharply than he did. But what was not nice at all was his charging off himself, presumably after hearing that Sujamal has done an Abul Mali, shamsheer held aloft, only to be brought up short and left staring at that pyramid of corpses.

It also, with obvious intent, simultaneously sought to elevate Sujamal to near mythic status as the swordsman No. 1 in all of Hindustan.

Apparenlty, he was a master swordsman and his warrior skills so astute that Akbar wanted to have him enrolled in his army ...😊 My dear, if Jalal wanted to enroll someone in the Mughal army,that need not mean that he was the best there was. I am sure Sujamal was very good as a warrior, but so were many others too. This kind of buildup for him is excessive, plus the chap's harem idea was so harum(pun intended) scarum that it was clear that his upper storey is to let. The long, lingering farewell look he gave Jodha in front of a livid Jalal confirmed this.

How on earth did he think he was going to unearth the conspirator?By eavesdropping on harem gossip?) by the worse folly of exposing his sister to the deepest disgrace, and punishment, by not releasing her from the vachan even when Jalal had found them together in her hoojra, will be totally forgotten.

Yup... it made not an iota of sense.. !

As for me, his bidding farewell to Jodha with a long, soulful look(which must have stoked Jalal's fury by another 100 degrees), and then letting her face the music from her murderously angry husband, was enough to negate any admiration of his eventual sacrifice.

I have no soft corner for him either...when we had no soft corner for Jalal during the Tasneem track (noble intentions, silly behaviour) then, why for this dude? 😆 It is not just silly, Lashy, it was murderous folly on his part as far as what he let Jodha in for. WHAT did he think Jalal would do to Jodha if he was not told that the intruder was her brother? He could easily have killed her on the spot.

OTT? Of course!: And before we go any further, let me dispose of the carping remarks that Jalal was over the top on Friday. Of course he was over the top! He had to be.

Those carping about him for being OTT would have been delighted with Jodha, who was decidedly UTT (under the top).

I agree I found Jalal's reactions too Over the top and Jodha's too downplayed... 😕 Yes. but Jalal HAD to be over the top. It was not, as I wrote elsewhere on this thread, a Victorian tea party, it was an incendiary situation straight out of A Lion in Winter, the screen version with Peter O'Toole and Katharine Hepburn, minus Kate, of course. Jodha was a shunya.

Symbiotic suffering:To revert, this was a performance that, more than ever before with Rajat as Jalal, erased the dividing line between the actor and the character, but far more difficult and thus far rarer, between the character and the viewers as well. He drew us in with him into the vortex of agony, of despair, of bitter self-contempt, of the searing hurt of the worst betrayal he could ever have suffered, that had him in its grip. And this for nearly 12 straight minutes of screen time. Which, in cinema, is an eternity.

Yes, that's true.. it must have taken an immense amount of energy and dedication from him to complete those twelve minutes .
Also talent and technique. It was a very, very tough scene from the point of view of the actor's craft, his technique. He had to maintain the emotional pitch, raise and lower it by turns, like a sine curve, modulate his voice to match, and remember all those lines perfectly, for the slightest hesitation would have called for a retake from the beginning, to maintain the emotional continuity. The boy can do anything.

The only other such scene I can remember was that of Mohit Raina as Jalandhar in DKD Mahadev, when he was holding his dead wife in his arms, talking to her and refusing to acknowledge that she was no more, and then again as he sits by the side of her burnt out pyre, running his hand thru the cold ashes and once again talking to her. That was at the other end of the OTT scale, very soft, but it gave me goose pimples.

But it was not this kind of one take 12 minute monologue, with a blank-faced woman who gave him nothing to play off. It is but rarely that one gets to see anything like this onscreen. We were very lucky. And if he had had an even halfway good co-actor, the scene would have been so much better. As it was, as I wrote, I wanted to pick him up, as one does with a little boy who hurts himself, and make him well again.

We suffer with him as he mocks himself, again and again, pounding his chest with bitter mirthless laughter, Kitne nasamjh the hum, kitne bewakoof!

