UNPREDICTABLE LOVE #1 {closed} new link added - Page 34

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UPDATE KAB MILNE WALA HAI?????😭

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Construction... Update kab milegi😃

IN THE CAR

jodha was sitting in the back seat or we
should say sleeping...while rishika nd jalal was in the front...

soon they met the others at the parking area of singh's mansion

ruqs salima mirza piya sunaina all jumped over jalal nd asked him about the
news nd all the photos of him nd jodha ...soon jalal solved their
misunderstanding and made them believe that they all were rumours..."jodha
kahan hai "asked the group..."oh she is sleeping...jaldi uth gayi
naa" said rishika...

soon all were shifted to a cool cab

santram was driving nd piya was beside him...

mirza salima nd sunaina .was in the second row...maan ruqs nd moti in the third
nd jalal jodha and ronny in the fourth

...jodha was sleeping as her head was on ronny's lap nd her legs on jalal's lap

...jodha wake from her sleep nd stretched her legs nd arms...while doing this
her leg hitted jalal's cheek but she didnt realised..."arre why the car is
not starting" said jodha yawningly..."waiting for you to wake
princess..." said santram nd started the car all were screaming "yeah
" when the car started while jalal was rubbing his cheeks..

chapter-9

"bhaiya when we will reach

there" asked jodha pulling ronny's collar

"first leave my collar then i will tell u" said ronny trying to free his collar from jodha "btw...i didnt asked u...i asked bhaiya nd from when i started calling u bhaiya!!!! haann?? ...humesha se bhai khti hu...nd if u

want me to call u 'bhaiya' marry my freind...kyun moti...see
saath saath i m also playing a typical sister...apni bhabhi jaan ke aane k
liye preparing pehle se...cool naa?? said jodha...winking at moti...nd troubling ronny but she dont know that except her
bro she is also troubling a guy whose carrying the burden of her legs which r continuously hitting his thighs nd arms when she was talking... but accept her
mouth ...her hands nd legs were also moving "if u were not asking me then why u were troubling me...haan??
or vhi baat rhi...welcoming yr 'bhabhi jaan' i had already talked to mom
nd dad...dont take tension our marriage will be in this year
only" said ronny surprising every one
...all were happy...congratulated them but the most was moti nd
jodha...moti thanked ronny by her eyes... "oye hoi...my would be bhabhi discovered her new version of
talking...eye talk..haan? vaise bhai congratulations...i m really very
happy for both of u" said jodha
but she didnt knew she hitted the same guy whom she hitted today
morning but the only difference is in morning...the pain was on forehead
but now on his arm...he could not control him now...frustration had reached
its limit now...already he was in anger because of
the weak signal which made him supah! angry but now alone jodha had to suffer...who could control the non stop

talking+frustration+pain "what do
u want...tab se bak bak bak ...in morning hitted my forehead but now
on my arm...kya chahti ho...i m not an iron man...m to a human...got
dammm!!!!!! mjhe bhi dard hota hai...from the last half n hour controlling
myself ki chodo yrr...but now its a limit ...sunaina can u exchange the
seat from jodha...plz" jalal said all in an angry young man mood...jodha got scared...his red eyes
symbolises that he is a short tempered man...it was like seeing a red bull
in jalal...jodha's tear was like water fall ..falling non-stop...hurting him
again...was unbearable for her...her talking was frustration from
him...the only thing that captured on her mind was 'i hurted someone who is coming close to me...again!
but today some thing is different it is not my birthday' she luked at
moti who understood her state of mind...her hands automatically went inside
her hand bag...she took 6 pills nd in no time she had it...her tears
realised jalal his mistake but before he could say anything jodha said those
words who he never wanted to hear from her "sry jalal !!! again...i did it by mistake...sry...sunaina u
can come...i will sit on yr seat..." said jodha...all were shocked except moti...she knew her
frnd...santram nd piya hadnt heard all this because of their headphones...they
were busy booking the hotel...shooting related problems etc... ronny was not
at all happy with this behaviour of jalal towards his sister but was
stopped by moti like she was telling him that they will sought it
by them self...jalal was in guilt ...again hurting her...again
being the reason of her tears...but the only thing that stroked on his mind was the pills..the pain on her eyes before taking pills can easily be seen but after that her... eyes were blank not showing any emotions..."sorry jodha...for everything i said...for breaking my
promise" said a guilty jalal...rishika
was shocked seeing another face of his brother...his concern for
jodha...tears was on her eyes but pain could be seen in jallal ..."arre chod naa...ho gaya so ho gaya...but dare to break yr promise
again...i will not spare u...i m hungry aunty had packed some food for me
naa.." said a totally changed
jodha...this behaviour of jodha confirmed jalal that something was
not ok with jodha...before 15 minutes she was drowned in tears but now
she forgot about it...then his mind came to the real goal...the
pills...something was there in the pills...why jodha takes it nd what it is for...he had to find it soon..."vaise
jodha it will take 2 days to reach manali"said ruqs to cool down the atmosphere..."what!!! bhaiya will drive for 2 days without taking rest...or
hum sab in car...matlab for 2 days ...where we will bath..brush...nd what we
will eat...eat se i remember ki jalal u havnt gave me the food yet" said jodha with a pout which made every
one laugh...jalal gave her the lunch...she ate it whole...moti was tensed
for her..."vaise jodha...we r going to
stay at night in hotel nd will continue our trip in early morning" said jalal clearing her doubt "jodha
u said that we r changing our seats soo.." said sunaina but was interrupted by jodha "i was kidding sunaina...flow flow mei nikal gaya ...right
jalal" said jodha...jalal agreed with
jodha...in return they got 'a not so funny' luk from sunaina which made both
chuckle

