Of Poisons and Antidotes

Originally posted by: tamy267

how beautiful u write Kshithi !!😲 I have become a fan of your's !

how insightful and thoughtful...amazing piece of writing..❤️

Originally posted by: kmmdesai

Awww... Tamy. Thank you. 😳

Is Tamy your name? 😊

Love

Kshithi

Originally posted by: tamy267

yeah that's my name😊

I found your writing in Lashy's post first...from then I've been following u😳

Originally posted by: kmmdesai

Hello All,

One single moment changed everything for Jalal and Jodha. The very fabric of their existence, what they were, what they are and what they are going to be froze in that one moment. Their entire journey was to reach this single moment in time.

Jalal was reborn that day. Did she only drink poison from the cup? With one sweep of hand, she drank all the poison which was slowly killing Jalal from the inside; the poison which was eating his soul. All that anger, hatred, loneliness, hurt were feasting on Jalal's soul, slowly rendering Jalal a mere shell. She cleansed Jalal with her sacrifice. She, with her very life, battled Jalal's inner demons that were holding his heart captive. She emerged victorious. Jalal suddenly was no longer a Shehenshah. He was just a man, a man with dreams, expectations and wishes; a man with hope and a man with heart.

Jalal now has new eyes; eyes which see love everywhere. Jalal now has new soul; soul which shines brighter than the Sun. Jalal now has new heart; heart which beats to the rhythm of another.

Jalal now knows what Jalal wants, not what a Shehenshah wants. All his life he thought him and Shehenshah was one and the same. Now he knows better. Being Shehensha is just what he does in life. What he wants from life is little bit of love, love of a person who will stand by him, not the mask of Shehenshah. He wants to be taken care of and to take care of the person who belongs to him. Jalal now wants only her.

Jodha was reborn that day. Did he give the antidote only to the poison? He was the antidote to her battered heart and soul; her every existence. He was the elixir who breathed new life into Jodha; breathed new will and hope to live. He was rain in her desert of a heart. He was the strength on which Jodha leaned after the battle which demanded her everything. Jodha was no longer merely a woman. She was the queen; the queen of his heart.👏👏👏

Jodha now has new eyes; eyes which follows him everywhere. Jodha now has new soul; soul which lightens up his world. Jodha now has new heart; heart which beats to the rhythm of another.

Jodha now knows what she wants. She wants to be a wife, to stand by him always. All Jodha's wishes and existence is now tied to him. Jodha want to take care of and to be taken care of from the person who is the most important person in her life. Jodha wants only him.

Love

Kshithi

Originally posted by: tamy267

how beautiful u write Kshithi !!😲 I have become a fan of your's !

how insightful and thoughtful...amazing piece of writing..❤️

Originally posted by: MaddyO

Kshithi 👏

Wow you are a wonderful insightful writer👍🏼
You have described Jalal's inner turmoil and hurt so wonderfully. By her action Jodha told him he meant so much to her that she can willingly sacrifice her life to save his.
That wiped off his hurt at her lack of feelings and gave him hope, and Jalal gave Jodha a reason to live - for him

He just does not understand that she did it out of love, as yet - nor does she fully. So they both are doing the dance to not reveal their own feelings to the other but hoping the other does it first

I want to highlight your entire post because everything is so true, still making bold those lines that moved me

I love that you end each post with love, right back at you 🤗

Originally posted by: MaddyO

Tamy truly she is wonderful writer, and thank you for bringing her post to my attention😊

Kshitthi I hope you post more regularly, cos I love your writing