Yes...that was painful! The fact that the realization of a presence of a 'heart' brought with it such pain..brought with it such trauma... brought with it an 'arm-twisting' scenario where he felt the need and the urge to still give her a chance and believe her.. where he felt compelled to want to hear from her that she was innocent - for his sanity, if not for her safety! Yes, my dear, that is just it, for his sanity. He is going mad with anger and the sense of having been betrayed, and so he is almost willing her to say that no, she is not guilty of betraying him, she has not committed zinakari. Else, why would he ask her that first question about whether she knew the man in her rooms?

We too hold our breath as he almost begs Jodha Begum, citing the faith he had had that she could do no wrong, the almost unbelievable patience he had shown, hoping that one day, she would come to him, trust him and tell him the truth.

Aunty forget husband - even a girlfriend wouldn't put up with her boyfriend doing any such thing today...its got nothing to do with shehenshah or modern man.. 😆Try telling that to the Honourable Women!

He loves Jodha Begum beyond all reason, and the one desperate desire of his heart is to somehow, anyhow, convince himself, despite all appearances to the contrary, that she is as he had believed her to be, paaksaaf, not an adulteress who would invite her lover to her own rooms a few steps away from where her husband was, under the same roof.

Exactly!

Bitter love: He does not even hesitate, so desperate is he, to expose the deepest,the most sensitive secret of his heart: his love for her. This is not the stumbling, shy, gentle confession of the night of the dhakka. That was from a young man new to love, who wanted to share the wonder, the sheer loveliness of his unfamiliar jazbaat with his beloved.

😭

This is distilled gall, the corrosive self-contempt of a man deeply ashamed of his weakness for a Delilah, who, he now believes, had entered his life only to destroy him by condemning him to a lifetime of agony:

Kitne nasamajh the hum, hazaron begumat ke malik, Mughal sultanat ke Shahenshah, jise Zille-Ilahi kehte hain, izzat uske saamne jhukti hai, aur wo jhuka bhi to aapke saamne, usne izzat bakshi bhi to aapko! Aut aapne usi ko dhoka dediya?

👏

As I listened to Rajat's Jalal lacerate himself again and again with such bitter self-contempt, such was the mesmerizing power of his performance that I felt as if a much loved child had fallen and hurt himself beyond recall. That I needed, somehow, anyhow, to pick him up and make him well again.

Awww aunty🤗

Death from a thousand cuts: As he finally accuses her openly of being an adulteress, who had not let him, her legally wedded husband, come near her, touch her, establish a relationship with her, love her, and had pushed him away with a dhakkabut had invited a gair mard into her rooms.

I could see that in all this, it was not Jodha who was suffering the most, for despite the horrendous shock of the accusation, she was sustained by the certitude of her innocence. It was Jalal, who was being subjected to death from a thousand cuts, self-inflicted, true, but deepening and bleeding all the more with every instant of Jodha's silence that could, to him, mean only one thing, her black guilt.

It was as if a kaleidoscope had been turned upside down in his mind. Jodha's image there, as the paaksaaf, loyal, infinitely courageous hunar ki khaan he had come to love, was reversed in an instant. Now everything she had ever done, per se and for him, was seen as if thru a distorting mirror, and the image was ugly, very ugly.

I was consumed with a sense of helplessness. And a sense of inchoate rage against the folly of the woman who sat there watching all this, seeing her lion of a husband being reduced to a self-hating wreck, with his soul poisoned by the conviction that he had given his heart at long last, but to whom

Beautifully penned Aunty.. beautifully written.. your anguish is evident!👏 Yes, I literally hated her for it.

She could have turned the kaleidoscope back with an anguished protest: Hum paaksaaf hain, Shahenshah, aap hum par vishwas karein. Ek aakhri baar vishwas karein!Humne aapse koyi vishwasghaat nahin kiya. Hum abhi vachan ke bandhe hain, Shahenshah, par hum aapko kabhi dhoka nahin de sakte!

