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RECAP: Reva ran to Jodha's room... she screamed Jodha... Her face was filled with extreme worry... Jodha looked at her and Jodha got scared seeing her condition... with worry she ask kya hua reva... Reva with short breath Jodha Shenshah...

Jodha's eyes widen in shock... Reva kya hua shenshah ko... With tears Reva said... Shenshah daket ke saath ladte hue buri tarah se ghyaal hue hai... before Reva finish Jodha ran towards Jalal's room... her heart stop beating... Her tears were flowing... in minutes she has millions of negative thoughts... with bear feet she is running like rabbit... Her chunni came off from her head... Her face with anxious expression and flooding with tears she ran in Jalal rooms with ... The way she entered loudly running every one attention divert towards her...


CHAPTER 27
Jodha's heart beat is running at the speed of express train... Her face is filled with massive terror... Her breathing is short... The way she suddenly rushed in to the room... pushed everyone and went close to Jalal's bed...and her scary facial expression... distracted everyone in the room... every single eye stuck on her face... Including Jalal's...
Ek muddat se kar rahe hai intezaar tera
ek tammanna thi dilki maut sepehle ho didar tera

After three days of long wait to see her single gaze at last his desire fulfilled... Her traumatized face with tears... very few jewelries with no makeup no shoes... her chunni out of the place... and her pure and divine, genuine care for him... he felt immense peace and harmony seeing deep care and love for him... he felt he is blessed...he realized her love for him is still untouched and alive and not dried out with her tears... his entire body is injured with full of blood ... he is in enormous pain... Hakim is cleaning his deepest wound but that pain has no effect on his face... his face has pleasant smile seeing her care for him...just seeing her face gave him complete content feeling...

Jodha eyes widen in shock seeing his critical condition... blood all over... Tears are flooding out without any sob... She got freeze seeing that many wounds on his body... Finally their eyes met after DWK... They both are looking at each other with immense pure love... Jalal eyes filled with guilt and Jodha's eyes filled with concerned for him... Suddenly Jalal squirm aaahh in pain...but he is still looking at her without blink... Finally tears flow out of Jalal's eyes ... it was guilt... remorse... but not pain... She couldn't see him in tears...and pain... She forgot everything for a minute... sat next to him... didn't even bother her... the room was filled with many people... she put her hand on his head and with love caress on it... Her unstoppable tears were flowing out constantly... It was more painful for her to see him in this pain... Hakim was taking most painful stitches but his eyes didn't move to see that for a second... He was looking at her divine lovable caring wife... her caring touch was giving him pleasant feeling... his intolerable pain has no impact... both of them pouring out their pain... Hakim finished with stitch and pulled string to cut... again Jalal squealed in pain little louder than before... Jodha's attention diverted from his eyes to hand... Her face was bearing his pain...her entire body was shivering in shock... Her left hand was resting on bed... Jalal slowly moved his hand to put it on her hand and squeezed a little to comfort her, with the expression on his eyes, he will be fine... There was no necessary for the words... Their eyes communicate with each other .

Ruku and Maham fume seeing this scene... Rukaiya walked towards Jalal and with concern she asked him, Jalal are you in pain... Jalal finally moved his eyes towards Rukaiya and with his low energy he said;(sound of his voice was showing his inside guilt and outside painful wounds) yes I was in enormous ache ... but after seeing my love... My pain has vanished... My wound has no impact on me and again moved his eyes towards Jodha indicating her arrival... Jodha looked at him with immense love... Jalal's injuries shock impacted on Jodha to extreme... for a while everything blank out in her mind...she forgets what he did to her... her memory was freeze... She just wanted to see him happy and healthy... She just wanted to comfort him with her care and concern... Rukaiya felt insulted the way Jalal gave impotence to her...She was suppressing her inner turmoil... She gave fake smile to Jalal and moved back a little...

Hamida felt relived seeing Jalal's condition... and with tears she said loudly... Allah ka lakh lakh sukar hai... tum sahi salamat ho Jalal... Jalal gave a little smile to Hamida... then moved his eyes to see every one... then again back to Jodha... He was again lost in her divine glorious face... He had lost so much blood, he was feeling very week... his vision getting blurred but He tried and tried to keep looking at her... but finally his eyes close with pleasant content feeling...

Jodha with worried and shock... screamed ... shenshah... Jalal heard her anxious voice... he pushed hard and open his eyes for a second and hold he hand tight and gave her assurance he is not going anywhere... and close his eyes again...

Every one heart stops beating seeing Jalal unconscious... The way he closes his eyes and looked at Jodha as if it was final farewell ...

Maham (to showoff) with worried expression... Hakim sahib ... Kya hogya shenshah ko...

He said... vajire alliya, don't worry Shenshah is absolutely fine... I have given him the same medicine I gave it to you few weeks ago... After taking this medicine within ten minute goes to deep sleep for eight hours... Shenshah is immense pain...so I have given him this sleeping medicine...

Maham's expression change suddenly... He face was showing fear of getting caught... she had no idea Hakim will reveal her secret like this...

