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.jalal was amazed asnakecan be sweet? jodha placed sweety and cutie on the bed beside jalal...jalal was scared by the snake... its eyes was very scary...red in colour...his room was a total mess,,covered with clothes soft toys chocolates...books "jodha can u plz clean all this" asked jalal still cant believe its his room "dont say any thing just sleep...mera bohut saara samaan aana baaki hai just sleep u need rest" said jodha in a commanding tone...jalal was now more scared 'what else is about to come...is shecomingfor 20 days or for her whole life' thought jalal to himself...jodha was settling her stuff in his room in between she was also luking upwards ndmurmuringtoo...jalalwas 100% sure...she was cribbing to her kanha...he was smiling remembering her cribbing "why r u smiling ...sleep" said a super irritated jodha...jalal instantly made a stern face .
CHAPTER 13

jodha was confused luking at the surrounding...it was not like that jalal's room was not big enough...nooo!...it was...even it was twice the room of jodha but the problem was from where to start as it was 9pm nd she was feeling hungry... jalal was just luking at her confused face...he was getting bored ...jodha picked up jalal's clothes which she had placed on the couch...she took them nd arranged them in his wardrobe making enough space for her clothes too...she placed her clothes too there ...she was happy as some work was done ...jalal was not feeling sleepy at all...
yes!! his upper was paining a little but he managed he was bored...jodha was not allowing him to go anywhere...the only thing he was allowed to do was 'rest'...jalal was luking at his i-phone...thinking of playing some games then only veer called ( jalal's best friend since skool days...a fun loving guy nd flirty but gud from heart...he is working in his company as a managing director )jalal was more than happy...he was going to talk to him after 3 weeks as he is in california coz of business issues...jalal instantly put his phone in silent mode nd took bluetooth from the side table nd placed it on his ear...he knows if jodha find it she will surely break his phone...when he made sure that jodha was busy in her work...he picked his call
VEER-" hey bro!! itna time kyu lagaya...nd i heard someone shot u...zyada lagi toh nhi naa." asked an over excited veer... jalal smirked listening his screaming
JALAL- "haan bhai ...i m fine or bta"...said jalal in a low voice making sure jodha could not hear him
VEER- "yrr where that basta+d shot u...dont tell me in yr throat" ...
said veer like he didn't know anything
JALAL- "stop kidding bro...actually jodha is here...she will kill me seeing if she see me talking"...said jalal in the same voice making veer confused...he was shocked that someone is in the world whom jalal is scared of...he was grinning like a fool
JALAL- "what is funny in this that made u grin?"...asked jalal knowing his friend very well...meanwhile jodha was busy placing her books in his study which was adjustant to his room...she came back to his room...every where was her stuffs...her shoes, make up kits, chocolates, her laptop, headphone, purse, clutches, hair accessories nd many more...soon a servant knocked the door...jalal was not talking to veer as jodha was there...his ear was paining coz of veer's non stop screaming
JODHA- ."come in" ...said jodha
VEER- "oye ye ladki ki awaaz...dont tell me u r with a girl...arre yrr...yr arm is wounded...how will u do it?"...said veer thinking of his casanova image
JALAL- "R U MAD!!!" screamed jalal...if that time veer was with him...do doubt that jalal would punched him hard on his face...he cant do anything like that with jodha not even can think like that...jodha was not like other girls to him she was 'someone special for him'..
JODHA- "acha ek toh i m here to take care of u...cleaning yr room ...nd u r calling me? me? a mad" ...said a angry jodha
JALAL- "jodha listen...u r mistaken i didnt said it to u"...said jalal to convince her...
VEER- "hhaahahahahahaa tu toh phas gaya"...commented veer...before jalal could scold veer there was a knock again