I know, right. 😕

And then which woman would let herself be accused of adultery - the worst insult imaginable, and that too from her own husband - without saying a word in her own defence? Surely this mistress of sophistry could have found some way out, some trick of language to keep her idiotic vachan and still prevent her husband from slipping into this morass of bitter anguish?


So he threatens her with the most cruel death possible for the man he takes to be her paramour, and that too in front of her ; his face alight with near hatred as he asserts Humein yakeen hai ki aap royengi, aapko dard hoga. The savagery of the threat being lost in the almost pleading demand that followed Isliye keh rahein hai, jawaab dijiye humein!JAWAAB DIJIYE!!!

I swear...OMG... reading this brought it all back!

But it does not work, and his hand is cut as he smashes it agains the wall in rage, and it bleeds. She reaches instinctively for the bleeding hand, but he now cannot even bear her to touch him, for her very touch is as if it was acid searing his skin. So he shoves her away to the other corner of the room in a spasm of violent rejection.

He boxes her in with kasams on all those she held dear - Kanha, Kaali Maa, her parents. It is a strange echo of his earlier appeal:Agar aap mein insaniyat baaki hai, toh sach batayiye!

The very strangeness of his first question shows the extent of his desperate need to see her redeem herself, any which way. For what sense does it make for him to ask her whether she knew the man she had been meeting outside the palace at the dead of night, and now in her own rooms? He just wants her to say No, I do not know him!, however incredible that might sound. And when she does not oblige him and confesses that yes, she knows him, Jalal cannot even bring himself to do what 99 men out of a 100 would have done, hit her.

😭 And yet, I have myself seen, there are those who actually say that Jalal hits Jodha, making it sound like a daily programme.

The rest follows, as the night follows the day, as Jodha confesses that yes, she had known that shaks since her childhood (why not add three words, you foolish woman, mere bhaisa hain? ), that she loves him. And so, finally, the curtain falls on this act of a Greek tragedy.

Jalal is a creature of extremes, and his emotions are all kingsize. So he roars full throatedly in his agony, as he did when his Khan Baba was no more, and takes his rage out, not on the woman who was its cause, but on the inanimate objects in the room.

I was proud of Jalal, who, despite his black fury and terrible sense of betrayal, managed to contain his rage and did not take it out on Jodha.

I wished he hadn't pulled her hair... but, otherwise he was within his rights.. yeah, I know what others would have done aunty...but still.. It looked bad, my dear, but it could, and with most others, been much worse. At that moment, he hates her for being the source of what he now perceives as a shameful weakness. My dear, where do you think crimes passionels originate? Why, in situations like this one, and till near the end of the 20th century, French juries routinely used to acquit the (male) accused in such cases.

After all - don't they need to justify him falling upon her feet the next day

Hum aapme ek mohabbat ki roshni dekhne lage the..Aur aapne apni zinakari se us roshni ko naapaak kar diya..

In the closure he chooses, Jalal is being merciful far beyond the norms of those days.He does not imprison Jodha, or shame her publicly in the Diwan-e-Khas, as he might well have done. He probably feels that to do so would be a tauheen of his love for her, however soiled and betrayed that emotion might be.

There can be no greater love than this, which can forgive even the worst betrayal and stay true to itself, retaining its dignity and its depth.

Your write up actually moved me more than the scene aunty.. I don't know if it makes sense.. 😭😕 The scene shook me up as no other, Lashykanna, plus I love Jalal. It is the combination of the two that has got to you.

Jodha: Unbearable silence: There is nothing much I have to say about Jodha, except that I wish the script had let her go at least halfway to match the depth, the power and the fury of Jalal. As she was shown, Jodha was pathetically lacking in resourcefulness, her trademark loquaciousness, in emotion and in depth.

There should have been a helpless agony in her face and her eyes, black despair as she sees her relationship with the man she claims to love in tatters, terror at the awful fate that awaits the brother whose life she seeks to protect by adhering to the vachan he has forced on her. There should have been terrible anguish at what she was putting her husband through, the hell of the betrayal of his innermost feelings into which he has been thrown and from which only she can rescue him.

