FF: a heartbeat is felt ( post Ben track); ch. 3 updated pg. 5 feb. 4 - Page 4

Originally posted by: lashy

Wow Divya, beautiful work - as usual!

Awww thanks so much ... 🤗

So serene, well paced and without the OTT drama. as you said (though, I did like most episodes after the Ben kaand, I must say😆 - what with having borne the brunt of OTT negativity - OTT positivity was welcome!)

I liked the episodes too ... This FF was when I was waiting for the track to get over and finally had to imagine it. While I like OTT episodes, my imagination does not work that way 😆

The line that caught my attention in your work was the 'What could happen to me as long as you're by my side?'

This holds true for both of them

Thanks for observing that - it is so true... Did you realize I used the famous hug post the Ben tracj that was discussed in one of Shyamala Aunty's posts? I am still waiting for that.

Now, when will we get to see a letter track unfolding in the serial?

After 100s of FFs give CVs ideas on how to resolve it 😉 Shraddha, perhaps you should write an OS on this?

I guess since that's their trump card, they'll hold back on that one a bit longer 😕

Practically speaking it will be when they have a new villain to replace MA- that is why they are working overtime on making Ruqs villain 😆

Anyway, beautiful stuff Divya 🤗

Thanks!

Originally posted by: kmmdesai

Hi Divya

Great job.👏

I could not post this yesterday. I wish this could have happened without all the melodrama shown in the TV. I liked how you kept the scenes emotional, without looking OTT.

Thanks Kshithi- as long as the track is positive, I can even handle OTT.

Keep writing...

You too!

Love

Kshithi

PS: Still waitiing for a double ton!!!!😛

20 more to go! We are counting down with you 😊