JODHA- "kitni baar kahu ...come in"...said a fustrated jodha...a servant came inside nd handle jodha a cricket kit
SERVANT- "mam ye moti mam ne bhij waya hai...singh mansion se"...said the servant leaving an over excited jodha
JODHA- "ohhh yesss! how can i forget...aaj toh india...ka match hai...yippe!" said jodha doing a cute dance...she opened the cricket bag...picking the costume wore by cricketers nd a helmet ...she put it on the couch for mid-night...when the match will start...jalal was amazed to see a girl crazy about cricket...while veer was shocked to core
VEER- "yrr who is she?...is she a mad?" asked veer in a scary voice ...then only mirza came to ask jalal's health status ...he was shocked to see a messy room
JODHA- "arre mirza!come but be careful...my stuff is scattered on the floor"...said jodha smilingly thinking she will make mirza
to help her but mirza was in his own world
MIRZA,- "sry...i thought bro ka room hai" said mirza turning around to leave
JALAL- "mirza itz my room only"...said jalal knowing his state of mind...as he was too not able to believe that otz his room
VEER- "oh mirza is here...give him the phone" said veer while mirza was still trying to digest the food
JODHA- "i know he doesnt want to help me na" said jodha emotionally
MIRZA- "theek hai theek hai...zyada natak mat ker...propose some guy...vo yeh sab kaam ker lega" said mirza winking at jodha
JODHA..- "without luv kaise" jodha said not wanting to lose in this 'tu tu mai mai'
MIRZA- "haan toh ker le kisi se pyaar mohabbat ya ishq" said mirza dramatically in jodha style...jalal chucled seeing the whole drama...veer was also enjoying this...
now jodha has to say something to shut mirza...she thought for sometime nd said
JODHA- "ishq ke khayaal bohut hai, ishq ke charche bohut hai, sochte hai him bhi ishq kerle, per sunte hai ishq mei kharche bohut hai" said jodha winking at mirza
MIRZA- "thiik hai ...thiik hai...krta hu...tu bhi kya yaad rakhegi" said mirza
VEER- "hahahahahah mirza ki shaqal dekhne laayak hogi...oh she is sooo cute yrr" said veer
JALAL- "chup ker" said jalal irritatedly...may be coz of veer saying jodha 'cute'...mirza started working without saying anything which made jodha laugh...soon they both cleaned the room and collapsed on the bed beside jalal
MIRZA- "ohhh...ye saanp kiska hai?" asked mirza luking at the snake or we can say jodha's sweety
JODHA -, "oh her namee is sweety" said jodha with a pout
MIRZA- "oh toh ye 'her' hai ...i mean female" said mirza chuckling
JODHA- "or nhi toh kya...nhi toh akeli ladki raat mei...alone with a snake voh bhi male...chi chi" said mirza dramitically like a typical indian girl...this made both jodha nd mirza laughing like maniac
MIRZA - "jodha one shayari by me for yr saanp...sry sweetie...may i?" asked mirza conrolling his laugh
JODHA- "irshaad" said jodha
MIRZA- "insaan insaan ko dass raha hai, gaur farmaiyega ,insaan insaan ko dass raha hai, or saanp paas mei baith k hass raha hai" said mirza nd again both of them started laughing
VEER- "hahahahahaha...ye mirza ko kya ho gya...pj shayari maar raha hai" asked veer
JALAL- "tu commentary krna band krega" said jalal irritatedly luking at the both laughing infront of him nd one on the phone unnecessary...then only mr and mrs khan came to see their son
HAMIDA- "how r u feeling beta...gud or messy like yr room" teased hamida
JALAL- "ammi please...these two devils r enough for irritating me with their useless jokes...ab aap start mat ho jaao" said jalal...but mirza nd jodha luked confusingly at each other like saying 'humne kya kiya'
JODHA- "wait...tumne mjhe devil kaha" asked jodha raising her eyebrows
VEER- "bhai tu vaapis phas gaya"commented veer
JALAL- "tu chup ker...tab se bole jaa raha hai" said jalal angrily
JODHA- "acha ab mai chup bhi rahu" complained jodha with a pout on her lips
JALAL- "nhi nhi i was not saying u...u r again mistaken" said jalal to manofy her
HAMIDA- "chalo chalo...no more ladaai...jodha u want to stay here naaa...so plz dont fight with jalal ...vaise bhi he is in pain...or chalo i know u r hungry...letz have dinner" said mrs khan to stop the fight...jodha glared jalal and ran to dining table...but soon came back to the room