There was nothing of any of this, bar a few shots of a pleading look in her lovely, tear-filled eyes.

Yes...some state she was like a deer-caught-in-the-headlights.. but, she wasn't...she knew all along what was coming by hiding all this.. and if she didn't well its again her fault..when Sujamal came back into her room (which seems to be open to visitors all the time) I don't see how she could expect that the secret not be out?

her lack of expression got to me as it did possibly 90% of the viewers.. I hope you have got your percentages right. It would go a long way to restore my faith in the judgment of the viewership.😉

In fact, I do not know how much Jodha understood of the soul-searing agony her husband was going thru. Not much, judging from her reactions.

By her face, it didn't seem like she was reacting much 😕 She doesn't get it, Lashykanna, and she never will. How can a babbling brook have any idea of what an oceanic storm would be like? I sometimes wonder how such a tempestuous lover could, in the long run, be satisfied with the kind of milk and water, placid affection that is all she would be capable of feeling.

The woman who could, by a clever play on words that defied logic but sounded convincing, managed to get the besotted Jalal time and again to do what he was dead against - about Bakshi Banu, about Sharifuddin, about Tasleem. It seems that this hunar too has failed her at the most crucial moment, just as Karna, in the heat of the battle against Arjuna at Kurukshetra, could not remember the mantra for the Brahmastra.

The editing of Jodha's shots was also bewildering at times. When Jalal is declaiming about the hazaar begumaat in his harem, and lists the various reasons for which he married them, ending with bachpan ki dost, ie Ruqaiya, Jodha stares at him with shock and fear in her eyes. Why on earth would she look afraid at that point?

Then again, when he says, at the very end, Humein aapse mohabbat ho gayi thi, Jodha Begum, she is completely out of sync, still nodding her head in negation from the previous shots, and they retained that!

I expected a much stronger reaction - if nothing else - when Jalal says with such vindictive agony about the painful death that Sujamal will be subjected to ... her reactions were flat there too - like she didn't expect he'd follow up on what he'd just said... That is a plausible excuse, but she was flat before that and after that as well.

What was Sujamal's original reason, tenuous as it was, for the vachan he had made Jodha take? That Jodha should not get into trouble by being seen to meet an enemy of the Mughal sultanate. Now, that vachan has been renewed, her hand on his head, for exactly the same reason , unhe tum par sandeh ho jayega.

But once Jalal has seen the fake khwaja sera in Jodha's rooms, all this went automatically out of the window, and there was no longer any rationale for this vachan . Sujamal, who is presumably not a dunce, should have realised at once what Jalal was bound to think as soon he saw them together, if he was not told that Sujamal was her brother. Why, if Bharmal has seen a strange man in his daughter's rooms, he would have executed both the daughter and the intruder. Remember his reaction to Jodha's moonlight boatride with Suryabhan, her fiance? He wanted to strangle her.




Let us for a moment leave aside Sujamal's unbelievable folly in leaving her to face the music from a murderously angry husband. Let us stick to Jodha alone. Why does she not ask Sujamal to release her from the vachan, since the situation was bound to be fatal for him if she stayed silent?

For if she keeps quiet, she is condemning the very brother whose life she wants desperately to save - which is why she will not break the vachan - not just to certain death, but to the most horrendously painful death that Jalal can think up, and this in front of her.

Whereas, if she confesses that he is her brother and also why he came into the palace as a khwaja sera, all will be well. Maybe Sujamal will get a token punishment, but his life will be saved, not to speak of Jodha's honour and her nascent relationship with Jalal.


So how does what Jodha is doing make any sense? I am here leaving out entirely the terrible anguish she is inflicting on the husband who, she now knows from his own mouth , loves her. Anguish that is tearing him apart, and will do so for the rest of his life unless he learns the truth somehow.

Aunty, that vachan makes no sense whatsoever... and Jodha promising to keep it up at the cost of her husband losing his sanity further and further (first for being blind to his questions/ annoyance/grief and then mute during the confrontation scene) makes just as little sense too!

