os laal ishq part 3 on page 4

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After seeing new promo and reading spoiler I ant resist myself from writing an os hope you all like it
Ye laal ishq malal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Emperor Jalal enters in her hojra all bandi and dasi stand up in his honour. He said takhlia and move towards jodha's bed
Ye laal ishq ye malal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ishq ishq ishq ishq
She is lying on bed unconscious .her whole body turned blue. He sits besides her without making noise
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa
Raha na mai phir apne jaisa
Ho raha na mai phir apne jaisa
He recalls past moment how he went to amer after listening about her beauty from soldier .he first saw her on gangor festival and mesmerized by her beauty.he enters in private area of royal family and stand behind jodha. On that evening a thunderstorm came like never before. She doesn't know he going to enter in her life like a storm. When abdul arrested by rajvanshi he find out about her hatred towards mughals .she place sword on his neck .on that moment he decide he will crush her pride but destiny played game with him.
Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq
Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq
Mera naam ishq tere naam ishq
he ordered sharifuddin to win amer and he make situation to force bharmal to marry jodha to him. she said her two demands and he readily agree so that marriage takes place and he crush her pride and satisfied his ego
mera naam ,tera naammera
Ye laal ishq malal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq ye malaal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ishq ishq ishq ishq
After their marriage nothing happen as per his thought process. She continue with hatred towards him. He recalls how she blamed for Rukaiya's miscarriage and then visit to ajmer sheriff then sukanya's wedding in amer then start to become friends and then she wrote that letter and again insult him ,his right over her
She enters in his hojra with a bang .benzeer make him drunk and about to kiss him on his lips .she push her Jodha what are you doing you don't have any right to come here without permission
I'll come and not let this happen till I am alive.
Frustrated benzeer stand up and bite her. Now you will suffer jodha .you always came between my aims now you will die .
Apna naam badal du
Ya tera naam chhupa
Ya chhod k saari aag mai vairag utha lu
Bas ek rahe mera kaam ishq
mera kaam ishq
mera kaam ishq
Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq
mera naam ,tera naam
mera naam ishq
Ye laal ishq malal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq malal ishq
Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Shanshah I give her antidote of this poison but we have to wait till morning. right now her condition is critical. If till morning her health isn't improve then I am sorry. Accidently his hand touch her hand its become cold like ice he cover her body with blanket and her hand tight in his hand
Ye kaali raat jakad lu</font>[/P]

<fontYe thanda chand pakad lu </font>


<font face="Calibri">Ye kaali raat jakad lu</font>


<font face="Calibri">Ye thanda chand pakad lu </font>


<font face="Calibri">Din raat ke bairi bhed ka rukh mod main rakh dun</font>


<font face="Calibri">Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa</font>


<font face="Calibri">Tujh sang bair lagaya aisa</font>


<font face="Calibri">Raha na mai phir apne jaisa </font>


<font face="Calibri">Ho raha na mai phir apne jaisa</font>


<font face="Calibri">Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq </font>


<font face="Calibri">Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq </font>


<font face="Calibri">Mera naam ishq tera naam ishq </font>


<font face="Calibri">mera naam ,tera naam </font>


<font face="Calibri">mera naam ishq </font>


<font face="Calibri">Ye laal ishq malal ishq</font>


<font face="Calibri">Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq
Ye laal ishq malal ishq</font>


<font face="Calibri">Ye aib ishq ye bair ishq</font>

Ishq ishq ishq ishq part 2 on page 2
part 3 on page 4
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow yaar👏👏promo se hi os bana diya...kya baat kya baat..it's good yaar...pls continue it..i loved the past scenes..i again recalled those pasts..overall it was just superb⭐️the song selection was also nice...and loved the line..he held her hand tight...pls continue it..soon
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Originally posted by: Indhulovesparii

wow yaar👏👏promo se hi os bana diya...kya baat kya baat..it's good yaar...pls continue it..i loved the past scenes..i again recalled those pasts..overall it was just superb⭐️the song selection was also nice...and loved the line..he held her hand tight...pls continue it..soon


actually i am listening laal ishq song today and think its lyrics totally suit our akdha and yesterday you and bhavini encourage me so much that i cant resist myself from writing something sothis is result of yesterday
Edited by yurimehta11 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome os...plz continue soon.
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Vow !!!!! Superb!!! Promo pe super duper story kya baat hai... lets see what happen tomorrow!!!!😊😊😊