JALAL- "what...hum aa he rhe the" said jalal...jodha was breathing heavily coz of running
JODHA- "who said u to build such a big house...mai toh thak he gayi...arre haan u cant go down for dinner naaa" said jodha...jalal was luking in shock at her with wide eyes like asking 'why'
MR.KHAN- "beta i think he can come" said mr. khan luking at jodha with a smile
JALAL- "haan i can come"said jalal but jodha was stubborn at her decision
JODHA- "thiik hai...u dont trust me naa i will ask nothing from u now" said jodha with a fake hurt expression
MR AND MRS KHAN- "no no beta...now onwards whatever will u say ...will be command for him...chalo leave them...aap dono ka dinner idher he aa jayega" said the old couple concernly...jodha nodded sweetly nd winked at jalal...all left for dinner leaving them alone
JALAL- "yeh kya tha i can go" said jalal shockly
JODHA- "kyaaa kiya maine...i m concern for u naaa...or vaise bhi u r hurt" said jodha turning on the tv
VEER- "hehehehehehehe" laughed veer foolishly
JALAL.- "ohhh...wound is on my arm not on my legs...so i can walk" said jalal switching off the tv
JODHA- "haan...toh maine kuch kaha kya...u can walk ...run ...mjhe pta hai...toh jo bhi kerna hai kro" said jodha nd again switched on the tv
VEER- "yrr jalal i think she is right...usne toh nhi kaha naa u cant walk" commented veer
JALAL-"yrr u both r mad...i can go downstairs for dinner naa" said jalal switching of the tv
JODHA-"KYAAA HAAII??nd why u said 'both' jabki here is only one mad nd who is u
orrr haan...dare to switch off the tv again" said jodha angrily
VEER- "yrr u r switching off the tv...
kyu?? po*n movie dekh raha tha kya???" said veer
JALAL- "VEER I WILL KILL U" screamed jalal...jodha switched on the tv nd stand beside jalal touching his forehead
JODHA- "fever toh nhi hai...jalal we will go to the psychiatrist tomorrow...i had a doubt that u r mentally sick...but i m cinfirm now" said jodha blinking her eyes
JALAL-"KYAAA" asked jalal
JODHA- "uff ho !! yahaan pei mai jodha hu...tum jalal ho...toh veer kaun hai???" asked jodha putting her hands on her waist
JALAL- "ummm...veer...arre haan...mere ghar k pass naa ek street dog tha...his name was veertoh i was just missing him" said jalal whatever came to his mind making jodha belive on his words
VEER- "saale...mjhe kutta bna diya" said an annoyed veer...jalal grinned listening his irritated voice
JODHA-"ab kya hua uska" asked jodha
JALAL- "abhi toh he is in danger...if he bark one more time...then he will be dead...hispital mei hai...or vih bhi california ke" said jalal warning veer
JODHA- "hmmm i pity that dog...what was his name...veer naaa...but why veer...if he was too veer then why he is in hospital now??" said jodha changing the channels
VEER..- "oye bol...i m not in hospital" said veer but before jalal could say anything dinner was placed
JODHA- "WOWW! ketz have dinner" said jodha nd was about to take her first bite whenshe saw jalal struggling to eat
JODHA- "ek baar kisi se help le lo.ge toh duniya khatam nhi ho jaayegi" said jodha nd forcefully took the spoon from him nd started to feed him...it was first time for jalal that sum one is feeding him...he was just luking at her...
her hair curls were not allowing him to see her clearly...he placed her hair strands behind her ears...jodha luked at him nd again was lost in him...their eyes met which turned to an intense eyelock...but disturbed by jodha's phone...they luked at every corner of room except each other...jodha saw the screen of her fone nd her blood boiled...jalal saw the change on her face
JALAL- "kiska fone hai" asked jalal with concern
JODHA-"tumhari heroine ka...ptani why she is calling me...wait let i teach her a lesson" said an angry jodha...jodha picked up the call ...before jodha could say anything...sunaina asked aboit jalal's health non stop...due to which jodha glared at jalal
JODHA- "jis no. pei aap sampark kerna krna chaha rhe hai vo abhi coverage area se bahar hai...the no. u r tryimg to call is out of coverage area...plz try after some time...beep...beeep" said jodha and sunaina disconnected the call which made jodha smirk
VEER- "ye kya kiya isne"
JALAL- "tu abhi tak line mei hai...call cut ker.." whispered jalal