What lies ahead: I simply do not care, I am afraid. The last part of the Friday episode was back to the old format, with Jalal pacing furiously up and down the Diwan-e-Khas, and then running to dispatch Sujamal, looking exactly like the Energiser bunny. The last shot of his glaring eyes as he contemplates that pile of corpses, so artistically arranged, was hardly edifying.

Not at all aunty.. I LOVED this scene.. because the anger and helpless depicted here was a stark contrast to the ones in the earlier scene.. his disappointment with MA was on a completely different plane from what it was with Jodha...

After a long time, I felt like I was seeing a leader shouting at his faltering forces - asking them to buck up and start taking their responsibilities more seriously.. better than him being blind to the ongoings. Do see my comment about this, right at the top.

I preferred to go back of the 11:56 minutes of the previous segment, harrowing as it was. I hope The Great Reconciliation Scene is not too mawkish, and that Jodha is given something substantial to do there at least. I have grown fond of her from her Kajri days, and I want that girl back!

The New Promo: One pertinent point, especially for those waiting with bated breath for The Kiss. If Jalal is going to kiss Jodha, he is going to have to figure out in advance how to deal with her cartwheel of a nose ring. I do not see how anyone could kiss a woman sporting that thing.😉

And in the final Grand Embrace scene in the promo, Jalal, who is only as tall as Jodha , looks to be a good half a head taller. This is probably what is meant by her helping his all round growth!😉

🤣 loool

Brilliant write up aunty.. no wonder you'd said you'd not read anything else on the forum till you get this one off your chest. Yes, my dear, like an actor of the Stanislavski school (of method acting) I wanted to stay in the same mood till I had finished it, and not let myself get distracted by other things.

There, my pet, it is now exactly 4:26 pm. I was called out for 4 minutes, so that makes it 46 minutes for this reply. I hope you are satisfied, and if not, I will come after you with a stout slipper!😉


Shyamala Periamma
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Posted: 11 years ago
My dear Shobha,

That is a rare compliment, that my post made you watch the episode. Thank you.

There is next to nothing I have to add to all this, for I feel much the same. The line "But alas, she was sitting there like a doll, just staring at him and we the audience cried buckets" says it all. She was simply hopeless.

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: Joja

Shamala aunty, I was so irritated with this illogical track, I had stopped watching this serial, but just checking this forum once in a while.

But your post , description about Rajat's performance made me watch it today. Thank you Aunty for this post and also to make we watch such a brilliant performance by Rajat.

Well, you have described it so well , so all I can say is I agree with each and every word you have written.

Rajat made me cry buckets, but this Pari made is angry with her acting (or should I say no acting)

When Jalal is so damn hurt and pours his heart out. There is just no expressions from her. If felt she is blank the whole through (except for one or 2 drops of tears)

If she was not able to manage acting in front of Rajat , CV's should have atelast given her enough glycerin and made her cry buckets.

But alas, she was sitting there like a doll, just staring at him and we the audience cried buckets.

God knows who is writing this script and what they have int their brain when they pen it.

How can Sujamal enter Jodha hojra when the Mughal soldiers and the Shehenshah himself is chasing him.

Does he think he is invisible (guess all Rajavanshi's think) or does he think he can single handedly kill all Mughal soldiers.

Why Vachan again ? Even after Jalal sees them together, doesn't he have a slightest of idea what he might do to her. If he was not worried about his life and only about hers, he would have told Jalal which he was caught atleast.

While Rajat pulls me to watch this show, somehow the CV's and Jodha's acting/behavior makes me to go away from this show.

Thought I was spellbound by Rajat performance, Jodha made me sad with her not acting. She was just not showing any emotions. How could she keep quite even after seeing her husband literally shattered. When his hand beeds, even then there is no enough concern. When he accused her of relation with ghair merd, not enough shock. When he says he loves her, not even a bit of love was shown on her face. When he asks her to leave Agra, just no sign of being afraid of going far from him.

She was infact very bad on Friday's episode (sorry to say this).