IT WAS ALMOST 8pm

all were sleeping except jodha...santram was driving...jalal had slept while checking mails in his
i-phone...jodha was resting her head on jalal's shoulder nd was luking out of the window...suddenly the car stopped at a lavish hotel...jodha was awe
luking the extravagant hotel ...it luks so beautiful+traditional..."bhaiya where r we" asked
jodha "Jaipur! princess
"answered santram...

"itz beautiful bhaiya" screamed jodha...waking everyone...jalal was amazed+happy+lil bit
shocked seeing jodha holding his arm...sitting so close to him 'she is irresistible' thought jalal to himself but at the
next moment scolded himself for his own behaviour...jodha saw him lost in
himself "oye kya hua???? lost yr senses
naaa...this place is magical...what can we do" jalal showed his arm to her which
was snaked by her hands...she stared at their locked hands nd then at jalal,
narrowing her eyes...jalal was confused with this gesture of her...but at
the same time enjoying her antics "tum situation ka advantage lena kab chodoge...chalo leave me now...see such a beautiful place nd u holding me" jalal was flabbergasted with her answer...his chin dropped down in
shock "chodo yrr...or shut yr
mouth...how many times i have to tell u ki if u will keep yr mouth
open...flies will come,,lay eggs nd then gayab ho jaayengi...so close yr
mouth" said jodha closing his mouth..."ohhh!! 'ulta chor kotwal ko daante' see...who is taking
advantage...u r holding my arm not me" said jalal clearing her misunderstanding but he confused her more by
his idiom "jalal who is 'kotwal' me
or u...i think mai he hu bcoz i cant be 'chor' naaa..." said jodha showing that she understood the meaning "uhhh...chodo...u leave my hand" said jalal in a loud voice which shows his
confusion+frustration "haan toh thiik hai naa...why r u screaming ...i m not deaf...or if u want to say
only this ...so what was the need for adding the idiom between" said jodha leaving his hand with a jerk like she was trying to show itz
not her fault "arre yrr jaldi aao naa...planning to stay whole night there kya" said maan who was calling them from the last 15 mins

ALL WERE NOW AT THEIR RESPECTIVE ROOMS FOR THE NIGHT STAY

"bhai do u want something we all are exhausted" asked rishika "no rishi...i have some work to complete...if i m not wrong we r going to stay in manali only for 1 week naa" asked jalal while mailing some imp. documents to the producers+clients of khan's industry..."yess bhai...but why u r asking it now...nd why u r again into yr work" asked a concerned sister..."rishi...leave it naa ...did u have yr dinner nd jodha...usne khaya kuch" asked jalal "bhai.. jodha toh subah se kuch na khuch khaye jaa rhi...she is eating a lot today nd also didn't slept ...ptani what had happened to her" said rishika...this statement of her alarmed jodha...he again started to think about her ...yes..today she had a lot nor she slept...something is not fine...he bid bye to rishika and went to jodha to ask about her health...is she ok or not...going to confirm his state of mind

