FF : STRANGE FEELINGS ; PT 2 UPDATED ON PAGE 3

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Hello everyone 😛😛 Well , I know , I am already writing two OS and one FF 😆😆 but a story came through my mind and couldn't have resisted to write it down 😃😃 Hope you all will like it 😊😊 Here are the characters sketch of main protagonists but along the story , new characters will make their entry so don't be surprised 😉😉

Disclaimer : It's a modern story of Akdha where the role and caracters of the characters are different from the current show which all of us are following , so please bear with it 😊😊 No bashing and fights concerning it The story is inspired from a mexican daily soap so if you have already watched it , it's strongly probable for you to find big similarities of it in the story so request all of you to deal with it 😛😃😳

~Strange feelings~
⭐️⭐️CHARACTERS SKETCH⭐️⭐️

Jalal : Living in the poor messy and bad neighbourhoood attendance of Queen's in New York , is a drop deadly dashing , handsome , smart and good looking young man aged of 23 who is above all a clever , dexterous and shrewd gangster for which people give him the nickname of "DIABLO" which means Sharp Devil. He has passed 3 years in prison after being caught in a Burglary , he seems cool and happy minded from the outside but in reality deep inside him , he is struggling everyday to leave his shameful , unhonest and detestable work forever and to restart a new and fresh life with his mother based on honesty and truth but to survive in this big city , to cure his mother's illness and to repay a large debt , he is obligated to continue this dirty job against his wishes but he is unaware that one day , destiny will change his sort!!! He loves his mother and doing all this only for her sake and lives alone with her. He doesn't know who is his father as he has left his mother when she was pregnant of him!!!

Jodhaa : She is from a wealthy family of "LILA". Jodhaa is a young lawyer aged of 22 , she loves her job and is careful , attentive and serious in each of it's details , she has her own law firm in the center of Manhattan. An epitome of beauty , sophisticated and attractive young woman , inherited of an amazing beauty from her mother , she is a kind hearted , angelic , naive and simple woman despite of her family's high statue in the society.She is unaware of what destiny has reserved for her!!!

Martin Acero : From the outside , he is a fresh , attractive , and charming gentleman , he is nearly fourty and is also issue of wealthy family but no one is aware of the truth that he is the chief and boss of all the gangsters in Queen and he is the one who plans everything!! To preserve his identity from the society , he is called by his nickname "El Hierro" which means the boss , he is the real father of Jalal , an evil minded , coward , malicious and scrounger , he is attracted and wants to marry with Jodhaa but his desire grows even more when he comes to know that she is issued from a wealthy family so that he could inherit of all her fortune , he plans to propose her for marriage!!! He is the real evil of the story!!!