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy


I waited and waited and promised myself Periyamma that I wouldn't let the deluge flow... but my resolve ultimately gave in 😭


Ooo eees eeet? 🤓

P.S. I thought we'd already broken all track records for the maximum number of spoilers and tracks and suppositions and predictions and press releases and rumours possible within the shortest span of time for a Indian serial..
Looks like the slew of gossip is not meant to end any time soon.. 😆


Why? What is it now? 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
What? I thought I read two opening posts - one about your crying buckets thanks to my post and thus helping mitigate the Malaysian water shortage ( I have asked Lashy to send you a couple of tankfuls, as she has been crying all morning to make me feel guilty of not responding to her post), and another about the techniques of coping with Jodha's cartwheel. Plus a number of others, mostly side-splitting. What then are you complaining about, young lady?

Shyamala Aunty

Originally posted by: AJSharma79

Oh dear, the hanuman tail is growing...and I haven't even had the time to read, let alone post anything.

I am missing all the fun...

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@ Periyamma thanks so much 🤗
as for Mr.Lashy, he's used to it... even my two lil ones (the youngest being three) knows...😆 they've concluded its better to give me my share than put up with emotional blackmail 😆
Hey...but, that's only cos I coddle them after their tantrums.. 😉

Originally posted by: rpeez

Why? What is it now? 😲

Back to Amer and jungles, I hear 😆
the kiss is all la la land I suppose



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Originally posted by: lashy

@ Periyamma thanks so much 🤗
as for Mr.Lashy, he's used to it... even my two lil ones (the youngest being three) knows...😆 they've concluded its better to give me my share than put up with emotional blackmail 😆
Hey...but, that's only cos I coddle them after their tantrums.. 😉

Back to Amer and jungles, I hear 😆
the kiss is all la la land I suppose




Oh, that, it's all dream? Again? Jalaal's dreaming powers make me wonder if he has Schizophrenia.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: lashy

@ Periyamma thanks so much 🤗
as for Mr.Lashy, he's used to it... even my two lil ones (the youngest being three) knows...😆 they've concluded its better to give me my share than put up with emotional blackmail 😆
Hey...but, that's only cos I coddle them after their tantrums.. 😉

Back to Amer and jungles, I hear 😆
the kiss is all la la land I suppose



@bold, you so remind me of my Mashi (my aunt) Akka😳😛
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

This, my dear Smitha, is going to be the neatest, shortest response I am going to be able to make on this thread. I agree with you in toto, including for the caps!

As for the cute puppy, I am told there is to be a period of viraha, which will more than welcome, at least to me!


perfect!!!!!!!!!!! MAKE IT A MONTH. LEAVE JODHA BEGUM ALONE FOR ATLEAST A MONTH AND LET HER THINK.

SHE REALLY NEEDS TO DO THAT.

If I were in her place in real life,my husband would have KILLED ME
imagine walking out of your home late night and meeting someone eventhough your brother( and which brother will ask his married sister to come out like that]

I want her to think back and analyse what all she did

I sincerely wish Jallal doesnot fall at her feet. He did what any other man would do...will do

I want Jodha to apologise to Jalal for everything she did RIGHT FROM THE MOHAN TRACK!!!!!!!!!!



Shyamala Chechi




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Posted: 11 years ago
My dear Neeshaa,

For once, a post has rendered me speechless. I was so touched by what you have written that I simply did not know what to say in reply. So I will only say this.

I am delighted that you like my posts so much. But that, my dear girl, says as much, or more about you, about your tastes, your attention span, your liking for abstruse formulations and turns of speech, for odd quotations and references to even odder literary figures, for tongue in cheek humour, than it does about me. It takes intelligence and sensitivity to grasp and appreciate nuances. I know that my kind of writing is not for everyone; it is an acquired taste, and not everyone acquires it. You clearly have, and I am so pleased about that.

I know that I write well most of the time, for I can judge myself pretty well, and while vanity is not one of my weaknesses, neither is false modesty. As Sherlock Holmes used to say, modesty is an overrated virtue. And false modesty is a vice.