Hamida asked cross question with surprise... Why you needed this medication?

Maham with her witty trick immediately said... Actually one prisoner was very sick and was suffering for terrible pain so I request for this medicine for him...

Hamida was surpise with her answer... she knew she is so cruel and ruthless... why she worried for prisoner?

Jodha came back to her sense... Her freezed brain started to breathe again... She was out of the shock and realized she was sitting next to Jalal and caressing him... Her all pain came back... her unseen wounds opened again... Her unstoppable tears she controlled it... Her eyes again had same silence... She is still looking at him without a blink... He is in deep sleep with content peace on his face...

Jodha's mind notice words of Maham... but realize now... about sleeping medicine... She realize week ago Jalal also has same kind of experience... he went to sleep in Rukaiya's room... Her little mind immediately doubt on Maham... She looked at Maham with bitter look... and asked question to Hakim sahib... How long it takes to effect on body... Hakim with respond... about ten to fifteen minutes... She requests him to see the medicine... She asks him how you take this medicine with water... While talking to Hakim... Jodha was looking at Maham with angry and bitter look... Maham knew very well, Why Jodha is giving this fuming look.

Hakim said: Shenshah will sleep for at least eight hours straight... he is in too much pain so might be you hear him weeping in pain. It will take more than one week to fully recover...

Hamida requested everyone to leave Jalal alone... Everyone left other than Maham and Ruku... Jodha is still sitting next to Jalal...

Rukaiya with sarcastic way... Jodha begum you can go and rest... I will stay with Jalal to take care of him.

Jodha looked at her with annoying look... She said sure Rukaiya begum ... you are very special begum to Shenshah, you should stay with him... I am leaving... Hamida was surpise with Jodha leaving Jalal in this condition... but she was also aware Jalal's ego and all the hurtful things he had done... She couldn't say a word...

Jodha got up from the bed to leave but in deep sleep Jalal was holding her hand with strong grip like little child clutches her mother's pallu in sleep... Everyone notice Jalal strong grip on Jodha's hand... Hamida with smirk on her face... it is decided who will stay with Jalal... Jodha you take care of Jalal...

Rukaiya and Maham with defeated feeling walk out of the room...

Hamida went near Jodha... Put her hand on her hand... kissed on her forehead and with folded hand with tears she said I am tremendously sorry, I am a selfish mother... I know what you are going through but he needs you... please fulfill your wife duties...

Jodha was still not out of the shock of his injury...and now she remembered everything... Her heart filled with pain...suffocation...hatred and many more emotions... she needed shoulder to cry... She hugged Hamida with one hand and cried out with loud weep for long until she felt better... Hamida also with tears caress on her head with love that give her comfort she needed at that time... Without any communication they both share each other pain...Jalal is still holding her hand like his possession. Jodha felt much well after taking out her sorrow... sharing her pain with Hamida... She had kept this pain to herself for many days...

Jalal and Jodha are in alone in big room where they have shared their precious time together... Jodha's eye caught with the beautiful painting which was hanging on the wall, them resting in each other's arms under the tree... ... To stay in same room with him it was unfeasible for her... this painting was giving her sting... today their beautiful moment was painful for her... Her heart was enjoying his closeness but her mind for threatening her...

Two hours pass by... He is in deep sleep ... Jodha is sitting next to him... suddenly she heard squeals of him... His facial expression change...unexpectedly his eyes started shedding tears... She could see he is in vast pain... he started to talk in sleep... She heard...Jodha... robotically her hand went to his head to give him comfort... she caress his head... his tears are constantly coming out... few minutes later she heard again weeping in his sleep... then she started to hear more clear words...don't go... don't go... And again he said don't go... Jodha tried to quite him down... she said sshhh and caress again on his forehead... He was in very deep sleep... her voice didn't reach to him... his weeping was getting louder than before... he repeated same thing but added Jodha don't go... His tears flooding out and his face were filled with guilt and pain... Jodha's heart was crying seeing him in this condition... with his first look, she knew he has realized his mistake... and now his repenting in his dream... he is sobbing like a little child... his sobbing and talking increase... with very clear tone... "I am ruthless heartless shenshah, everyone hates me"... his weeping was louder... tear were still flooding out... She had no strength left to fight with her heart anymore... Seeing him in this much pain was more painful for her than him. She gave him soft hug and kissed on his forehead and cheeks, as soon as he felt her nearness he calms down... She constantly caress on his forehead until he felt peace again. She was feeling so helpless in front of her heart...

