Posted:
Grrr. This jalal was too much. I thought he woukd be ok soon but no he could not even be normal in Jashan. It hurts more when someone breaks their routine like jalal always pulled jodhas hand when eating sweets but he did not do that. But, on top of that he fed ruq and told her to feed jodha. Now, thats an insult and very hurtful. Bit, i like when jodha said appka prem ka bhukar uttar gaya and then her silence and not showing her face to himat all was good way to torture him. Abdul is such a gr8 friend. I wish he comes back in show. Jalal is ruthless in this chapter. I really loved the dialogues which jodha said before she slept near kanha. The way u explamined jalal's thoughts after finding how hindus r treated and him relating all that to MA and bairam khan was well written and developed into story and it explains how he was unfair. I also liked how jodha ran to jalals room at the end but i hope she does not forgive him easily. She should care for him but not talk to him or may be taunt him. He should aplogize to her in public and private and promise her that ego wont come in between again and also tell her why he was upset. He needs to make up to her lot not just by physical in timacy but emotionally and respectfully too.
Wow, that s one long comment. May be one of the longest in ur thread, i suppose. I just love how u include so many things and storylines and emotions in ur stories. U r one of the best story writers of JA and other forums too. Plzzz update soon. I cannot wait. Thx for pm. 🤗
Itti Si Khushi Sab TV
Hindi TV Shows
Celebrity MasterChef
Cricket
720