THOSE ARE THE MAIN CHARACTERS , WAIT FOR MORE SURPRISES 😛😉

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//STRANGE FEELINGS//
~PART 1~
The scene takes place in New York's city , on highways where we can hear noisy sounds of honking , cars , trucks , bikes which are stucked in a long and annoying traffic , which is moving slowly and creates more and more noise everywhere around , the scene shifts to an aside neighbourhood of the city , where everything is in mess , noisy and moving , it's the neighbourhood of Queens and then it shifts in the center of Manhattan , near big shops , restaurants , offices , hotels where outside , everyone is moving constantly , walking everywhere it's a busy and charged day for them. Now , we are in Jamaica's railway station , flashback of years before.
-- New York , 1986--
A pregnant lady , in a pink simple dress , newly arrived in the City , a bit lost , gets out of the train following the passangers , asking everywhere and pleading them to help her as she doesn't know at all the City , in a desperating situation as she is soon going to give birth to a baby and she hasn't much time before her!!! Moving unknowingly out of the station and demanding to each of the passengers "DO YOU SPEAK ENGLISH" but as she is in a miserable state , everybody ignores her and makes their way , moving ahead in their daily routines. She pleads "SPEAKING ENGLISH , ATLEAST SPANISH" , breathing calmly as the hormones are beginning to make their effect and is terribly painful and excruciating whole her body inside , by touching her tummy and gently caressing it , walking forward and asking for helps continously but no one could helps her!!! Sobbing profusely in pain , passing through cross walks by following others , she finally end up in a big and lonely lawn where chairs are put on , couldn't bear more the atroce pain of hormones , she sits on chaise , holding tightly the corner of her chair , and breathing slowly to affront the pain , sobbing and sadly looking at her tummy by caressing it.
-- 7 months earlier , In Mexico--
During a chic cocktail party inside the luxurious mansion of Acero's , next to the poolside , two maids are arguing!!! It's the lady and her aunt , who is scolding her after the revelation of her pregnancy. The lady excitedly asks :
- Should I reveal it to Martin my aunt?
- Have you gone mad Hamida? How could you be so credule? Don't commit such an error worriedly requires her aunt.
- But why? After I reveal it to him , he will be overjoyed , he loves me a lot my aunt , hamida answers.
- My dear , you're only 16 , you are still immature and unknown about the reality of life. Trust me , he is a rich guy same like others who just mocks and is playing with you , he is lying.
- Aunt please , I am enough mature to understand how people deals with me and to know how to take care of myself , I will manage rather then asking for your help angrily reply Hamida
- Leave from there , you are annoying me said her aunt
- Will leave !!! And she angrily walks off fuming with the plate full of cut fresh fruits and cocktail juice to serve for guests and sees Martin staring at her , she smiles shyly in a blush while on the otherside Martin is lustfully describing to his friends her well formed feminin body!!!
- She is an unknowledge girl but still her body is such a . . .
- Don't tell me Martin that you have already spend with her . . . surprisingly screams one of his friends , who lusts of desire
- Ya , she is from countryside proudly answers Martin
- I heard that women from there are specially fresh and hot lustfully says one of his friends looking at Hamida with full of sexual desires in theor eyes. Martin smirks in an agreement while Hamida seeing the way he is staring at her longingly , thinking that it's a sign of love toward her , she shyly smiles and
blushes!!! Martin to hus friends "Poor girl , she is crazy above me after that night" and his friends smile impressly to him. As she is distributing foods , a rich lady cuts her in middle and asks her to come as she wants to talk concerning something with her. She reluctantly follows her and once arrived , the lady says :
- First this matter should stay between us ok , no one should be informed about it not even the mistress , for whom you're working for , mrs. Graziella Acero , is that clear?
- Yes , mam
- Well , I want you to work as my maid and I want you to come with me in Miami as my husband has been elected consul there and I want someone with me who cooks well as I don't want to eat those fastfoods once I reach there , moreover , you will be payed well , you could learn English and will be able to live comfortably so what say?
- Mam , but my aunt , everyone of mine is there and to be honest , Acero's family is for me like my own family!!!
- You know what? Don't answer me now but think well about it and answer me fast!!! And she leaves living her in dilemma!!!
Once she reached there , she hears the speech of mrs.Graziella , who has organized this party on the occasion of her son's who has been diplomated!!! She declares officially that he will go to New York to pursue his career where I am sure , a brilliant futur is waiting for him!!! Hamida hears all this teary eyed and lowly says in a heartbroken voice "He is going to New York!!!"

