Chalo GM Discuss - Page 6

Originally posted by: mandyg

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131 jalal comes close to her...holdes her hands...n tells her ..isse pehle aap humse kuch kahe...hum aapse kuch kehna chate hain...

132. jodha begum...aaj tak hum yeh baat kisise bhi nahin kahe hain...ki humare pass jo dil hai woh bas aapke liye dhahdakta hai...aur yeh jalal aapse beintehaan mohabbat karta hai...

133. saying this he covers jodha with her dupatta which was lying on bed...

134, now his eyes are down...

135, jodha now becomes very emotional n says...shahnshan...aapne jo abhi kaha woh humare liye bahut maine rakhta hai...humne kabhi nahin socha tha kii yeh din humari zindagi me ayega...kii humme aapse prem hojayega...haan shahnshah...hum bhi aapse bahut prem karte hain...aur aapke liye hi hum hai...

136. hearing jodhas confession, jalal is in cloud nine...he is happy like anything...he is smiling like a mad man...

137. he immediately tighetens jodhas hand with his hands,,,,,n says hum bahut khush hai jodha begum...yeh humari zindagi ke sabse behatrin din hai...sabse acha din hai...

138. now both of them confessed. both holding each others hands...n smiling...

139. jalal now kisses jodha on her forehead...seeing this jodha is in smiles as well as a bit quiet...n eyes down...

140. now both of them dont know what to do further.,...

141. jalal now says jodha hum bahut khush hai jodha begum...hum bahut hi jyada khush hai...saying this he is about to make a turn...jodha holds his hand,...

142. now all smiles gone...both of them in serious...jalal also is serious...

143. jalal turns...looks at jodha...jodha alos looks into jalals eyes...n then eys down...

144. wind blows...silence again,...

145. jalal approaches towards jodhas cheek...n give her a peck...

146, jodha standing still...eyes down with a tiny bit of shyinly smiling ...a little bit...

147. jodha turns back after this...

148. jalal approaches her n holds her shoulders with both hands...jodhas heartbeat increases...

149. jalal now goes very close to her n holds her...his arms around her belly...n his face near her neck...

150.. jodhas heartbeat is stronger...

151..jalal ki*ses her hair...then her ear... slowly ki*ses her neck...smoothly...jodhas eyes close...

152. jalal then tries to open the dupatta ...so he makes jodha turn while opening the dupatta...

153. jodha is now face to face with jalal without any dupatta...

154. she is also serious...so jalal now looks her with a very admirable way...jodha feels this...n goes n holds shahnshaw front n leans on him...n then slowly hugs him...

155... this slow hug slowy slowly becomes a tight hug...jalals arms around jodha n vice versa...

156. jalal touching jodhas back now...

157... his hands on her back...he feels it...

158. both of them in a hugging state ...jalal tries to side her hair...n then open jodhas dori...

Originally posted by: happygolucky099

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how is it? mujhe likhte hue hi maza araha hai...kaash kuch aisa ho jaye...

Originally posted by: subha_rath2004

how is it? mujhe likhte hue hi maza araha hai...kaash kuch aisa ho jaye...

159. jalal opens jodhas dori...jodha in hugging jalal is fully nervous...

160. while opening dori jalal says jodha...aapki dil ki dhadkanein hum ayahan bhi sunai derahi he...

161. jodha smiles a bit...

162. jalal then slowing moves his hand towards her blouse's hooks...then jodha pushes him abit n comes other side...

163. jalal immediately goes to her n holds her from back side...

164. jodha says...shahnshah humme...

165. jalal says kuch nahin jodha ..bas isse mehsoos kijiye...

166. he kis*es her neck slowly n now a bit more times...holding her belly n doing harkats...jodha also holds his hands on her belly...

167. jalal then slowly takes his hands out n tries to open the hooks of her blo*se back side...while opening he touches her back in a very seducti*e way...

168. jodha feels it...after one hook on...jodha again turns n hugs him...

169...this time jalal in smiles...

170... jalal says jodha begum...humme dekhiye...humari taraf dekhiye...

171... jodha looks at him...

172. jalal says dariye matt...aap jahan pe ruk jana chahti he wahan be jhijak humme keh sakti hain...

173, a nervous jodha now smiles abit with eyes down...

174. then jalal carries jodha in his arms...

175. then he carries jodha to the bed...

176. he slowly places jodha on bed...

177. he then opens his jamma.'s top...sherwani...

178..now he is bare body...jodha lying on bed looks at jalal...but when jalal looks at jodha ..jodha looks other way...

179...now jalal comes n lies on bed...

180. both of them lying...

181.. jodha now places her hand on jalal...

182. jalal looks at her,,,then he also puts his hand around her...n slowly moved towards her...n he slowly comes on her...

183. he starts to kis* her on neck...n then...slowly moves towards her lips...

184. he kis*es her slowly n then passionately...

185. both holding hands...

rest of the thngs u all imagine yar...

Kyaa this is awesome , magnificient , brilliant !!!!

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Kyaa this is awesome , magnificient , brilliant !!!!

I'm like this after reading the whole thing

What a GM you have ... 😆

I need a day after version yaa phir a new version ... ☺️

i will write both...ok...give me some time to visualise things...ok...GM on...😉

Originally posted by: subha_rath2004

i will write both...ok...give me some time to visualise things...ok...GM on...😉