Jodha was sitting next to him and looking at him constantly... Her mind and heart were playing world war... but today after three days...her heart was winning again... She was lost in their beautiful moments once again... Finally she felt Jalal's little movement... Jalal freed her hand from his grip long back... she ran to the gate and told guard to call Rukaiya and Hamida... and she instructs dasi to bring mild khichdi for him... Rukaiya and Hamida both came running to the room... Jodha saw Rukaiya coming in the room... she swiftly got up from the bed so Ruku can sit next him... Hamida notice this but didn't say a word... Jodha went in to the corner so she can see him but he can't...Slowly Jalal opens his eyes and saw Rukaiya sitting next to him holding his hand...and Hamida standing next to Jalal... Jalal's eyes were looking for Jodha... Rukaiya asked him Kesa lag raha hai Jalal... Jalal with pain... bahot dard hai Rukaiya... hamara hath hil bhi nahi raha hamese... Hamida with worried tum fikra na karo ek hi hafte me tum durust ho jao ge... Aur ha tab tak tum he aaram ki sakt jarurat hai... Jalal: Ji ammi jaan.. kya hame pani mil sakta hai... Jodha was standing next to water jug...

Hamida: Jodha beta Jalal ko pani chahiye... Jodha with low tone unwillingly Ji ammijaan...Jalal realize she is standing behind his bad in the corner... he was so much in pain but still he moved his body to see her one gaze...Hamida with anxious tone; Jalal tum vaha se mat hilo ... Jodha pani leke yahi aa rahi hai... Jalal realized his impatience... she got glass of water and came near Jalal's bed... and gave glass of water to Rukaiya to feed Jalal...and moved in corner...her eyes are lowered ... Jalal wanted to see in her eyes... He is looking at her with sad expression and guilt on his face... Rukaiya and Hamida gave support to Jalal to sit... Rukaiya forward her hand with glass of water towards his mouth... Jalal stopped her and said Rukaiya ho sake to hume maaf kar dena par Hum kuch bhi khayenge ya peeyenge to sirf Jodha ke haath se...

Rukaiya fume inside, she gave him fake smile and moved from their... Jodha came near him robotically with lowered eyes... forward her hand with glass... Her eyes his still lowered... she decided not to look in his eyes...He drinks water...

Hamida saw discomfort of Jodha... and Jalal's guilty... Hamida with powerful instructive voice said Jodha hum aapko Jalal ki dekhabhal karne ki jimmedari sopte hai... aap unke saath rahiye jab tak vo puri tarah se thik na ho jaye... Hamida knew Jodha will not like this ... Jodha looked at Hamida with questionable face why me? But she didn't say a word out of respect and said Ji Ammijaan... Her eyes again filled with water but she controlled it very swiftly... Jalal didn't wanted to take advantage of the situation so he said ammijaan hame dekhbhal ki koi jarurat nahi... Aap Jodha ko pareshani mat dijye... Hum unki izzcha ki virudh unse kuch nahi karvayenge... Jodha finally lift her eyes and said hume koi aapti nahi hai, hum apna patni dharm nibhayege... Her eyes had no expression... She didn't seem upset, happy, sorrow, anger nothing... just nil... Jalal again scared with her silent approach... He wanted to apologies to her for his behavior...wanted see her pleasant smile on her face... Jalal with guilt expression; ammi jaan hum Jodha se akele me baat karna chahte hai... Hamida also felt that was necessary she smiled at Jalal and told Rukaiya to walk with her...

Finally Jodha and Jalal were alone in the room...Jodha is standing next to his bed... Jalal voice suddenly filled with enormous pain... he felt like crying out loud... his words stuck in his throats... finally without saying a word his tears started to flood out... Jalal's eyes stuck at her...Jodha is still standing there with lowered eyes... It took him more than minutes to gather his strength... finally word came out with tears...Jodha...Hume maaf kardo... humse phir se gunah ho gaya... hum ne aapko diwane khaas me beizzat kiya...before Jalal say anything... Jodha stopped him in between and with bitter sound... Shenshah... Aap Aaram farmaiye aapki swasthya thik nahi... aapko koi aavashyakta ho to hume aawaj dijye hum vaha pe bethe hai... Without looking at him she turn to walk towards sofa... Jalal was feeling so helpless... he realize she doesn't want to even talk... Jalal wanted say so much but she completely cut him off... Jodha went and sit on sofa... Her face is lowered...His apology made her angry... Jalal is sitting on bed resting his back on pillow... his eyes close... his tears flooding out... Deep sorrow in his face with mammoth guilt... He was feeling very weak physically... Inside his heart completely shattered...Jodha's ignorance killing him... Just few hours before he realized that he was wrong all along with his riyaya...His ruthless decision ruin many lives... He realized as a shenshah he is completely failed...As husband his failed... As a lover he is failed...In his ego and anger he hurt his best friend... His eyes constantly pouring out his grief. He recall many cases when he took decision with his brain only... ruthlessly he followed law only... he recall the recent conversation about 8 year old kid punishment to just enter in the garden... his heart breaking in little pieces...

