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priyajafan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#751

nice update 😊 loved this romance in kitchen scene 😳 now coming on SR scene which i just read today it was awsome page you wrote, literally a very GM activating post it was☺️ really kehna padega ki tum GM walo ki ummed pr khadi utri ho 👏 thank you for such a sensational post of SR☺️

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Posted: 11 years ago

#752

Originally posted by: zebbie0504
mehak di,aap kab update karogi?

😆😆😳

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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#753

Originally posted by: priyajafan
nice post written 😳 please continue ...

Thank u so much dear 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#754

Originally posted by: endearingJJ
hello...it was really nice reading all the updates at one go like a novel,you have a gift for storytelling👏--can't wait for more..oh, there goes the greed in me😛

Awww 🤗

thank u so much dear 😳

many ppl say the same thing ... and i'm really very thankful to all for encouraging me to write good 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#755

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI
Update plz

man yeh saahib ji haan kerta bahane ..

naina nawabe ji na smjhe ishare 😆😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#756

Originally posted by: priyajafan
nice start up 😳 u wrote awsome , sweet & very cute post 😳 keep updating plzzz 😃

Thanks once again my dear 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#757

Originally posted by: priyajafan
nice update 😊 loved this romance in kitchen scene 😳 now coming on SR scene which i just read today it was awsome page you wrote, literally a very GM activating post it was☺️ really kehna padega ki tum GM walo ki ummed pr khadi utri ho 👏 thank you for such a sensational post of SR☺️

hayeee ❤️

the speciality of my FF's are that they always hve romance in every chappy ... 😆

btw .. thanks a ton again 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago

#758

Originally posted by: manuluvpari
Nice update

thanks a lot 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: srividhya68
so nice
cont soon

Thanks dear 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#760

Chapter 20 : Salim's first kick and Jalal's nautanki ...

Back with my update 😆 sorry for being so late this time 😳 Update please Gang .. sorry ! 😃 Next time i'll try to update soon ... Please comment and like the chapter ... 😳

Precap : Jalal's care for Jodha ...

Now , it was three months for Jodha's pregnancy ... She was being in a good care by all the people in the palace .. Even Ruqaiyya's attitude towards her had changed totally and she was also taking a lot of care of Jodha ! But at this time , no one can be careful than the husband himself .. And Jalal was proved to be a caring , loving husband as well as a caring & loving father too ...

It was the morning time , the weather was cold today as it was winter season ... Jodha tried getting up from the blanket but Jalal refused " Nahe Jodha Begum ! aap leti rahiye'' . Jodha looked at him in a bad mood .. " Per antu Shehnesha hum yaha lete lete thak gaye hain " . she holds his hand , trying to put some butter on him " Aap kitne ache hain , hamari har baat mante ha , hamara itna khayal rakhte ha ... toh phir hamari yeh baat bhi man le " .

Jalal was aware that she's trying to butter polish him , he did some nautanki " acha ! kariye jo apka man kerta ha ... ap per hamari baaton ka asar he nahe hota " Jodha thought Jalal has got angry on her ...

She lied on his lap and said " acha na ! lejiye .. nahe uth rahein hum " Jalal looked at her and thought in his mind " apki isi adaa per hum fida ha Jodha Begum "he was smirking , Jodha said " Aap hand kyun rahein hain ? " Jalal was replying to her but they he heard Jodha saying " oyieee " ...

He looked at her , what did she said ! again she screamed " kya ker rahein ha aap " Jalal looked at her , " Hum kuch nahe ker rahein hain Jodha Begum " .. Jodha looked at him , " apka yeh bacha ! " .. Jalal's mouth wide opened and he couldn't understand anything " Bacha ! " he exclaimed unknowingly ..

Jodha was fine now , no more kicks from Salim this time " Bade sahe kehte ha ! Jaisa baap waisa beta " .. Jalal looked at her questiongly " Kya ? " .. " Aray ! Shehnesha woh .. Salim humein andar se lat mar rahein thay " she replied ... Jalal laughed a lot and looked at her and said " had hoti ha Jodha Begum ... bacha is duniya ma aya bhi nahe hai ke apne use daantna shuru ker diya " .. Jodha frowned " aap hamara mazak uda rahein ha ... jaiye .. hum apse baat nahe kerte " and she turned her face another side ..

Jalal lifts her face towards him by her chin .. " hum toh mazak kar rahein thay " Jodha then looked at her ... " agar yeh bacha aap ke tarah shararte nnikla toh hum ise do chante jad denge " .. Jalal vivicously replied " khabardar ! Jo apne hamare bache ya bachi ko haath lagaya warna ... " and he stopped .. Jodha replied " warna kya ? haan ? hum uski ammi jaan honge aur humein usko marne ka pura adikaar ha "

Jalal said " theek ha .. agar aap yehi kare ge toh hum apne bache ko le kar yahan se bhaag jainge " and for few seconds both looked at each other and then laughed together ... " Shehnesha aap bhi na " Jodha said giggling .. " Jodha Begum aap bhi na'

Jalal said giggling too ..

Ishq hai woh ehsaas ...

Ishq hai woh jazbaat

Badal de yeh duniya ..

badal de yeh halaath ... ❤️

If you enjoyed it , please hit like and comment .. I'll be very pleased 😳

Edited by ---Mehak--- - 11 years ago