VEER- "NHII...mai nhi cut krunga...tu enjoy kr raha hai uske saath...mjhe pta hai...beech mei i can only hear yr breathes...what u think i m brainless?"
jalal tries to ignore him
JALAL-"jodha u have yr dinner...i will change nd come" said jalal but jodha held his hand...jalal raised his eyebrows asking 'what'
JODHA- "i will not have my dinner alone...vaise bhi tumne bohut kam khaya hai" said jodha and without listening anything further...she made him sit beside her...nd started feeding him forcefully nd after every bite she used to eat herself too
JALAL-"OR nhi i m full"
JODHA - "last bite ...plz dekho tumhara kitna blood loss ho gaya tha naa...u should regain it...last bite hai khaalo" said jodha nd forcefully put it inside his mouth nd smirked luking at him
JODHA- "yummy!! the food was awesome...
ab mai jaake change kerke aati hu...vaise bhi this saree is so difficult to handle...u know more than 5 times...i saved my self from falling "said jodha nd started moving towards washroom
VEER- "oye bhai...hold kriyo...i m coming in 2 mins"
JODHA- "jalal plz pass my night suit...pink one...tweety wala ...tab tak i will brush" said jodha or we can say she commanded jalal
JALAL- "MEEE???"
JODHA- "OR koi hai idher?" said jodha but jalal had some mischief in his eyes ...jodha started brushing
JALAL- "YE LOO" jalal passed jodha's night dress to her
JALAL- "or kuch chahiye" asked jalal in a mischievous tone
JODHA- "nhiii...per tumhe kya ho gya...bde sweetly baat ker rhe ho?" said jodha sensing something fishy
JALAL- "kuch bhi toh nhi...vaise tumhe pakka kuch or nhi chahiye...like inners n all" said jalal making jodha's eyes wide in shock
JALAL- "OHK...wait i will give u...vaise kahan hai? chodo i will find it on my own" said jalal knowing jodha's reaction...jodha came running from washroom nd stand between jalal nd the wardrobe
JODHA- "Arre pagal ho? u cant do this"
JALAL- "kyuu? i was just helping u...vaise thank you" said jalal nd ran to the washroom
JODHA- "jalal i will go first...come back...mai pehle change krungi...fir india ka match bhi toh hai" said jodha while kicking nd banging the door...jalal came after some time in his trousers without wearing his vest...water was trickling down his abs...he noticed jodha was drooling him
JALAL-"nice naa" teased jalal...his voice madejodha come out of her drooling section
JODHA- "nhi nhi so bekaar...or tum kuch pehnker kyu nhi aaye...show off"
JALAL- "dont lie...i know...i m hot ...nd for yr kind info. ...itz very difficult to wear shirt when yr right hand is hurt"
jodha started dressing him without saying anything...jodha touched jalal's arm to make him wear the sleeves...the touch made jodha's blood warm nd a fire ran down her spine...but they were again disturbed by the voice of tv...the match had started...
.jodha ran to the washroom nd came in her tweety night suit...above her top...
she had wore an indian cricket match shirt..jalal was agin mesmerized by her cute gesture...his mind was lost in her thoughts...he was brought back to the real world from his la la land by jodha's whistle...she was wearing gloves like cricketers nd a helmet on her head...oh her cheeks were painting like a tiranga like an indian flag...wait she whistled
JALAL- "u know how to whistle" asked jalal as it was the first time he has seen a girl whisteling
JODHA- "HAANNN i learnt 2 months back only" answered jodha nd sat beside jalal on the bed
JODHA -"DHONIII WE WANT SIX" screamed jodha
JALAL- "HE cant listen u...so stop screaming nd itz very late sab so gye honge"
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BUT there is more
i will give itz second part by tomorrow
PRECAP- jodha broke jalal's vase
jodha crying not wants to leave
nd judaai.
sry rishbala dear.i know i m late nd this update is for u
jaskaran yrr...i m really sry nd yup awesome aisha u tooo...sry dear
ANUSHKA...THNX FOR UNDERSTANDING yrrr...
i m saying sry coz of late update...all of them who pm me for updates
thnx for so much love
Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res
Yay finally, its ok dear i read the end part...now worries, something is better than nothing!
Will read all and comment again!!
Thank u dear!