Jodha is still looking down thinking about how he treated her ruthlessly... she still doesn't know why his behavior changed towards her and why suddenly he is apologizing...In this three days her heart became like stone... she heard little voice of sobbing ...Her heart stop beating... is he in pain again? She lift her eyes to see him... His eyes is close and tears are flooding out... His condition looked vulnerable and his face was showing massive pain and guilt... Seeing his condition Jodha's heart melt a little... She walked and sit on the bed next to him then slowly wipe his tears and asked him with lot of concern... Shenshah aapko bahot dard ho raha hai... Jalal opened his eyes and saw Jodha next him sitting... He completely broke seeing her care for him... With tears and sob he said... Ha Jodha hume bahot dard ho raha hai... pata hai muje kaha dard ho raha hai... he put his hand on his heart... and said...hume yaha dard ho raha hai... Aur ye dard ko sehen karne ki takat hum me nahi hai...shayad humare gunah ki ashimta ke age ye dard kuch nahi hai... Humne jab bhi tumhe chot phochai hai usse jyaada hi humne chot khai hai... he cried out loud and with folded hand... hume maaf kar do varna hum mar jayenge... Jodha ... Tumhari ye chuppi hume mar dalegi... Tumhari ye aakho me ye naarzgi... ye sanjidgi... humse bardast nahi ho rahi hai... Tumhari aakho me na to mohaabat hai nahi nafrat hai... Ye dardbhari aakho me hume sama lo...

Malum hai hume k huyi humse khata
par yun humse khafa hokar mat do saza
Siddhat se teri raah taak rahe hai
juda na hona tum banakar koi vajah
ek muddat se intezaar tera aur
Tanha kaat rahe hai zindgi
bas khuda se iltaja hai
ke maut se pehle naseeb ho teri maujudgi
LAUT AAO hamare ruksat se pehle
LAUT AAO k tumhe humari hai kasam
LAUT AAO k tum bin jee na paayeinge hum
LAUT AAO k tum bin adhure hai hum sanam
Akhari saas tak karte rahenge intezaar tera
Maut pe humara bas nhi par
ek tamanna hai dilki ke maut se pehle ho didar tera
LAUT AAO k hume jarurat hai teri
LAUTAAO k yeh hai imtihaan-e-mohobat meri
Laut aao...
laut aao...

(WRITTEN BY MANISHA)


Jodha with very cold apporch: Shenshah, apne aapko sambhaliye, she again wiped his tears... and said... Hame aapse koi narazgi nahi hai... par ye hmara dil jo hai usme koi ehsaas hi nahi hai... Lagta hai jese isme kuch mar gaya hai... Usme shayad prem ke liye ko jagah hi nahi bachi... nahi hum aapse nafrat karte hai nahi aapse prem karte hai... aap ne baar baar hamare dil ko thes pochai hai...Aur hume bahot taklif hui thi...par iss bar hum saare dard ki sima se aage badh gaye... Hame jine ki koi chah hi nahi aur marne ki abhi koi vajah nahi...shyad isko hi nirakar kehte hai... bas hamare dil me ek hi ehsaas bacha hai.. Ki aapke dard ko seh nahi sakta... Aapke ghaav hamre dil me dard dete hai...Aaapke aaso humare dil me kato ki tarah chubte hai... In tin dino me humne apne aap ko kanah ki bhakti me sop diya tha...Shayad iss sansar me kuch bacha hi nahi hamare liye...Pata nahi kyu par Hume aapki aankho me dekhne se dar lagta hai... kahi firse ...nafrat and finally her tears came out with sob ... Jalal was shocked to hear state of her mind and heart... He trembled... her peaceful voice complete shack him to the core... He realized that his ruthless behavior completely shattered her... He has lost her somewhere... She didn't sounded upset... she didn't sounded angry... He never thought she will change to this drastically... She went in to some type of coma... Jalal finally... with all his strength... moved his entire body towards her... He was in extreme pain but that pain was nothing compare his heart was feeling... He grab her both shoulder and hugged her tight... Jodha control her feeling not to move her hand... His guilt... his love... his warmth... finally melt her heart little more for him... She finally snack her hand through his broad chest to his back and hugged him tight... and cried out loud... His warm hug melted jodha's emotion ...Her rock hard heart melting like a mom for him... her heart has completely forgive him but still her mind was juggling... He cupped her face and said Jodha tum muje jo saja dena chaho de sakti ho... Par muje meri Jodha vapas chahiye...

Jodha with tears lowering her eyes... Shenshah... hume Jane dijye... apke khane vakt ho gaya hai... Jalal with deep voice: Jodha look in my eyes... Jodha's face is still lowered... she is looking down... Jalal asked her again...please Jodha... hamari Ankho me dekho... No response from Jodha... She is still looking down... Jalal lift her face from her chin...firmly asked Jodha look in my eyes... finally she slowly lift her eyes and both of them were eyeing each other with profound affection... Jalal saw in her eyes deep intense love for him... at last pleasant smile spared on his face ...although his shoulder started to bleed due to strain on it...Her emotionless eyes are filled with his love again...It was impossible for him to control any longer...He slowly came very near her face... cupped her face again and kissed on her cheek and he tried further to kiss on her lips but ...before he kiss her she stopped him put figure on his lips and said hame maaf kar dijye shenshah par hamre dil ne abhi iski ijaajat nahi di... Hamare itne nazdik aane ke liye aapko hamara dil phir se jitna padega...