But do you know, when I start a post, I have really no idea how it is going to turn out to be, and when it is a post to which I attach a lot of importance, as with this one, I am as nervous as an actor before she/he steps on to the theatre stage. It is a mild form of stage fright. It is only when the post has, so to speak, written itself (this one turned out to be rather different from what I had originally thought of doing!) that I relax. And when young people like you write in with such very warm comments, why then it makes all the effort (5 hours for this one) more than worthwhile.

Well, I hope that makes you feel that you know me somewhat better, and that you can join the gang of my young friends here. I am uncomfortable on a pedestal, you see, and I would like to get off yours as soon as possible!😉 I do hope too that you will write in whenever I post next.

Shyamala Di

PS: And don't you ever dare use the word "dare" again!

Originally posted by: neeshaa16

Hi,

With great respect..I dare to reply to you Shyamla Di.. I have always silently admired your posts ..but never dared to reply..You are on such a high Pedestal on this forum that I hardly dared to write to you. Its not fear but the respect. The flawless writing with such a superlative command over words .Your posts also equally deserve an standing ovation as much ads Rajat''s performance. The nuances you have mentioned about his expressions, his actions make his performance stand out even more.. I can only salute your efforts that you take to render such wonderful posts which are nothing less than beautiful poetry.. that just makes a way into your heart. Thank you so much for giving us this opportunity to relish your masterpieces ..Please keep posting more often..

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Oh, yes, Minnie dear, you make plenty of sense to me, not to worry. My comments are in bold black.

I have marked in dark blue the parts of your post that I liked the best, as the most perceptive and convincing. I do feel, as you do, that both Jodha and Ruqaiya have been shortchanged and distorted, badly so, as characters. The only difference is that with Ruqaiya, the deterioration is clearly visible. With Jodha, the comparison would be not with what she was (ie the Smiley avatar for Ruqaiya), but with what she could have been.

Jodha is also handicapped as a character by the boilerplate concepts the CVs have of what the main female lead ought to be like, especially in a Balaji show. Like an early Amitabh movie had to have him bashing up 6 gundas at the same time, their female lead has to be a moral template who can never do anything wrong,is highly responsible towards her family to the exclusion of all else, including the male lead, with the accompanying traits of courage, extreme goodness, generosity (often at the expense of the male lead), readiness to forgive all offenders, and finally, unshakeable self-righteousness and a tendency to preach at all times, mostly to the unfortunate male lead.

Your idea of " Jo and Ruq (being) quiet calm pillars of strength for Jalal" would be perfect. But it is a pipe dream, for Balaji is convinced that their target audience will not understand or accept it. It would, they fear be too sophisticated for their simple tastes. They like their characters to be comfortingly familiar cardboard cutouts, so where can one fit in the third dimension essential for "real" characters?

Whether this perception of Balaji's is true or not is an open question, but that is what they believe, and what they believe is what counts.

Shyamala Aunty


Originally posted by: minnie2308

"As for Rajat, he deserves an even better writer, but I did my best. I cannot imagine what people mean by saying that he was OTT. He needed to be.Have they never watched some of the greatest actors lt themselves go? That is why I used the term Shakespearian, but there are so manhy examples closer to home. This was not a Victorian tea party, but a very explosive situation, and it needed that fury.

As things turned out, it was like one half of The Lion in Winter, minus the contribution of the Katharine Hepburn character.

I only wish Paridhi too had let rip, if only at the end. How can Jodha take an accusation of being an adulteress, that too by her husband, and do nothing to deny it?
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Aunty .. I also found his performance good.

Not just good, my dear. Quite outstanding. it was a very, very tough scene from the point of view of the actor's craft, his technique. He had to maintain the emotional pitch, raise and lower it by turns, like a sine curve, modulate his voice to match, and remember all those lines perfectly, for the slightest hesitation would have called for a retake from the beginning, to maintain the emotional continuity. The boy can do anything.

