OS: Jodha takes in poison

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Ok guys trying my hand on a new os penning down my imagination hope u like it
At nikah place
Maulavi : Ab Begum Sahiba khir piyengi or usi patra se shehnshah kheer lenge
Jodha shocked on hearing this she knew that it was too dangerous. Benazir takes in the drink .
In the Dargah
Jodha Soul : shehnshah us waqt hamare man bohot ghabra raha tha or aoke sath bitaye hue sare vo pal hume yad a rhe the hume ehsas ho rha tha ki ye kartavya se badkar koi or ehsaas tha humare dil mai apke liye hum sirf apko surakshit krna chahte the kisi bhi haal mai
Jalal Soul : haan Mariam uz Zamani or apne kar bhi dikhaya jo shahyad humare liye koi nhi kar skta tha
On the other hand Salim Chishti is praying to allah for Jalal
At nikah place
Jalal was about to take the drink the kheer when Jodha comes and snatches it from him
Jalal : ye kya behoodgi hai Jodha Begum
Jodha : shehnshah hum apni akhon ke saamne apko yuh marne nhi denge is kheer mai zeher hai or aj is baat ko sabit karne ke liye hum ise khud piyenge hum ap sabse ab antim vida lete h
Jodha remembers her moments with Jalal(In akhon mai tum plays in BG) ,
Maham sees Jodha shocked and seeing sum truth in her words . Jalal could not take his eyes away from Jodha . Hamida Bano and Salima all nodding their face Jodha drinks the kheer and her lips turn greenish blue instantly and she was about to fall when Jalal holds her . Jalal is shocked
Hamida : (shouts)Jodhaa!!
Jalal : (expression of shock and shouts) Jodha begum !
Hamida : chaliye jaldi inhe inke hojre mai lekar chaliye
Jalal : (stares at Benazir) sainiko is namurad ko pakad kar kaid khane mai band kardo or jaldi se khawaja shera ko bulaya jaye
Jalal carries Jodha in his arms . Adham is fully disgusted and moves away .
Jalal: ( walks fast shouting) : Jodha akhein khuli rakhiye Jodha ap hume chod kar nhi jaa skti .
Jalal reaches Jodha hauzra is about to enter when he remebers his words that he will never enter her hauzra even if she closes her eyes he enters the haujra with a look of repent makes Jodha lie on bed
Jalal : Jodha Begum uthiye uthiye dekhiye hum bilkil thik h . Jodha , Jodha !!
Khwaja Shera enters
Jalal : acha hua ap aa gyi dekhiye na humari Jodha ko kya ho gya h use kahiye na uthne ko
Khwaja Shera examines Jodha .
Khwaja Shera : hume maaf kar di jiye shehnshah par Jodha Begum ko hum nahi bacha skte zeher unke sharir mai fail chuka h ab vo m...(Jalal stops her in mid)
Jalal : ( shouts)(with tears in his eyes)khamosh gustakh !! (Ruqaiya Maham and Hamida shaked out of such a shout) Jodha Begum nahi jaa skti hume chod kar...dekhna vo uthegi hum uthate hai unhe (Jalal goes and sits beside Jodha )(with a child like face ) Jodha utho uthiye Jodha Begum ( he shakes her) ye humara hukm hai uth jaiye (Jalal breaks down )
Hamida consoles Jalal .
Jalal : sab humari galti h ammi jaan Jodha Begum ne hume kitni baar btaya par humne sirf unka apmaan kiya unki baat nahi suni kyu kyu nhi suni humne unki baat hum nahi reh sakte Jodha ke bina Ammi jaan nahi reh sakte Ya allah humara sab lele hume humari Jodha lauta de ya khuda !!
Ruqaiya and Maham shocked at this sentence of Jalal and stare at him
Hamida was about to say something when some soldiers enter
Soldier: shehnshah ka iqbaal buland ho ! shehnshah benazir ki bandhi zakira apse bas ekl bar milna chahti h humare lakh mana karne par bhi vo andar ghusne ka prayas kar rhi h uska kehna hai ki vo Jodha Begum ko bacha sakti h
Suddenly shattered Jalal raises his eyes and turns around Salima and Hamida also look behind with hope ...
Jalal : kya sach ! khade kya ho kha h voh use jaldi andar lekar ao
Zakira : salam shenshah hum bhi apke guneh gaar hai hum jante the ki benazir ek vishkanya hai or humi ne uska sath dia par Jodha Begum ki himmat dekh kar aj hume apne kiye par pachtava ho rha h
Jalal : (disgusted and raises his tone) humare pas is samay in baton ka waqt nhi h tum yeh btao ki Jodha Begum ko bachane ka koi tareeka janti thi na tum btao hume btao hum unke liye kuch bhi karne ko taiyar hai
Zakira : Shehnshah ye moti isme zeher ka tod vala airkh h uss din jab deewane khas mai humne benazir ka jhootha dhudh piya tha to usne hume yehi airkh dia tha
Jalal remembers that tym and the way all insulted Jodha and Jodha trying to tell truth he gets disgusted by himself and repents.
Zakira goes and gives airkh to shehnshah Jalal goes and lifts Jodha head carefully and drops airkh into Jodha mouth (ISHQ HAI VO EHSAS MALE PLAING IN BG)Jalal caresses Jodha's face and moves his hand on her head Khwaja Shera examines Jodha and tells Jalal that she would come in conscious in an hour or so Jalal sighs of relief with Hamida and Salima
Jalal : ab ap sab jaakar aram kar sakte h hum yehi Jodha ke pas rhenge unke hosh ane tak
(ALL LEAVE EXCEPT RUQAIYA)
Ruqaiya : Jalal yaha bandhiya hai to Jodha Begum ke liye ap chalkar araam kar li jiye
Jalal : (disgusted) Ruqaiya hume ye tumse janne ki zarurat nahi h ki hume kha kab hona chahiye hum yahi Jodha Begum ke pas rahenge tum jaa skti ho
Ruqaiya fumes and leaves
Precap : Jodha Jalal nok jhok
How was it ??
plzz do comment and lyk n yes ready for jutta chappals

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I want the scene like thwt only ahhh cant wait till tom
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: NaughtyRa

I want the scene like thwt only ahhh cant wait till tom


hmm lets hope for the best
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: indudolai

awesome os...update soon...


thnxxx dear :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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excellent priyanka...👏

hope that the real serial also moves on these lines...👍🏼


i must admit that there are some really amazing writers on this Akdha forum👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice one i want exact thing to happen in serial
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: drveena



excellent priyanka...👏

hope that the real serial also moves on these lines...👍🏼


i must admit that there are some really amazing writers on this Akdha forum👏


aww thats so sweet of u thnxx a ton :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG OMG OMG!!!...
I just love this OS!!!...
Seeing jalal soo concerned for Jodha was sooo touching I wish u were the CV's of jodha akbar cuz I really want this to happen tomorrow!!!...
Pls pls pls update soon!!!...
Can't wait for the next update
Love ya ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome os
Plz continue and pm when u update plz
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jodha_Akbar_Luv

OMG OMG OMG!!!...
I just love this OS!!!...
Seeing jalal soo concerned for Jodha was sooo touching I wish u were the CV's of jodha akbar cuz I really want this to happen tomorrow!!!...
Pls pls pls update soon!!!...
Can't wait for the next update
Love ya ❤️


thnqq dear :* but look i cant assure u for pm :)

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