Jalal with smirk: Jo hukum malika e Hindustan ka...Hame pata hai hamari jungle billi humse jayada vakt door nahi reh sakti...

She saw blood in his shoulder... She got panick...With angry tone: AApko ek baar me kuch samaj me kyu nahi aata... chup chap yah par beth jjaiye... Aur khabar dar yaha se hilne ki bhi koshish ki to...She walk towards table to get medicine with murmur: Itna khoon beh raha hai aur Janab ko prem karne ki soch rahe hai...

her murmur brought pleasant smile came on his face... Jodha came back with lep... Jalal is sitting on the bed staring at her without a blink...

Jodha with annoy look ab aap gurte hi rahenge ya apna kurta utareng...

Jalal with smirk and murmur iss baar ye jungle billi ne sherni ka roop dhar liya hai... lagata hai Abhi kaccha muje kha jayegi...

Jodha: Kya kaha aapne... Jara thik se boliye...

Jalal: Nahi Nahi Jodha begum me aapko kese kuch bol sakta hu... Jalal tried to take off his kurta but his wounds were so deep he couldn't took of his kurta... Jodha saw him struggling and told him... Rukiya... Hum madad karte hai aapki...

Jalal with smirk: Jodha begum, soch lijye, aapse hamari nazdikiya bardast nahi hogi...

Jodha gave him angry look and said: Ab aap ek sabd bhi nahi bolenge... Jodha open his kurta dori and slowly took of his kurta...and saw his body filled with wounds... She had no idea that he was injured that bad... Seeing his wounds her eyes filled with water... Jodha took lep and put in on his wound...as soon as it touches his body...Jalal scream in pain...It was burning...

He took lep from her hand and said... I am fine... their no need for this lep...

Jodha: Aap bacho ki tarah jid mad kijye... Ye malam se aapke ghav jaldi bhar jayenge...

Jalal: Nahi ye lep bahot jalan karta hai... Hum aese hi thik ho jayenge...

Jodha: thik he to phir, hume lagta hai aap aese hi thik ho jayenge, to aapko ab hamari koi aavshkyta nahi hai...aap aaram kijye hum chalte hai...

Jalal with mischievous tone: Rukiye Jodha begum, Apki to ek nazar hi kafi hai hame zakhmi karne ke liye... ye lep kya chiz hai...

Jodha smirk a little with her victory: She took a bowl of lep and started to put on Jalal's wound... Jalal is looking at her without a blink...His entire body was burning...In pain his eyes shedding tears...but he didn't move for a second... Jodha's hand were shivering...His wounds were deep but he didn't even said a word... Her face filled with his pain and tears rolled out from her eyes... Jalal's inner and outer both wounds got the medicine... he was feeling much relieved...

Dasi came inside with mild khichdi as per Jodha's instruction...

Jodha took bowl of Khichdi near Jalal, as soon as he saw Khichdi... Jalal with angry tone... Kya samaj rakha he aapne hum ye khayenge... Pure das ghante se humne kuch khya nahi aur aap hame ye bimaro ka khana khilaogi...

Jodha with smile: Ha ab ek hafte ke liye aapko yahi khana khana hai...

Jalal with anger: Har baat pe aap hum par hukum nahi chala sakti ... hum ye khana nahi khayenge... Ye bhi koi khane ki chij hai...

Jodha with smile: pata shenshah... Apki saltant me jayada tar log isi khane ko pane ke liye kitni mehnat karte hai...poore din mojoori karke yehi khana milta hai unhe... Aur is dal aur chawal se unka poora jivan chalta hai... aur ha kisi bhi surat me anan ka apman nahi karna chahiye...

Jalal realized his mistake immediately: Jodha begum, Aap sach keh rahi hai...Hamari riyaya issi khane se jinda hai...to hume bhi vohi khana chahiye... Hamari riyaya hamari santan hai...to jo unko milta hai vohi hume khana chahiye... Aaj se hum hafte me tin baar yahi khana hum khayenge...

Jodha got surprised and shocked... Suddenly change Jalal ... He is thinking so much deep for Riyaya... Ruthless Shenshah suddenly became a father of his saltant... Her tears came out in happiness... She forward spoon of khichdi to feed him... and at the same time both recall DWK...scene...How Jalal fed Rukaiya sweet... Jalal with very serious tone: Jodha begum, hume maaf kar dijye... Jodha lowered her eyes and continue feeding him... there was silence for long in the room... Jodha still had sting in her heart... Finally Jalal finished his dinner... Jodha: Aap aaram kijye hum thodi der me Kanah ki Aarti karke vapas aate hai... Jalal: Jodha begum, hum Agdha Sahib and Abdul se kuch jaruri baat ke liye milna chahte hai... Unhe hamre paas bhej dijye... Jodha with firm voice: Shenshah, AAp abhi aaram kijye... Kisi ko milne ki avshyakta nahi hai...kal subah mil lijye ga... Jalal looked at Jodha and smile at her...

