Akdha Os : A tale that will last forever !

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Guys ! I'm back with another Os !
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Saleem has turned 17 and Jalal and Jodha had turned 48 ! They have completed 21 years of their love n there will be a jashn in the evening ! Jodha was coming after doing her tulsi pooja n Jalal was going to his room after discussing some political matters . Jodha was angry from Jalal as he didn't remembered their wedding anniversary.Suddenly , Salim stopped Jodha in the middle way .
Salim : Ammi jaan zara rukiye na !
Jodha : Kyu ? Kya hua ? Aap theek toh hai na ?
Salim : Hum theek par humme aapse aur Abba jaan se kuch zaroori guftgoo karni hai .
Jodha: Aapko pata hai na hum aapke Abba jaan se naraaz hai isliye hum ja rahe hai yaha se .
Salim:Rukiye na Ammi jaan, lijiye Abba jaan bhi aa gaye.
Jalal:Kya hua aap dono yaha ek saath ? Aur Salim aapne aaj raat ko jashn kyu rakhvaya hai ?
Salim n Jodha do salaam n pranam to Jalal.
Salim : Abba jaan , humme aapse aur Ammi jaan se kuch zaroori baat karni hai aur kya aapko yaad nahi ki aaj kya hai ?
Jalal: Arre aap bhi humse wahi keh rahe hai jo Jodha begum humse keh rahi thi aakhir aisa kya hai aaj ?
Jodha(with an angry tone): Dekha Salim, inhe nahi yaad ki aaj kya hai.
Salim : Abba Jaan aaj aapko aur Ammi jaan ke nikah ki saalgira hai .
Jalal(shocked expression)- Kya ?
Salim : Haan Abba jaan aapko kuch yad nahi hai isliye toh ammi jaan aapse naraaz hai !
Jodha goes makes a childish fish n goes from their angrily.
Jalal : Arre Jodha begum suniye toh ..
And he also follows her.
Salim : Inn dono ka rishta bhi ajeeb hai n (he goes from there)
In Jodha's room -
Jodha sits on the bed and says to herself : Yeh shehenshah bhi na ajeeb vyakthi hai humare vivaah ki saalgirah bhool gaye !
Jalal comes there.
Jalal : Arre Jodha begum suniye toh ..
Jodha: Humme aapse baat nahi karni hum apse bohut krodhit hai.
Jalal holds his ears and sits like a child on the ground and says: Humme muaff kar dijiye woh kya hai na ab hum buddhe ho gaya aur humare baal bhi safed hone ag gaye hai isliye kabhi kabhi cheeze bhool jate hai .
Jodha couln't control her laugh and laughs loudly.
Jodha: Hahahaha Shehenshah aap toh bcche lag rahe hai chaliye ab khade ho jaaiye hum apse naraaz nahi hai. Hahaha !
Jalal stands up and says : Hum aapse beintehaa mohabbat karte hi aur mohabbat ko yaad karne ke liye sirf ek hi din thodi hota hai . (he cupps her face in his hands)
Jodha : Aur hum bhi aapse prem karte hai .
In the Jashn-
Guard : Ba adab , ba mulaiza hoshiyar shehenshah hind aur mallika e hindustan Jodha begum padhaar rahi hai.
Jalal and Jodha enters the hall n greet every one and sits on the throne.
Jalal :Jashn shuru kiya jaaye.
Salim : Jaisa ki hum sab jaante hai aaj humare Abba jaan aur ammi jaan ke nikaah ki saalgirha ko pure 21 yers ho gaye hai aur humme vishwaas hai ki inki prem kahani sadiyo tak yaad ki jaayegi.
The jashn starts and all were very pleased by the performances.
Salim : Ab hum chahte hai ki iss jashn ka ant humare Abba jaan aur ammi jaan kare. Humara matlab ki ek baar aap dono bhi iss mausiki pe naache .
Atgah Sahab : Yeh aap kya keh rahe hai Salim , aisa kaise ho sakta hi.
Jalal: Kyu nahi ho sakta Atgah sahab and he forwards his hand to Jodha and both comes in middle of the hall and see in each others eyes and hold hands and dance .
Finally Salim Chishti sahab comes and give them blessings and says: Hum vaada karte hai ki inn dono ki prem kahani sadiyo tak yaad kari jaayegi. Inke prem ki kahaaniya sunayi jayegi ! And the jashn ends and both goes happily to their room with a smile on their face.
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The end
Hope u like it ! 😊😊😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar..mast likha...AkDha ki Wedding Anniversery nd Salim itna vadda !!
woh toh hai..AkDha 4 eva !!❤️
keep it up⭐️..aur likhti reh..😉
Edited by melodica - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That Was Lovely Mishika !😳 👏 It was very cute! Loved Salim.😳 Jo-Ja sweet nok jhok and pyar was ofcourse sweet. The Jashn and dance was lovely. Thanks for this lovely OS !👏

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesum OS...
Loved it...

Beautifully written..
The Lovestory of Jodha n Akbar is truly an Epic...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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its an amazing story Mishika 👏
i don't have words to describe !
superb work ! keep it up
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: melodica

wow yaar..mast likha...AkDha ki Wedding Anniversery nd Salim itna vadda !!

woh toh hai..AkDha 4 eva !!❤️
keep it up⭐️..aur likhti reh..😉


Thanks dear ! 😊 n yaar I'm so sorry I can't continue it as mybexams are going on 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrincessNancy

<font color="#cc0033" size="2" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">That Was Lovely Mishika!😳👏It was very cute! Loved Salim.😳Jo-Ja sweet nok jhok and pyar was ofcourse sweet. The Jashn and dance was lovely. Thanks for this lovely OS !👏</font>


Thank u so mucn Nancy darling ! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mishika123


Thanks dear ! 😊 n yaar I'm so sorry I can't continue it as mybexams are going on 😭


achaa koi ni..baad mein likh dena..🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...awesome ...salim so cute...akdha 48 ke baad bhi ek dusre se ladte h...lol...vry vry nice os!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey awsum one..

AkDha ki marriage anni aur jallu forgets it ...😆😆

beautifull penned down ...

Keep writing and keep rocking ..!!!!!!

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