FF Destiny an unbeliavable but real...ch 5 pg 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmmm ... Supa interesting haa.!! Continue asap.!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
Wonderful update 😊 thanks for pm!
this would nice to read... waiting for more cute moments ..pls continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
☺️woowww !!! 😳
our akdha are sooo romantic from now only 🤣😆

loved the chapter a looot ❤️🤗
continue soon and pm me plzz 😃
Edited by SARA4444 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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VERY NICE. I LOVE THE STORY . SO FINALLY THEY EXCHANGED NUMBERS , NOW THEY CAN CHAT WHENEVER THEY WANT. BOTH OF THEM WERE CONFUSED WHETHER TO MASSAGE EACH OTHER OR NOT. LOVED THE CHAPTER. LETS SEE WHERE IT GOES. I DON'T LIKE THE IDEA SURAIYA BHAN. HOW CAN YOU BE SO STUPID? 😡 ANYWAYS CONTINUE SOON AND PM ME PLEASE😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fab update dear... And jalal woke up at 5'o clock just to receive her message... Lol😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NOTE: i was completely inactive through all these days due to some family problem so my friends i want your suggetions if i should continue this FF or not and also im very sorry for not updating all ur eggs and tomatoes are welcome for this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
Plz plz don't stop do continue
I love this ff so much and update asap plz thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowow it was way ttooo awesome blossom yrr
totally loved it
plz don't stop this awesome ff dear plz
nd plz plz plz pm plz

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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnkx for ur replies will update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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RECAP: JODHA: hi, kya kar rhe?

JALAL: hi, main bas apne friends ke sath restraunt mein lunch kr rha , tum kya kar rhi?

JODHA: nothing just getting bored

JALAL: ( in a tone as if she is only his) bore horhi thi toh ek messege nhi kar sakti thi, main bhi yahan kitna bore horha tha kabse soch rha ki kab tumhara messege ayega

JODHA: sorry... maine socha agar messege kiya toh aap kya socheinge

JALAL: toh ab kyun ki ho messege

JODHA: (in a pleading tone) sorry ab se aisa kabhi nhi kareige

JALAL: its ok...

CHAPTER 5:

They continued their chat and jalal nicknamed jodha "miss busy" . The next evening both of them were texting each other. It was around 7:00 pm mainavati called Jodha. She said that she has to go to parlour as the was going to delhi the other day. Jodha was first shocked as it was not the usual time that her mother goes to parlour but without saying a word she took her mother on her scooty unknown to the fact that one of the biggest surprise of her life is waiting for her .

Location was something like their was a hospital beside it was a open parking area attached with a parlour to its side. As she parked her scooty she felt as if someone called her name, and the first thought that came to her mind was "kahin ye jalal toh nahi" but she ignored her thought saying to herself how can he be here. And she accompanied her mother inside the parlour.

As she settled herself inside the palour, she suddenly felt an urge to check her cell. Their was his msg and the most unexpected shock of jodha's life, msg was " abhi tum parlour mein gayi ho na" jodha almost jumped from her seat. All she could reply was " aap yahan". She wanted to see him .. ohh ... She was so restless . She informed her mother that she is returning home as her father was alone at home. She would come to pick her up.

She wanted to meet him but was afraid if someone saw her talking with a guy then they would think wrong. So she just returned to her home back. Jalal felt awkward as what was wrong he texted her se said she will be returning in 1 hr then she will meet him. He said his parents will scold him but then to he waited for her.

Jodha returned and stoped in front of hospital where he was waiting. Their both chated for hardly 5 sec when jodha saw few girls of her area were their she felt awkward and again without saying a word she moved to the parlour ad texted him

JODHA: im sorry those girls were looking and gossiping about us so I have to return here"

JALAL: its ok...tumhe pta hai jab tum jarhi thi pta nhi kyu bt mujhe acha nhi lag rha tha.

JODHA: apko pta h wahan se aana mujhe bhi acha nhi lg rha tha pta nhi kyun???

They continued their chat. In the night:

Jodha: acha ab hum sone jarhe subha 5bje uthna hai mummy papa bahar jarhe na

JALAL: ohk tum sojao

JODHA: gud nyt , swt drmsJ

In the morning at 6am jodha woke up she started her work but her mind and unknown to her, her heart was also with jalal. She wanted to wish him gud morning but she thought he sleps till 9am so how can he be awake.

After much effort she couldn't resist and messaged him gud morning and again kept her cell and continued her work. But still jalal was bothering her, she was feeling as if may be jalal ka msg ajaye... she rushed to her cell and checked it and to her shock their was his msg " gud morning dear" she somehow composed herself with the shock but still all she could say was

Jodha: aap jag rhe ho !!!!! ??? :o

Jalal: haan tumne kaha than a ki tum subha 5 bje jag jaogi toh main alarm lgake jag gaya J

Jodha felt as if she is on the ninth cloud she wanted toh fly like a bird...

PRECAP: jodha tum itni beautiful kyun ho jabse tumhe dekha hai bas tumhare bare mein he soch rha hoon


plz do read and comment and all suggetions are welcomed :)

Edited by pragatiraj - 10 years ago

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