Unres 😊
Just finished reading...OMG it is hilarious i was continuously laughing while reading...jo is sooo cute, Jallu stuck between Jo Mirza and Veer...hilarious...Veer's comments were just hilarious...
Awesome update, i cant wait for the second part...update soon if u can!! I just loved it sooo much!
Jallu's trick her to get her out of the bathroom 😆
Simply awesome update, loved it! I know i m repeating my words but cant think of other words 😳
Edited by rishbala3018 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Res
Yay finally, its ok dear i read the end part...now worries, something is better than nothing!
Will read all and comment again!!
Thank u dear!


yupp...
sme thing is better than nothing
hope u like it this one nd the next one that i will update tomorrow
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aisha...11110


yupp...
sme thing is better than nothing
hope u like it this one nd the next one that i will update tomorrow



I unresd my comment and waiting eagerly for tomoro 😃
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RECAP
jodha ran to the washroom nd came in her tweety night suit...above her top...
she had wore an indian cricket match shirt..jalal was agin mesmerized by her cute gesture...his mind was lost in her thoughts...he was brought back to the real world from his la la land by jodha's whistle...she was wearing gloves like cricketers nd a helmet on her head...oh her cheeks were painting like a tiranga like an indian flag...wait she whistled
JALAL- "u know how to whistle" asked jalal as it was the first time he has seen a girl whisteling
JODHA- "HAANNN i learnt 2 months back only" answered jodha nd sat beside jalal on the bed
JODHA -"DHONIII WE WANT SIX" screamed jodha
JALAL- "HE cant listen u...so stop screaming nd itz very late sab so gye honge"
CHAPTER 13.2

...."he cant listen u or vaise bhi itz 11:30... sab so gye honge" said jalal...till then veer also came after having his dinner "sry yrr late ho gya"said veer...but before jalal could reply to veer...jodha answered jalal

