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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#421

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

My sweetheart Nanu... Vow!!!! Amazing update!!!

Really touched my heart!!! the way Jalal pour out his anger and tears... while punishing Maham... You have nailed it... Mind Blowing ... The way U write I am always lost in chapter...

OMG!!! Jodha is so pure and divine... after all this... so much pain... she still wants him to forgive her... That is the reason... cruel rude Jalal... became Akbar later on... her purity completely changed him...

Maham happiness turned in to fear when Jalal and Jo entered in court room together...vow you have mastery in explaining every characters emotions...

I love the way you have written every word of this chapter... You have shown Jodha's fear to the point... It really sting me when he called out for begume khaas and she waited for her name to announce...what a intensity... she still has fear...she has not forgot her insult... and Jalal also realize this ...Vow sweety love it so much... Their eyelock... and Jodha moved her face away... she still has a sting inside her somewhere...

Finally when he announce Maham punishment... In your writing I felt both his pain and anger and love for Jodha... OMG... U HAVE ROCKED THIS CHAPTER AS WELL...

LOVE U SWEETY SO MUCH...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

U R MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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OMG😲😲😲

Bhavs di.. 🤗🤗

Di I am so so so so so sooo Happpy that you liked this...Awww...Itna acha compliment..yar rula diya..😭😭 aap har bar mujhe khush kar dete ho😃😃 .. meri jaan ho aap.🤗. thanks so much di😳 .. I know you are so damn busy in your life.You got so much of office work but still you read my work..Thats so sweet of you di🤗😃 .. Love you beyond words... 😳😳😳 I am soo overwhelmed after this review..God you understand the depth so well..and review it with same intensity as well 😛😛 Thankss a lot di..Love ya!!😃🤗

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#422

Originally posted by: ...Arshaya...
Yay!
MA going away!
Adham ko bhi mehel se bahar nikalo.
Loved it as always.

Thank You Arshaya Dear..😳 Adham Khan ka dekhte hain kya hoga.. And thanks for loving the chap !😃😳

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#423

Originally posted by: Maano_billi
Awsumm update dear and congrats 4 turning red 😉

Isha Dii...😃 Thank You so much di.. And Thanks for the wishes! I hope your exams go well..😳😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#424

Originally posted by: sunshine_sun
cool up-date 😎

Thank You Hina Darlu !😃

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#425

Originally posted by: disha93
SupErb UPDate!!!
Finally MA is being punished!!!

Thank you Disha!!! 🤗

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: Angel-
AMAZING SS..SHOOO CUTE 👏
AKDHA CHEMISTRY ... CUTE CUTE 😛

LOL MM 😆 😆 😆

WAITING FOR NEXT ONE

Awww Angel dear..🤗 Thank You so much for reading this story😳

Lol ya MA ki band baj gayi😆

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#427

Amazing parts Nams...I seem to have read only half of Part 9 earlier, read the rest of it and part 20 now!! 😛

It's so so satisfying to see Maham get punished for her deeds in your SS atleast...and the punishment Jalal gave is perfect for her!😡

Jo is too sweet...and what she said about not discussing their private matters in public was right. Loved her there!😳

Update soon...love ya dear!🤗

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#428

Originally posted by: baubles
Amazing parts Nams...I seem to have read only half of Part 9 earlier, read the rest of it and part 20 now!! 😛 Lol no probs Sou !😳 And in red, Its 10 re.. not 20😆!
It's so so satisfying to see Maham get punished for her deeds in your SS atleast...and the punishment Jalal gave is perfect for her!😡 Aww..Ya I know.. Thankss..MA ki aisi ki taisi..

Jo is too sweet...and what she said about not discussing their private matters in public was right. Loved her there! Awww...Thanksss.. Yes..She's always sensible no matter how much hurt she is..

Update soon...love ya dear!🤗 Love you too babes!!!😳

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Pallavvi

@Pallavvi

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#429

First of all...😃

really sorry that i wont be able to comment on the previous chapter...😭

but nancy ...from the bottom of my heart...😛

take a bow my dear jadugarini...👏

what an electrifying and magnificent update this was...⭐️

what a superb piece of writing...😳

what a fantastic and breath taking confrontation it was...😃⭐️👏

oh my god you just nailed it my sonpari...👏⭐️👍🏼

i was so much hooked to the dialogues that i literally forgot about the surroundings while reading it...😳😃🤗

i don't have words to describe this one...😃

the way jalal shocked maham and said..."bich me aaker khadi hoyiye mahamanga..."...

i just loved loved loved it to the core...👏

aww...my jodhu...she was confused when he called her to sit beside him...

i completely felt her pain there... 😭

i loved the way jalal confronted maham in front of everyone yet dint discussed his personal matters...😃

yayyy...so maham is out from the palace...😉🥳

nancy you rock yaar...👏

i m so proud of you my sweet little angel...😛

just loved it in every bits and pieces...😊

speachless...love u lots🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️🤗❤️

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@RatiTheAngel

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Posted: 11 years ago

#430

wowww very nice-minblowing-super awesome u give update soo fast mashallah not only fast long tooo and most importanly very new and nice really i love the way u write badly wating for your next update soo all the best dear🤗

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