Jalal went to sleep again...Jodha is sitting next him and staring at him ... he is sleeping in peace... his strong and powerful personality...looked so innocent while sleeping... Jodha's hand robotically went on his head to caress his hair... Jalal felt her touch in his sleep... pleasant smile came on his face... he swiftly opened his eyes... which embarrassed Jodha... She also swiftly took her hand off his head... Jalal gave her mischievous look and asked her... Jodha begum kya aapne hume maaf kardiya... Jodha didn't answer... Jalal to kya aapne khana kha liya...She respond Ji shenshah... Jalal: Kesi lagi apko khichdi Jodha begum... Jodha: achhi thi... Jodha was shocked...Apko kese pata chala humne kya khaya... humare piche jasoos rakhe hai aapne...

Jalal smirk... Hume pata tha ki aap aaj Khichdi hi khayegi... Hum bhi apko pehchante hai...Jodha smiled at Jalal... They both went to sleep...

Six days passed by... Jodha is taking care of Jalal... Jodha's heart and mind both had completely forgive Jalal...Staying with him entire day... she came to know his many little habits, she never noticed before...he eats every two hour... he brush his teeth three time a day... he does five time namaz... many more little things...they both came more and more close to each other... Jodha forget about entire DWK insult... Jalal's health is getting better... Jalal's love and respect for her was growing deeper and deeper... The way she took care of him he was amused...every little things ...his medicine... his cloths... his food...even she was controlling his sleep... she helped him in walking...exercising... She learned how to make lep...Jalal completely became depended on her... Physically they were distant but emotionally they came much closer than before...

It was early morning, Jodha went to do krishan's pooja...Rukaiya and Jalal in the room discussing about harem and other political issues...at that time group of hindu dasi came to meet Rukaiya... First she denied to meet them but then Jalal insist to see them... So she called them inside... Ask them what happened... One of the dasi requested that today is Karva chauth... and It is a big day for hindu married women... so if they can get day off from work ...Rukaiya with anger deined their request and said go back to work... Jalal was shocked with Rukaiya's behavior ...Jalal told all dasi to wait outside... and ask Rukaiya why she is ruthless with them...Why they can't celebrate their festival... Rukaiya with annoyance Jalal... Aap iss mamle me mat padiye... ye haram ka mamla hai aur vaha par sare fesle hum karte hai.. Jalal with anger: Rukaiya, Tum bhool rahi ho ye haram hamara hai... aur ye saltant ke hone vale fesle ke jimmedar hum hai... Ab humare sawal ke jawab do... Kya Mughal dasi ko tyohar ki chutti milti hai... Rukaiya ha par... Jalal: stopped her with his hand and looked at her with anger... He grab her hand and came out of the room and announce that today all hindu married dasi can take a day off ... All of the dasi's were surprise and happy with this decision... this is first time Jalal got involved and announce in their favor. Rukaiya was boiling inside... She looked at Jalal with anger and walked out from their...

Jalal called one of the Hindu dasi and asked her about Kadva choth... She explained in detail...Karva Chauth is a one day festival when all devoted hindu wives carry out auspicious rituals for wellbeing of their husband. They fast whole day without taking any food or water in order to show their devotion toward their husband and to ensure the long life of their husband... They dress like a bride with fine jewelry and expensive cloths and break their fast after seeing moon and their husband's face. Last ritual is husband feed their wife... Jalal smiled...

Precap: Karva Chauth... and Jalal's 1st step towards Akbar... Jodha accept Jalal...

Hello Friends... Don't forget to LIKE and put your COMMENTS... Also I have a request... Please suggest me a track you want in this FF... UR SUGGESTION AND OPINION MEANS LOT TO ME...

😛fewww finally read the whole story loved it, do pm me when you write next, now lets see what karwachaut have in store for jodha and jalal please read my new ff and comment also . loved your story👏
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msbharracharya 😛fewww finally read the whole story loved it, do pm me when you write next, now lets see what karwachaut have in store for jodha and jalal please read my new ff and comment also . loved your story

I am so glad that U love my story😃...fewww finally i like the word love. 😊 I hope Ur opinion has changed😃... Thanks for Reading entire story...😛
I will soon read your new story... I am already reading and commenting always on sazada and your 1st story... 👏

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago
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@Bhavini,as i promised i am posting my review of first thread.Kum likha hai samazna jyada.Ok?
Review for First thread

@Bhavini,my journey to read this ff became so beautiful.I don't know how i fall in love with this ff.

I can't give every chap review bec i read them all at one go.And i have very short memory.

Akdha story for me begans with Jodha's status of mind and Jalal's hate clash.But slowly and steadily they started to feel for each other.And their journey began with a cute note.

Jalal didn't trust her and humilate her through false letter.And Jodha is Rajkumari after all.How can she tolerate that insult in front of everybody?You narrated her pain in your words are too beautiful.

Sachai pata chalne par dauda Biwi ko lane Amir me.I enjoyed each and every dream of Jodha and Akbar.Whether it was sad or with happiness.