"nhi sab kaise so sakte hain...aaj India ka match hai" saying this,,,,,she whistled again...they dont know how long they argued and jodha's whistling was no where to end...but she became serious as it was the last over nd india wants 20 runs to win...veer was also enjoying their cute ladaai nd jodha's whistling and screaming...."last ball hai sehwag...hit 6 we will win the match" screamed jodha...all the family members were listening her screams nd whistling...after a long time their house was feeling like home...all knows they like each other except them...suddenly their was a loud scream"YEAAA!!!!...JEEET GAYE...I KNEW IT" screamed jodha nd threw her helmet from her head but to her bad luck it hit the vase nd it broke...jalal's eyes was wide in shock "srrry srryy sryy sryy sry sryy...i dont know kaise ho gaya ...mai abhi theek krti hu" said jodha with a baby face...jalal was luking at her face...her expressions were changing in a minute...kabhi a pleading face...next a confident face that she will do it by herself...kabhi a cry baby face...if anyone would saw this scene no one can believe it that jalal's favourite vase was broken and he is not saying anything...jodha was going to clean the broken pieces of vase but jalal held her hand...jodha luked at him with confused teary eyes "maine tum kuch kaha?" asked jalal...jodha shook her head in response....."toh y r u crying?" asked jalal concernly"it was your favourite naaa...mirza told me...nd costly too" said jodha between her hiccups...no one can describe this girl...sometimes she is full with naughtiness,,,,kabhi innocent...toh kabhi a cry baby...nd how can we forget her angry luk...oh she luks more cute with an angry luk. "chodo it would get broken some day ...so it happened today" said jalal wiping her tears..."i will clean it"said jodha but was stopped by jalal "noo...u will not.. lag jaayegi" said jalal...jodha luked at him smilingly...he can do anything for this smile nd he knows that..."kuch toh hua hai...kuch ho gaya hai" teased veer...jalal can now cant scream at him as jodha was beside him...resting her head on jalal's chest...it was no more awkward between them...they dont know why...jodha luked at the wound on jalal's arm..."dard ho raha hai???" asked jodha touching it lightly "thoda saa" replied jalal...jodha blew air on the wound nd caress it with her hands lightly...jalal was feeling like he was in heaven...it felt so pure...so good..."i know itz coz of that varun only...i insulted him naa...that's why but why u came in between" asked jodha luking at his eyes " i don't know but jab pata chalega tab bata dunga...i promise" said jalal..."yaad se bata de dena...vaise why didnt u arrest varun?" asked jodha..."coz hamaare pass koi proof nhi tha.."answered jalal "he was with u in college naa... tumhaare toh saare friends bekaar haini...dirty...ullu...donkey types...mere pass aaye naa koi i will beat him with my slippers" said jodha but veer started coughing which made jalal grinned "bye bhai...mujhe chappal se maarne ki baat ho rahi hai...bye yrr...gud night...or sirf sleep nothing else" teased veer..."oh shit" said jodha "kya hua?" asked jalal..."your medicines" jodha came with the medicines nd gave it to him ...they talked till 2 am nd didnt realised when sleep over took them ...at 5 am jalal wake up nd saw jodha lying on him...he smiled nd was trying to place her on the bed,,,,but she was not leaving him...he tried to loosen the grip of her hands on his shirt but no use..."sweety why u r disturbing me?" murmured jodha ...jalal smiled at her antics..."hey jodha! wake up...i m not yr snake" said jalal "ohh aaj cutie hai mere saath...toh cutie sleep" murmured jodha again "noo. mai tumhara cutie bhi nhi hu" said jalal nd patted her cheeks "toh who r u dirty dog?"asked jodha still in sleep "haan i m dirty dog...yeh kya keh raha hu mai...i mean mai jalal" said jalal...jodha opened her eyes slightly nd smiled nd again sleep "uttho" said jalal still patting her cheeks"nhi...tum jao" said a stubborn jodha "mjhse uthogi tab mai jaaunga na"said jalal...jodha opened her eyes nd saw she was over jalal...she luked at jalal...nd her grip nd again slept...jalal was shocked...that day she was angry on him nd now...he was confused"utho yrr...i have to go to gym also" said jalal "nhi i will not leave u...u will go yr warmth will also go...nd i will not be able to sleep" jalal was in cloud 9 hearing the innocent confession of hers...she made his day"u will not go to gym till yr hand will be perfect...so sleep" said jodha with her eyes still close...jalal can not anything now...he also slept...all saw them like that coz the door was open...now they were sure they r in luv...rishika told them they r in luv but not realised it...they all tried their best to keep them alone...jalal nd jodha didnt realised when 15 days passed...khan mansion was bright like a home ...jodha brought colours to their life...mr nd mrs khan started seeing her as their D.I.L...mirza and jodha's fight brighten their house...jodha's tantrums on not eating green vegies...jalal forcefully making her eat...nd yes how can we forget jodha's screams...shayaries...nd her cute looks were now like habbit for all...they cant see her silence...every one was pampering her...they will bring all types of ice creams if demanded once by jodha...jalal was healing fast...his plaster was removed...nd only a bandage was there...he was allowed to do push ups too...nd can continue his trainings...rishika nd jodha pranks on mirza..always made them laugh...today was the 15th