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shahbhavini

@shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#351

unres...

Sorry for late review sweetheart!!!!!

AS USUAL U HAVE NAIL IT AGAIN😃😃😃 EVERY TIME I READ I FEEL LIKE VOW... AMAZING SWEETY...

THE WAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN JALAL CONTROLLED IS ANGER IS AMAZING... MAHAM IN FRONT OF HIM... HIS ENTIRE BODY WAS SHIVERING ANGER... FINALLY HE ROAR AT HER...DON'T SAY HER NAME... IT WAS REALLY AMAZING...STUPID MAHAM...SERIOUSLY SHE IS OVER CONFINDENT...SHE SMART BUT OC... SHE MISUNDERSTOOD ... VOW SUPERB!!!!

HE COMPLELTY BROKE DOWN...😭😭😭 My poor Jallu is going through so much tuff time... all misunderstanding... he is already broken for not trusting Jodha and Now MAHAM... He trusted her entire life... he loved her more than his mother... When he came back to his room...so sad...I could picture everything😭😭😭 what a pain... but I am glad he has hope with Jodha... at least he knows that she is pure and divine...

My favorite part... their lunch together... so touchy... they both glance at each other... "KUCH KUCH HOTA HAI" SR is coming up in few chapters...lol😆

last part when he said to her in firm voice to come to DWS... vow!!!! awesome... I love his possessiveness... and told her come with her...

Entire chapter...I have pictured sweety. U R AMAZING...SUPERB... AWESOME... EXCELLENT... WRITER👏👏👏

U R MY ROCKSTAR ROCKERZ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

LOVE U SWEETY🤗🤗🤗

Edited by shahbhavini - 11 years ago

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#352

Oh my I've missed so many chapters ??? 😲

Ok gonna review from chapter 5 - 9 then ... 😉

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#353

Chapter 5

Horse ride together yippee !!!!

Poor Jodhu crying ... Jalal you should be shameful of yourself ...

Jodha wants to get down of the horse ??? NO !!!!!

Kudos Jallu for not listening to her ...

Jodha why didn't you take his hand ?! Poor Jalal , but you really do deserve it ...

Benny !!! You ******* !!!! How dare you act like that toward Jodha and how dare you make her fall !!!!!! Benny you're seriously pissing me off !!!!

My poor Jodhu ... Yahoo !!! Jallu to the rescue !!!!

Hai Allah he carried Jodha and he ignored Benny !!! Can this get any better ??? Serves you right Benny !!!

Aww he can't stand seeing her in pain ... Glad that Jalal's patience finally exploded and told Jodha that she is not mamuli she's khaas but then he was the one who said it 1st making her think that she's mamuli for him ... Sorry but you deserve it once again Jallu ...

And at the end was that sarcasm Jodha ??? A convo only Akdha can understand not you Hameeda so there's no need for you to crack your head ... Don't waste you time Ammi jaan coz you've got better things to do ...

Chapter 6 review is in pg 37 juz realised it ... My realisation ... 😛 😆

Edited by VincyAnne - 11 years ago

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Chapter 7

First of all what a hug ... Both lost in their own sweet world ...

All the worries , pains everything gone away in that one hug which gives them comfort , peace that was juz so divine ...

They were so lost in the huggy that they didn't see the guard ...

Damn that guard for interupting their beautiful moment !!! All because of the damn Benny !!!! Wait till I get my hands on that guard !!!

I can't believe that Jalal didn't realise what the guard said ... Not that I want him to listen ...

I'm equally pissed off Jodha you ain't the only one fumming with Benny ...

Kudos Jallu for ordering the guard to not let anyone I mean ANYONE come in without your permission !!!! Proud of you !!!

Aww Jodha the possessive wifey ... Love to see you like that btw ... She can't stand it when people make use of her hubby ... Wow totally agree with you Jodhu ...

Jallu congratz your fiery Jodhu is back !!! And yeah go punish the bad people first , Jodha can wait ... She ain't going anywhere ...

But gotta love his mischiefs yaar ... Even at this moment he still has the mood to tease her ... Jalal you naughty naughty boy ...

And Jodha wow she was pratically threatening Jallu ... Wow moment for me !!!

Oops Jodha you spilled the beans bout how you fell ... But am glad you did coz Jalal will definitely punish her ... And I want her to be punished !!!!

Now it's time for possessive Jalal to make an appearance ...

Chapter 8

Oh no Jodha don't you faint !!!! Jalal to the rescue ...

I knew it , I knew that Jodha would stop him ...

Here goes my chance of seeing the possessive Jalal ...

Aww my poor Jalal Don't feel bad Jallu I can't take it ...

Jodha what can I say , even while dozing off you're still worried that Jalal would punish Maham ... How kind can you be ??? But you're only making Jalal feel even more bad with this ... Hmm I can't make up my mind if what you're doing is good ??

Anyways ... aww Jallu you hav every rights to touch her , you ain't gonna hurt her anymore ...

Maham is gonna get the same public humiliation ... I can't wait !!!

Jallu why did you leave Jodhu alone ??? I was hoping that you also doze off and sleep together with Jodha ...

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Vincy Anne

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Posted: 11 years ago

#355

Chapter 9

Ok this chap starts with the angry Jallu ... I'm feeling angry too ... But I'm also controlling it ...

And of course that ***** Maham would make an appearance !!! How could she miss this ...

Oh don't you dare go near Jalal Maham !!!! And you still did stop him !!!

Oh stop those crocodile tears you big drama queen ... Jalal already knows your true face ...

I know how you must be feeling Jalal but be patient , she'll be punished for sure ...

Jalal you actually raised your finger at Maham ?! I can't believe this someone pinch me plz ... 😵 Another wow moment for me ...

Right back at ya Maham bet you were shocked ...

Yes DEK has been called !!! Juz you wait Maham ...

Maham you have officially gone mad , you laughing hysterically for what's gonna happen to you later ..

Aww Jodha was searching for Jalal ...

Moti you teaser ...

Can't wait for the next chapter ...

Edited by VincyAnne - 11 years ago

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SIVARANJANI

@pranavvikas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#356

It was superb track
jalal's realisation is too good in this ss
if this happens like this in show then it would be worthy to see
I want jalal to confront mahamanga in DEK in show also
then it would be superb]
thanks for this superb chapter and also pm

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...janu...

@...janu...

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Posted: 11 years ago

#357

wowww rocking update

"kevvvuuu keka"

plz plz plz update sooonnn

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Nancy

@Heeralicious

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Posted: 11 years ago

#358

Originally posted by: pari_pooja
hey! nancy
awesome update dr, just loved it
jalal & jodha's moment's was really nice
eagerly waiting for the precap, please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

Thank u so much Pooja di !😃

Aww..will update soon!!😳 🤗

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#359

Originally posted by: dkorumilli
vow Nancy.. jalal controlling anger and Mahams overconfidence is just awesome. 😊👏

Thank You darling!😳

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#360

Originally posted by: zebbie0504
Nancy dear...
It was awesome,fantabulous and highly fabulous. Loved it...
Finally,MA aur Jalal ka aamna samna hoga,that too in Diwan-E-Khaas...
Woo hoo...
Me sooo very happy...
Loved the last scene of AkDha...
It was truly lovely and beautiful...
Precap is supppa interesting... :)
continue sooonish... :)
thanks for the pm... :)

Zebii 🤗 Love you so much darling!😳

Thanks so much for this amazing compliment and review! 🤗

Thanksss and will update sooon!😛😛🤗