The only other such scene I can remember was that of Mohit Raina as Jalandhar in DKD Mahadev, when he was holding his dead wife in his arms, talking to her and refusing to acknowledge that she was no more, and then again as he sits by the side of her burnt out pyre, running his hand thru the cold ashes and once again talking to her. That was at the other end of the OTT scale, very soft, but it gave me goose pimples.

But it was not this kind of one take 12 minute monologue, with a blank-faced co-star who gave him nothing to play off. It is but rarely that one gets to see anything like this onscreen. We were lucky. And if he had had an even halfway good co-actor, the scene would have been so much better.


The rage and its display was needed! I haven't watched 'The Lion in Winter" which starred Katherine. But I have watched the telly remake ... As it turns out, it was a huge maze of tough emotions and their display in manner which is not agreeable to many. Not for the faint hearted it was!
The screen version of The Lion in Winter with Peter O'Toole and Katharine Hepburn was made in the late 1960s, very soon after Becket, and so it was very clean by current standards, which are what must have been applied to the recent TV version. It was strong stuff, but not unbearable, and very powerfully enacted.
But I absolutely do not find anything odd in some people finding it OTT. But I said that he WAS OTT because he had to be in this scene. What I object to is people using OTT for Jalal on Friday in a pejorative sense. I agree that Jodha too should have been OTT, at least half as much as he was.

I do wish They had given some anguished dialogues to Paridhi too. There should have been more retakes with her eyes doing the talking... she has good eyes that can emote well!
And now, with your permission, I'd like to join a discussion, uninvited with Sandhya.(Off course, everyone knows I quite like Jo...) She has put extremely relevant points. And I do agree that Jo has little to make Jalal any better. But yes, she has opened his eyes , as Lashy rightly pointed out to a little better side of people. Not sure if it would have happened anyways, but Jalal has started getting a little closer to his own mom(a more positive influence) than he is to badi ammi, he has started to acknowledge the darker side of his bachpan ki dost, he has started to view winning hearts as a better war strategy and he has also openied his heart,court and subedaari positions for non-muslims, after he got acquianted to Jo.

Needless to say, he might have still acheived it sooner or later...
On Benazir's track, again people may have a different view, but I do not believe Ruq would have drunk poison herself...she'd have thrown a huge tantrum in front of Jalal, broken many expensive vases , slapped all harem maids and had made sure Jalal tried it on a jail inmate or a nirdosh pashu like a cat/dog! She is resourceful enough to ensure this happens. And if she had been in a position similar to that of Jo, I doubt if she would have cared.

Again different folks, different strokes and even more different takes!
The above is not to bring in Ruq in this discussion that is just not for her, but only to highlight a few positives of Jo... and open Jalal's eyes to even more difference in characters. Off course, to make it a Rajvanshi trait is silly. Jo's positiveness is her alone, not coz she is Rajvanshi... the dialogs are only to please the senas I do not wish to name!
However to expect Jo to be able to be as diplomatic, perceptive and resourceful is a tall order! He was Akbar the great after all and Jo just his preferred queen.

My anger with CVs is not for making Jo mahaan( by all means I am open to all her good hunars) but in bringing in the age old perception that women and diplomacy do not go hand in hand. Why can a woman not be diplomatic and positive. Why is diplomacy of women a negative trait? Why make a calm collected diplomatic Ruq begum look like a scheming vamp(I finally watched the older episodes of JA just to see smiley in action.I had not seen JA in its initial days She was good) Surely Akbar had sufficient drama masala all his life without adding to the women kitchen politics. When will the makers realise that woman have moved so high up from the kitchen ... why not subtely make Jo and Ruq quiet calm pillars of strength for Jalal? And no these women have no reason to be friends , but they can still be royally stiff upper lipped around each other. Sigh...
I am not even sure if I have made any sense and if Aunty is wishing why she ever set sight on my reply.
I was angry that Jo's character was not given any dialogs in what could have been the best scene on telly for this month at least? I agree, which is what the Jodha:Unbearable Silence segment in my post was all about;
And feminism is not about losing femininity as is mentioned somewhere here... its about ensuring women have as much right to be right and WRONG as any other gender...Lol. Spot on.

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