When Jalal came to Aamir he saw the paining which mainavati showed him.It was unique and beautiful way to express Jodha's feeling.My fav was that kissing painting and hug paiting.Jalal understand his mistake but helpless at that time.

Their too jealousy ne pichha nahi chhoda.Suraj aur Kanika do villian and vamp dono khade the rahome.

Jodha jealous towards Kanika and Jalal jealous towards Suraj.But Suraj is shameless[sorry] here.He knew she is merried and love jalal but still usne chance me dance nahi chhoda.But Jodha left that place.

In temple she remember her oath to kill jalal.But kaise mare?Jalal heard Lilavati and jodha's talk where she was talking about her feeling why she don't want to go near to jalal.Jalal was shocked.He didn't knew the inner feeling of Jodha.Jodha ko samazne me ab use aasani rahegi.They both completed holy rituals peacefully.

Jalal was convencing Jodha to come to Agra with him but her heart was not agree with that.And Jalal's strong and bitter word of Talaq.Uske kanome jaise jalta loha daal diya ho.She felt insulted and what she had done?woh bhi char ghante baad.She was talking with jalal calmly and suddenly her mouth was full of blood?how can jalal tolerate?but thank god she confessed that she had poison.So jalal ran toward nearby Aashram and pray to him to save Jodha.That night was very tough for him.But thank god,woh bach gai.

Again dono ke beech me takraar shuru."Kyon bachaya hume?and jalal's tight slap over her face.[Main shock me aa gai thi] but sometimes pagalpan rokne ke liye jaroori ho jata hai.

So their journey of love start from there.They both came to know that they both love each other very very much.And their eyes talk.Naino ki bhasha.Jodha told him not to spend their SR in Jungle but want to spend it in Agra that she wanted to feel special.

In Agra again one hurdle called Ruku waiting for her.Jalal promised to spend night with Jodha and made all the proper arrangemts but Ruku played game and jalal slept with her.Jalal selected dress jwellery for jodha with excitement and love but aah?use kya maloom tha ki what is there in future's stomach.

And again MU.Jodha thought jalal's fault and Jalal was unaware what happened around him?and he was thinking Jodha begum thinking that he had done it purposly?oh no?and woh Bhidu Agyaat vaas me chale gaye.Kisiko bina bataye.Jate jate delicious aamiri food toh khake jate?

Par Abdul naam ki chabi chhod gaye jodha ke liye.He told jodha where is jalal?but in sign language.

Aur fir jo hua.Ho gai teri balle balle! mast episode.Dono ka pyaar,"Bahoke darmiya do pyaar mil rahe hai.jane kya bole mun?" aur unka pyaar aur ishq hawao me kanh kanh me bas gaya.Fiza bhi rangeen ho gai.Mausam bhi rang gaya unke pyaar me.

Subah ka suraj dono ke pyaar ko naye mod pe le aaya.

@Bhavini,you are amazing writer dear.And your sad words bring tears in my eyes and your happy version make me feel happy.Thank you for this amazing story.

Unke sadke mera dil kurbaan hai
Khamosh hai juba par har aah kurbaan hai
Woh hai itne kareeb rehemat khuda ki
Hume toh unke liye fana hona bhi qubool hai.


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Now i can join in your update demand brigade.
Update please
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Originally posted by: parmarA

@Bhavini,as i promised i am posting my review of first thread.Kum likha hai samazna jyada.Ok?

Review for First thread

@Bhavini,my journey to read this ff became so beautiful.I don't know how i fall in love with this ff.

Oh so sweet...😳 U fall in for my story...😃


I can't give every chap review bec i read them all at one go.And i have very short memory.

Omg!!!! I want to do that to... but I have always so many stories pending to read or chapter to write... but One weekend I am going read my story again...and rewrite some chapters and rectify some grammar and add better words...

Akdha story for me begans with Jodha's status of mind and Jalal's hate clash.But slowly and steadily they started to feel for each other.And their journey began with a cute note.

Yap 1st 10 chapter was building up their relation and trust on each other...
But their romance begin from lake chapter (horse ride)

Jalal didn't trust her and humilate her through false letter.And Jodha is Rajkumari after all.How can she tolerate that insult in front of everybody?You narrated her pain in your words are too beautiful.

That was really hurtful for Jodha... but the way Jalal saw every thing but his mistake was he didn't ask her and didn't wanted to listen to her... he blamed her with big accuse...

Sachai pata chalne par dauda Biwi ko lane Amir me.I enjoyed each and every dream of Jodha and Akbar.Whether it was sad or with happiness.

Poor Jallu baby... I felt so bad for him.


When Jalal came to Aamir he saw the paining which mainavati showed him.It was unique and beautiful way to express Jodha's feeling.My fav was that kissing painting and hug paiting.Jalal understand his mistake but helpless at that time.

Painting wala mera sabse favorite chapter hai...pure ff me... and My fav painting they are sleeping under the tree by the lake...

Their too jealousy ne pichha nahi chhoda.Suraj aur Kanika do villian and vamp dono khade the rahome.