day...jodha ka return day to Singh mansion all were forgot about this...as usual they were having breakfast on the dining table...jalal nd jodha were sitting as usual together...jodha was playing with the food "what happen beta why r u not eating?" asked mr. khan "uncle i hate broccoli" complained jodha"koi ni eat it...itz gud for health" said jalal nd started eating his breakfast ...'dirty dog' jodha cursed him under her breadth...jalal smirked as he was used to it now...before jodha could say anything...mirza...rishika...nd mr nd mrs.. khan brought different dishes specially favourite of jodha...all said together 'eat this' jodha gave a toothy smile to every one nd take every thing from all nd showed tongue to jalal..."u all r spoiling her" said jalal...this line was now common for all...but he also feels gud seeing her happy...all were happy...jodha nd mirza was again fighting but was disturbed by the landline fone...mr khan picked it...it was santram...he called them to sent jodha as all r missing her...jodha pleaded mr. khan to keep the phone on speaker "hello princess" said santram "hi bhaiya...how r u...piya bhabhi n all...let i tell u i m fine here" said jodha "i know...vaise when u r coming...today i m sending driver...ohk? tum aa jaana ...all r missing u alot...shaanti ho gayi ghar per...ronnny nd moti both r also here...waiting for u come fast"said santram...jodha became sad so as others "bhaiya...i will come after some days" said jodha "princess...but we all r missing u...all food is of yr taste nd ronny has brought many things for u...plz come i request u" said santram...jodha cant say anything now she just said ok nd ran to her room for packing her bag...all were thinking of some plan to make her stay here...soon the driver came...jodha came their with her bag...her eyes were having tears ready to fall...she hugged mr. nd mrs. khan nd take their blessings ...they said her to stay but she cant...she hugged rishika.."will miss u" said rishika "me too a lot but i will come here in weekends...pakka" she moved to mirza hugged him "i will not miss u" said mirza "mai bhi nhi"said jodha...they both again hugged "any shayari?" asked mirza...jodha nodded her head "tumhaari yaad dil se jaane nhi denge, tumhaare jaisa dost khone nhi denge, roz sharafat se sms krna, wrna ek kaan ke niche maarenge or rone bhi nhi denge" said jodha...all smiled with tears in their eyes...jalal was smiling luking at her...jodha saw him...the tears which were formed in her eyes...after seeing him fall down rolling her cheeks...she ran nd hugged him hiding her face in his chest...jalal tried to console her but she was not ready to stop...jalal saw all others for help...all tried to console her...but she was crying nd crying...they cant see her in tears...all tried to make her laugh...but she was not leaving jalal...she clutched his shirt in her fist nd was not leaving him"jodha cholo ho gya...chup" but jodha shook her head..."such a cry baby"teased jalal but jodha shook her head saying a no ...jalal smiled..."ohk!!! if u will leave me nd will not cry... i will come tomorrow their nd talk to yr bhaiya nd take permission nd will bring u here" said jalal...jodha stopped crying wiped her tears on his shirt...jalal fakely turned his face in annoyance nd jodha smiled...she luvs to annoy him...she said bye to all...again ran to jalal nd hugged him nd show tongue to mirza...mirza shows his fist to jodha nd whispered 'i will broke yr nose'...jodha covered her nose which made all smile...jodha was near her car...she turned "i will miss u all except mirza" said jodha naughtily "kyu" asked mirza knowing her jokes "coz u havent done anything for me...btaao tume mere liye kiya lya hai"jodha asked teasingly "mai tumhaare liya sab kuch karta, magar mjhe kaam tha, mai tumhaare liye doob ke marta, magar mjhe zukhaam tha" said mirza knowing jodha will get annoyed...jodha ran behind him like a kid...soon mirza said sry nd she left from there,,,

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PRECAP- pill revelation...(may be...not sure)

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Edited by aisha.....11110 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018

Res
Yay finally, its ok dear i read the end part...now worries, something is better than nothing!
Will read all and comment again!!
Thank u dear!

Unres 😊
Just finished reading...OMG it is hilarious i was continuously laughing while reading...jo is sooo cute, Jallu stuck between Jo Mirza and Veer...hilarious...Veer's comments were just hilarious...
Awesome update, i cant wait for the second part...update soon if u can!! I just loved it sooo much!
Jallu's trick her to get her out of the bathroom 😆
Simply awesome update, loved it! I know i m repeating my words but cant think of other words 😳


ufff...thnk god u liked it
as this chappy is dedicated to u
veer...this character is only for fun
thnx a lottt 😃
i was so nervous before but now i m feeling lighr
thnx a lot
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rishbala3018



I unresd my comment and waiting eagerly for tomoro 😃


kyu 😆 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow, wonderful. I can not stop laughing.
its amazing
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was very nice and sweat yaar...
Cool I loved veer and halal talk...!!!!
Very fuunnny🤣
I just can't stop smiling...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ashwini.bhr

wow, wonderful. I can not stop laughing.

its amazing


thnx dear 😃

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