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part 2

Shanshah jalal face tough time so many time but he always overcome with everything even he controlled and make everything according to his choice but this time it seems nothing is in his control. He saw jodha.he can do nothing except wait of tomorrow .he didn't feel helpless like he feels today.

Rukaiyaa hamida and maham enters

Hamida- jalal go and have rest .I am here if we need you we will call you

Maham and rukaiyya agrees and try to force him to go.

Jalal denied politely but when they start to force him he shouts I told you earlier and again I am saying I don't want to take rest .i want to stay here.i want to be with her. cant you understand a simple thing and I don't need anyone please go from here. Leave me alone. after his outburst everyone leaves from there.

He saw outside its still midnight. He has to wait few more hours .this night becomes so long. it feels time stuck at one moment.

Kitni baatein yaad aati hain

Tasverein si ban jaati hain

Main kaise inhein bhooloon, dil ko kya samjhaon

He remembers their meeting in garden at night where jodha mimic him and slight smile came on his face. How beautiful that time is.

Kitni baatein kahne ki hain

Hothon par jo sahmi si hain

Ek rozinhein sun lo ,kyun aise gumsum ho

Kyun poori ho na payee daastan

Kaise aayee hain aisi dooriyaan

He recalls how he introduced benzeer to every one then incident of meena bajar, he give title Kohinoor to benzeer or giving her sword practice costume to benzeer and everything he did with her .jodha I dont have idea its all turned out like this .i just want to show you how it feels when someone rejects you. I was hurt and I was burning from inside so wants to realize you my feelings. I don't want all this.

Shanshah

Shahnshah

Haa

This is for you it keeps you awake whole night moti said

Give me

Moti forward her hand towards him saying shahnshah hold it carefully its hot

But some amount of that liquid fall from bowl to jodha's hand .jalal stand up with a jerk. Blanket covering jodha fall down on floor and moti becomes horrified seeing jodha's condition. her body start to stiff and it becomes violet from blue .moti's face became pale tears start to rolling down from her eyes but she wipe her tears and ran towards kanha temple lit a diya and take a holy book and sit besides jodha and about to read .jalal interrupt her moti what are you doing its not right place. Go and sit in front of kanha but moti didn't respond

Are you become mad? Stop this.he shouts

shanshah I am sorry I can't stop .jodha is breathing her last it's her wish when she is about to die ill read this book for her near her deathbed.

Jalal feels someone snatch his whole world. What if she died how he can survive? He can't forgive himself. This won't happen. Medicine will cure her and she will awake tomorrow he shouts.

I wish it will happen but we have to accept truth. I saw so many people who died due to poison of snake and this is ultimate stage of poison .medicine is not working and poison is still working on her body I never thought in my dream I have to say her goodbye like this.

I wish we were in amer then jodha will be cured Jalal became dumb stuck he didn't listen anything what moti is saying but when he listen last line he become aware

You said if she is in amer she will be alright.how? what you people done in amer ? tell me he shake moti .moti becomes worried

shanshah that method is very risky I cant take risk. Jodha already in danger and I don't take risk of one more life.i don't tell you anything .but jalal decides to take risk. I'll try every method to save her

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic update ! 👏
Loved the way Jalal was caring for Jo 👍🏼
Please update it soon !
Edited by Mishika123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nyc part.
Luved da part where jalal thinks of da garden scene.
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amazing update yr...nd wow sm actions in ds story...waiting to see dt risky path nd jalal in action.

plz update soon.

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