--Back in New York , 1986--
Hamida begins to get up and walk carefully toward the place next to the bridge , in a hope of finding a secure place to give birth for her baby. It's slyly raining , she is all wet but still trying to keep her calm by breathing slowly and deeply , she arrives there but her tummy begins to aches her strikely , it pains monsterously to her over all her body , she holds tightly to the pillars near the bridge and holds her tummy , sobbing profusely in pain while all of a sudden on three different sides of the neighbourhood , three men dangerously approached her and says "GIVE ME YOUR BAG" , taking advantage of her weakness , they pull it of from her neck , she pleads them saying "PLEASE PLEASE , IT'S THE ONLY WHICH IS LEFT FOR ME , PLEASE" , they cunningly smiles , snatch it from her hand and walk off laughing!!! She breaks down and cry in pain!!! After some moments , she touches her tummy , feeling it empty and light , it makes her panick and she slowly gets up and begins to walk forward where she reached Queen's railway station. She is in a disastrous condition , her clothes are wet , dirty , she has catched cold but is sweating terribly of maternity's pain and pleads passengers to help her , she falls on floor and screams in pain!!! A passenger , seeing her condition , propose her to bring to hospital but she screams loudly and says it's too late!!! He begins to panick and asks for others to help , pleading them to sympathy at her condition. Everybody is busy , and doesn't give an attention to them , he finally says in a determinate voice :
"Well , I have never done this before but my wife also was pregnant and doctor asked her to breath deeply so please do that and screams PUSH , PUSH" She puts all her force , screams loudly in pain while the man asking her continously to push and finally he happily said her , your baby is born , congratulation!!! She immediately holds him , kiss his forhead and says "he is god's gift , an angel , my son , I will name him Jalal" and kiss his hands and forhead with tears of happiness and thanks the man!!!
-- Now a days , New York--
The scene takes place in a jail , near a man , with short black hair and green eyes , he looks up!!!
~ JALAL'S ENTRY~
BGM : HOU COMMON MIRA MAS SAB EL DIABLO DIAMO RES
ES SI CONDIDA MORIRE TOQUIER OH YEAH
MIRA MAS SAB EL DIABLO DIAMO RES YAH

One of the prisoner comes and says "Bro , in ten minutes , they are going to call you in the office , go prepare"
Jalal "Yeah , that's my chance , wish me a good luck"
The man answers "It is nothing to do with luck!!!"
Jalal says "Late me tell you one last thing dude , never underestimate the power of luck , remember that" , he smirks , they do stylish guys' shaking hand and Jalal says " Farewell , Bro" and walks toward his room , with a long sigh and stirring his hair!!!
~~ IN THE OFFICE ~~
The judge : Your full name : Jalaluddin Mohammad , case number 178 , you are condamned for burglary , accused and prouves were found against you for complicity in a Burglary of jewelery store and you are condamned for 3 years by the high court penal for causing grave injuries , damages for the owners , what you have to say to defend yourself?
Jalal : I know , till now my life was a big fail and mess , I have done lots of harmful things toward others under the impulsion of drogues and alcohols but I demand you to give me a last opportunity to improve myself and to show that I can be a good and honorable citizen of our society!!! The judge nods in a yes and says "Let's listen our victim's decision!!!"
Victim : I want him to be imprisoned for more 10 years!!!
When all of a sudden , court guard's inform them of the arrival of Jalal's lawyer!!!

Precap : Jodhaa's entry

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Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Amazing character sketch..
It's different...
Continue soon
And btw tu kaha hai??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Amazing character sketch..
It's different...
Continue soon
And btw tu kaha hai??


Aww meri strawberry 😛😛 idhar a 🤗🤗 I miss you a lot 😳😳 Well I am busy preparing for exams these days In february , I will be back in full form ok sweetu 😊😛😳
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Originally posted by: sweetystubborn



Aww meri strawberry😛😛idhar a🤗🤗I miss you a lot😳😳Well I am busy preparing for exams these daysIn february , I will be back in full form ok sweetu😊😛😳

🤗 tujhe shayad pata Nahi ki Jalal aur hum aapne pagal doctor ko kitna miss karte hai 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

fantastic start

please continue


Thanks my rima 🤗🤗
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

🤗 tujhe shayad pata Nahi ki Jalal aur hum aapne pagal doctor ko kitna miss karte hai 😭


Awwweee 🤗🤗 Me also miss you two a lot 😭😭 But don't worry , I will be back in february , till then be safe 😈😈
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Originally posted by: sweetystubborn



Awwweee🤗🤗Me also miss you two a lot😭😭But don't worry , I will be back in february , till then be safe😈😈

me heart and brain are safe now 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

me heart and brain are safe now 😆


Achi baat hai 😈😈
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wow amazing nd vry diff...plz update soon nd pm me.

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