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@ Gayuraj
Thanks so much yaar very encouraging words indeed😳
@ Ayesha
Awww. I did not know that u really noticed when i did not reply to all chapters. Last second chapter i could not reply bec it reminded me of few things and could not bring myself to type much.
But, let me tell u, i am getting hooked on to this story now. I have read the chapter where jalal and his gang es to her house first time 5 times, then movie chapter 3 times and dance chapter 3 times and last one 2 times too. I just love ur ff but the best thing about u is ur styke of writing. The way u write dailgues and play with words is just amazing. It is like u want to savor each word by repeating again, i actually do that with some of ur sentences or dualogues. I read it few times and just enjoy reading it as if i am eating yummy ben and jerrys chocolate ice cream.
Ayesha, I read your comments thrice...and how would I not notice you missing dear?
But, thanks so much for getting back to me...
Made my day! 😃Truly!
@ Anu
Very nice development! I clubbed reading last few updates together and like the direction, pace and ofcourse the story telling!Don't know how far u've thought ahead but overall I like the way you are taking the story forward.
I've thought the entire story ahead Anu...that's why the definitive chapters in the index...nothing other than the standard fare though...just the execution may vary😳
I could totally relate to Jodha when she was honest enuf to tell him he is attractive but she is not attracted to him... And then slowly his thoughts and positives coming to haunt her slowly...
Awww thanks dear
Look forward to the next update. Tease you are! Leaving it hanging for us to wonder ...what next!
Will update soon
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