At jodha's room

"jodha why didnt u told me...u had promised me naa...what was the need to take the pills again...bass rishika asked u about yr b'day only naa...itni itni baaton k liye...u dont need to take the pills nd u had over dose ...u only have are allowed to take 3 pills but u had 5...today also u had it...6 pills ...i had to consult the doctor...u not only had promised me but doctor tooo...nd if needed we will return in 2 days itself" said moti...last words of her made jodha shiver...being with close ones feels really nice..."but moti yr marriage...what about ronny bhai ...he is so happy that u r with him...my internship" said jodha to stop her "nothing is imp. than u to me nd if ronny would be in my place ...he would also done this only...u can do yr internship in paris too as that is the starting place of yr career...that place gave u hope...nd plz jodha whatever happened...let it go...forget it as a nightmare...start a new life...juzt cry yr heart out yr past" said moti to manofy her but she got the same reply "itz easy to say that...nd moti i want that guilt...that i m not lucky for anyone...nd i dont want to go back too early" said jodha trying to understand moti her point of view "r u mad jodha...we r going nhi toh i will tell everything to santram bhaiya nd then dont regret" said moti scaring her "we will go whenever doctor will say...but plz dont tell him...i dont know he will forgive me or not for snatching the most precious thing he craved all his life...now piya is coming close to him...i can see happiness in his eyes now...the love..the care...moti he started realising his love for piya...but few more days...they will also marry but after knowing the truth...i dont know he will forgive me or not i dont wAnt to snatch his happiness from him" said jodha opening her fear to moti...moti nodded nd left from there giving space to jodha...jodha stood their numb...then only jalal came..."hey jodha...not slept yet...kya hua...had yr dinner?" asked jalal ...in return jodha only nodded positively which made him restless "kuch bol toh...chatter box chup kyu?? " again jalal tried to start the conversation...but jodhA smiled lightly nd sat on the bed luking down...it was now 15 mins...jodha had not seen jalal nor she moved her head upwards...continuously luking the floor...actually the fear of going away from alll...was unbearable for her...her silence was eating jalal...only 15 mins had past but ...he is missing her chirpy voice...joyous mood ...he is missing the jodha...who would say 'haawww' in her every line...her innocence, her teasing...her troubling him...her angry pout...he is missing her "jodha plz say something..say something...FOR ME" said jalal concernly...now jodha luked up...he can see in her eyes ...she was not happy...many things was inside her..."shayad jalal i may leave this place in next 2 days" said jodha...jalal was taken a back...he cant bear her silence...what will happen is she will leave him...something is pulling him towards her but now he had to console her..."jodha i dont know the reason but if u r going there would be something imp. behind this but u r also not sure that u will leave in two days itself...jodha think positive,,,everything happens for gud only" these words of jalal were like a pain killer for jodha...she smiled nd immediately hugged him...he was amazed but he consoled her nd too hugged her back with the same passion...he didnt realise when jodha slept on his embrace feeling his warmth...she hadnt slept from the last 15 hrs of continuous journey...this was the side effect of the pills...happening coz of the overdose...he made her slept on the bed...nd was about to go when he heard her murmuring something in her sleep "i dont want to take pills...sry moti" jodha was continuously murmuring it ...jalal was confused but it make clear that something is with pills only...moti knew it too...now he hadd to find it in any way

like this they came to their destination...maan nd jodha's friendship was growing...jalal nd jodha would tease each other but enjoyed their company a lot...they started being possessive to each other...santram nd piya were enjoying being with each other...this 2 day journey was giving a new phase to their life or u can say a new meaning...

the day of shooting came...all were ready for the shooting

"oh hero! bada ready sheady ho raha hai...aaj toh ruqs tujh pei lattu " said jodha teasing maan "heheheh jodha" said maan blushingly which made jodha laugh out loud "jodha how i m luking????" asked jalal cheesly "ummm...like a tail of a dog" said jodha making him shut..."believe me mr. khan ...u r luking hot as usual" said sunaina huskly "really sunaina...how sweet of u" said jalal as he know jodha would be jealous "aagayi vamp!" muttered jodha which made maan chuckle "jalal be ready yr seen is comming soon" said santram...jalal was going for final touch up after winking at jodha ...sunaina was behind him..."jodha...vaise sunaina is beautiful...dont u think soo" said maan but instantly shut his mouth seeing jodha like she was ready to eat him raw

the shooting started

sry for all the mistakes

i hadnt read it

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Originally posted by: SARA4444

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amazing chapter 👏⭐️

loved it 😳

jodha is leaving 😲 plzz do something she should not leave 😳

jodha jealous .. hayee 😳

superb update

continue soon 😊