Jealosy...😆

Jodha jealous towards Kanika and Jalal jealous towards Suraj.But Suraj is shameless[sorry] here.He knew she is merried and love jalal but still usne chance me dance nahi chhoda.But Jodha left that place.

U right... bichare ka pehla pyar... bachpan ki dosti iss liye usko maaf kiya

In temple she remember her oath to kill jalal.But kaise mare?Jalal heard Lilavati and jodha's talk where she was talking about her feeling why she don't want to go near to jalal.Jalal was shocked.He didn't knew the inner feeling of Jodha.Jodha ko samazne me ab use aasani rahegi.They both completed holy rituals peacefully.

Lilavati and Jodha's talk .. was Jodha's insecurity ... Her love was not grown enough to trust him that time.

Jalal was convencing Jodha to come to Agra with him but her heart was not agree with that.And Jalal's strong and bitter word of Talaq.Uske kanome jaise jalta loha daal diya ho.She felt insulted and what she had done?woh bhi char ghante baad.She was talking with jalal calmly and suddenly her mouth was full of blood?how can jalal tolerate?but thank god she confessed that she had poison.So jalal ran toward nearby Aashram and pray to him to save Jodha.That night was very tough for him.But thank god,woh bach gai.

That is the time both of them realize how deeply they love each other... Actually their soul connection...

Again dono ke beech me takraar shuru."Kyon bachaya hume?and jalal's tight slap over her face.[Main shock me aa gai thi] but sometimes pagalpan rokne ke liye jaroori ho jata hai.

She deserve a slap... Aese koi karta hai bhala... thande kalege se...ram nam staya...😆 mera Jallu baby kitna tension me tha😆

So their journey of love start from there.They both came to know that they both love each other very very much.And their eyes talk.Naino ki bhasha.Jodha told him not to spend their SR in Jungle but want to spend it in Agra that she wanted to feel special.
Yap... Their confession... Romance...love passion😳

In Agra again one hurdle called Ruku waiting for her.Jalal promised to spend night with Jodha and made all the proper arrangemts but Ruku played game and jalal slept with her.Jalal selected dress jwellery for jodha with excitement and love but aah?use kya maloom tha ki what is there in future's stomach.

Is chapter pe kafi logo ki sr ki ummeed pe pani phir gaya tha... Only reason for this track was I wanted Jodha to realize that doesn't matter who ever he spend time with but his heart beats for her only... (her insecurity)😆

And again MU.Jodha thought jalal's fault and Jalal was unaware what happened around him?and he was thinking Jodha begum thinking that he had done it purposly?oh no?and woh Bhidu Agyaat vaas me chale gaye😆Kisiko bina bataye.Jate jate delicious aamiri food toh khake jate?😆

Vo Jo ke saath lunch date thi na is liye nahi khaya😆

Par Abdul naam ki chabi chhod gaye jodha ke liye.He told jodha where is jalal?but in sign language.

smart Abdul and Jo😳

Aur fir jo hua.Ho gai teri balle balle! mast episode.Dono ka pyaar,"Bahoke darmiya do pyaar mil rahe hai.jane kya bole mun?" aur unka pyaar aur ishq hawao me kanh kanh me bas gaya.Fiza bhi rangeen ho gai.Mausam bhi rang gaya unke pyaar me.

😳😳😳😳

Subah ka suraj dono ke pyaar ko naye mod pe le aaya.
😳 😃😃😃

@Bhavini,you are amazing writer dear.And your sad words bring tears in my eyes and your happy version make me feel happy.Thank you for this amazing story.

That is indeed great compliment... I am happy that I was able to bring smile on your face... and You comment brought smile in my face😃

Unke sadke mera dil kurbaan hai
Khamosh hai juba par har aah kurbaan hai
Woh hai itne kareeb rehemat khuda ki
Hume toh unke liye fana hona bhi qubool hai. vah vah vah😊

apki shyari subhan allah😃



Alka mari jaan... su mane rovdava ni che... aatlu saras lakhyu che mari varta mate...😆

I am through out Guju medium but still can't write in Guju... sounds so funny... Yaar amazing Review... I am so happy to see this detail review... feel Likes I have gone through their Journey once again... I want to read entire story once again... but I don't have that much time... All this chapters refresh my memory... Thank u so much for this details comment...😭😃😃😃

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Tani badmash ro kyu rahi hai...muje update de dono story ka... 😆
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Originally posted by: parmarA

Now i can join in your update demand brigade.

Update please

UPDATE GANG... AASHIYA... TANI... SWATI... MANISHA... SUMESHNI...NANU... PALLU... PURVA...DEEPIKA... SAB MILO NAYE UPDATE GANG MEMBER SE ... ALKA DARLING WELCOME TO UPDATE GANG...😃
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Yeh kale chasme me tu kitni khush dikh rahi hai😃
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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

Yeh kale chasme me tu kitni khush dikh rahi hai😃

Mei aisi hi hu 😎
Baas aabupdate Chahiye
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No.update yet okkk for this u will be gonna punish for this & u r punishment is nothing hehe !! Update de do yrr 😎

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