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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: VincyAnne

Awesome Mehak darling !!!!
Really love it and you're right , GM has to be activated ...

Keep up the god work darling ...
Looking forward for the next chapter ..

thank u Vincy darling ! 🤗
GM activate rakhna 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
i loved jalal's cough plzzz make him cough often
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ---Mehak---


thank u Ash🤗keep reading



hey m swati...so u can call me by ds name
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice updates!!!
sorry for late comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mehaku ur so talented! Can't wait to read more 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: littoos

i loved jalal's cough plzzz make him cough often

🤣 Thank u
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Posted: 11 years ago
chapter 10 - AkDha Flashback of Jodha's first fall in Jalal's arms .

FLASH BACK :

Cool breeze , wind so cold ... It seemed as if something very special is going to happen today , the weather was pleasant ! Happiness all over the palace , no one reason was there for this happiness .. and the biggest reason was the wedding of Jodha and Akbar ... The first step Jodha stepped in the palace , it seemed that happiness has now knocked their door ... But none of them was aware of the truth behind this wedding ... Jodha has some demands from Jalal , out of which the mos important was that both of them after marriage will not have any sexual relation ... But for Jalal till now this thing doesn't matter ..
Hamida Bano was really very happy with Jodha and Jalal's wedding ... She gave all her good wishes to the new wedded couple .. They have to hide this truth from everyone that they will not create any sexual relation with each other , they acted in front of everyone and both went in their room today where they are going to spend their very first wedding night ... Jodha all nervous and shy ... Jalal asked her to lie on bed " Aap bistar per sojaye aur hum yahan sofa per sojate ha " .. Jodha was unable to speak a word , quietly she sat on the bed staring the room .. Jalal looked at her and smirked as if something was going in his mind ...

Jodha lied on the bed , taking the blanket and put it up on her .. Mean while , Jalal got up and went towards her ... He looked at her , Jodha's heart beats fastly , she thought
" Shehnesha yahan hamare pass kyun arahe hai ! " Jalal tried moving much closer to her but she pushed him and ran , she was about to slip but Jalal took hold of her , now she falled .. but in his arms , Jalal's first touch was so soft and sweet for her , she closed her eyes and breath a sight of relief ...

In lamhon ke daaman me
pakeeza se rishtey hai
koi kalma mohabbat ka
dohrate farishtey hain ...
khamosh se ha zameen
hairaan sa falak ha
ek noor he noor sa ab asmaan talak ha

There was complete silence in the room ... only a couple , madly lost in each other ... Jodha's hand was around Jalal's shoulder and Jalal's hand over her bare back and waist

Kesa yeh ishq ha
kesa yeh khwaab ha
kesay jazbaat ka ubhra sailaab ha
Kesa yeh ishq ha
kesa yeh khwaab ha
kesay jazbaat ka ubhra sailaab ha
din bale raatein badle baatein badle jeenay ke andaaz he badle ha

Both looking deeply in each other's eyes , as if they have forgot about the world ...

Samay ne yeh kya badal de hai kaya
tumhain ma ne paliya
mujhe tum ne paalia ..
mile dekho aisay ha hum
k do sur ho jaisay matham
koi ziada na koi kam kisi raag ma
k prem aag ma jalte dono he thay
tan bhi ha maan bhi ... man bhi ha tan bhiii ...
tan bhi ha maan bhi ... man bhi ha tan bhiii ... ...

they were so lost in each other that they didn't heard the voice of Rahim and Saleema Begum coming towards their room ... Rahim " Nahe ammi Jaan , humein Shehnesha se abhi milna ha " Salima Begum " Rahim , ruk jaiye , hamari baat suniye , udhar mat jaiye ... " But Rahim entered their room and so Salima Begum , Rahim said " Shehnesha .. Shehnesha " Suddenly their eye lock broke and they were back in the real world ! .. Both looked at each other and then at Salima Begum and Rahim ...
Salim begum was so ashamed ... And JOdha and Jalal both were embarrassed ... Jalal moves towards Rahim and said " Kya hua Rahim ? Aap hamare pass is waqt ?"
Rahim replied " Shehnesha humein aap se zaroori baat karne ha .. ammi Jaan ke bare ma .. " Jalal looked at Salima Begum .. SB said " Kuch nahe Shehnesha , yeh bus sharartein ker rahein ha " and she hold Rahim's hand and asked him to go with her .. Jalal said " Nahe ruk jaiye Salima Begum ... Hum inki baat sune ge " and three of them left .. Jodha was so shy and she went to bed and thinks about this incident ...

But one thing which she has in her mind , why was Jalal coming near to her ? Was he trying to kiss her ... ? She was eager to know the answer from Jalal ...

FLASH BACK ENDS :

Jodha laughs " hahaha .. hum kitne anjane thay , ke hum jaan bhi nahe sake ke waja Ammi Jaan thi " Jalal looks at her , and at her smile and smiles with her ... and replied " waisay aap ko ek dum zor ka jhatka laga hoga .. k hum ap ke kareeb itne kyun arahe thay " Jodha said " Awashe .. Jabhi toh hum bhudduon ke tarah aap ko intezaar ker rahein thay ... "

FLASH BACK STARTS AGAIN :

Jodha was eager to know what was the reason behind this ... She was waiting for Jalal impatiently ... But Jalal didn't come that night to her and then she slept alone ...

Precap : The reason behind Jalal's closeness ...

I hope you all liked this chapter as well , Please hit like and comment 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
loved it
thanks fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
*Unres*
Update is really nice sweetu!
love you!
update soon!

Whoa precap scared me a little! hope there is a positive reason behind this closeness!😃
Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Wow ! dear ! it's an awesome chappie ! 🤗Itni si umar mein bhi u write so brilliantly 👏 Plzzz update it soon !!!!
Edited by Mishika123 - 11 years ago

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