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Mrs.KimJongin

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: ...Renu...
Am really very very sorry mehak dear ..meney last update per comment nahi karpayi...

but now am here give review on both the chaps..!!!
Chap12:
awsum one..!!!
wow,,Jodha dancing in the rain and Jallu adoring her beauty..
but ye kya jo fell ill aur usey HB ki jarurat padgai??
and their first kiss...
but why did you wake jo yaar ..let her be unconscious na ...
and yes i did observed that you have increased you update size..
keep it up ...

Chap13:
amazing chap
so jallu told truth the jodha..
jodha hugged jalal ..
you are really awsum writer dear..!!!!
and precap Jodha and Jalal visit Durga ... Memersing moments ..
i have started dreaming from now it self...update soon ..
And thanks for the pm...

first of all about ch 12 : its absolute when he'll kiss her she'll wake up coz she will feel it na 😆

and over all ... thank you so much for such a nice comment 🤗

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wow..it was wonderful👏

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Firstly I'm so sorry for extremely late reply

I've read all the updates and every update just takes more into your FF

I'm truely enjoying this story

for me it has all the elements for a best selling novel

thank you for this amazing interesting great story

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cute

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Firstly I'm so sorry for extremely late reply
I've read all the updates and every update just takes more into your FF

I'm truely enjoying this story

for me it has all the elements for a best selling novel

thank you for this amazing interesting great story

Awww 🤗

Keep enjoying my FF .. 🤗 i am glad you all like it ...

You all are my courage and my power to write something great ...

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Originally posted by: srividhya68
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 14 - Jodha & Jalal visits Dargah , memersing moments spent together ..

So finally all the flashbacks are ended now ... and there present moment's come at the place ... Jodha and Jalal were very happy remembering their beautiful past scenes ... Reminding them together was a pleasure for them...

Jalal said " Hum bohot khush ha aaj " Jodha said " Kahi ksi ke nazar na lag jaiye hamari khushiyon ko " Jalal said ... " Isi liye toh aaj hum ja rahein ha "Jodha amazingly asked " Jaa rahein ha ... kahan ??? " Jalal looked at her and said " Dargah .. ziarat kerne " .. Jodha looked at him with a smile on her face and said " woh aap kya kehte ha ... hhh haan .. " SUBHANALLAH .. kya hunar paya ha Shehnesha aap ne " ..

Jalal was amazed to hear it he amazingly smiled a lot " Kya Jodha begum .. yeh hamare saath nainsafi ha "Jodha said " Kya ? " Jalal said " yeh to hum apko kehte ha " Jodha smirkingly smiled and giggles .. Jalal said " Aap hamara mazak uda rahe hai " Jodha said " hamari itni himmat ke aap ka mazak udaye .. itni badi gustakhi kare .. nahe nahe "

She gets up and hugs him from back and keeps her hands on his shoulders and wraps her around .. and went near to his ears and whispers sensually " Hum itni badi gustakhi kese ker sakte ha " Jalal understood she was in romantic mood ... he pushed her towards him and she was in his lap .. Both were lost in their love ...

Jalal whispers in her ears " aap hamari begum ha .. apke liye sari gustakhiyan muaf " and he kissed her cheecks .. Jodha closes her eyes and replied " sirf begum ha ? " Jalal kept his hand on her belly and said " Sab se chaheti begum ha hamari " . Jodha breathes heavily .. current was passing through her body with his touch ... she holds his hand and stops her breathe and says in one tone " Shehnesha yeh kya ker rahein ha aap "

Jalal said " Jo aapne shuru kiya " before Jodha could say anything he kept his finger on her lips and said " Nahii jodha begum .. theek ha agar aap nahe chahti toh phir hum yaha se chale jate ha .. " and he turns to get up and go but jodha holds his hand and as Jalal turned back at her she tightly hugged him and sqeezes him , and pushes him more towards her self ... She said in the same position " Nahe .. nahi jaiye humein Chod ker "

Jalal make her lie on the bed and kissed her forehead ... Jodha closes her eyes and Jodha up on her ... She pushes him towards her more and more

She wanted more of it ... Jalal kissed her ears and softle bites her ear lobes .. she closes her eyes .. and breathes very heavily .. Jalal moved to kiss her upper lip and her lips tastes si sweet and he moved to kiss the lower one and now their kiss turned into lick .. both were lost in licking ..

And they continued their love till late night ..

Soon the morning occurs , they got up and they have to go to durgah today , Jodha wear Jalal's favorite color saree i.e green ... Jalal was so happy to see her in this color saree ..

Soon they reached the Durgah and they prayed there ..

Jodha raises her hands to pray " Aiye khuda , hamari in khushiyon ko kisi ke nazar na lage .. aur Shehnesha ke pranon ke hifazat hameesha kariye ga .. hum unse behad prem kerte hain aur unke bina jee nahe sakte "

Jalal prayed " Ai parvadigar ... tu apni rehmat hamare uppar barsata rahein ... Hum Jodha Begum se behad muhabbat krte ha ... "

and both says " Aameen " together ...

The molvi comes and asked them to stand between the cloth ... or chadar

and he blesses them and said " Bohot khoob " Jalal and Jodha looked at each other .. he continued " Mughal Saltanat ko uska waris jald he milne wala ha ... " And both looked at each other's eyes and blushed ...

Precap : Jodha is pregnant ... the news is confirmed ...

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Edited by ---Mehak--- - 11 years ago