AkDha FF Izhaar-E-Mohabbat TEMPORARILY DISCONTINUED!! - Page 5

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR 👍🏼👍🏼 PAR MUJHE BOHOT BURA LAGA KI YEH SAB SIRF JODHAA KA SAPNA THA 😭😭 MY POOR JODHU JALAL AUR BENAZIR KO BOHOT BARI SAZA MILNE CHAIYE 😡😡 JALAL YOU HEARTLESS 🤬 I HATED AND WAS DISGUSTED LIKE HELL WHEN HE ASKED HAMIDA TO LET JODHAA NURSE BY A BANDHI 😡😡 OYE TUJHE KYA LAGA KI WOH TERI DUSRI BEGUMON KI TARA HAI 😡😡 AMER KI RAJKUMARI HAI WOH AMER KI NOOR , KAVITA MEIN LIKHI HUI EK KAVITA HAI JODHAA 😎😎 REGISTAN KA GULAB 😳😳 AMER KI DADKAN AUR SHAN HAI WOH 😛😛 JUST GET IT!!!! DEAR UPDATE NEXT PART PLEASE AND PUNISH JALAL AND BENAZIR LIKE HELL!!!!😈😈

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

AWESOME UPDATE DEAR 👍🏼👍🏼 PAR MUJHE BOHOT BURA LAGA KI YEH SAB SIRF JODHAA KA SAPNA THA 😭😭 MY POOR JODHU JALAL AUR BENAZIR KO BOHOT BARI SAZA MILNE CHAIYE 😡😡 JALAL YOU HEARTLESS 🤬 I HATED AND WAS DISGUSTED LIKE HELL WHEN HE ASKED HAMIDA TO LET JODHAA NURSE BY A BANDHI 😡😡 OYE TUJHE KYA LAGA KI WOH TERI DUSRI BEGUMON KI TARA HAI 😡😡 AMER KI RAJKUMARI HAI WOH AMER KI NOOR , KAVITA MEIN LIKHI HUI EK KAVITA HAI JODHAA 😎😎 REGISTAN KA GULAB 😳😳 AMER KI DADKAN AUR SHAN HAI WOH 😛😛 JUST GET IT!!!! DEAR UPDATE NEXT PART PLEASE AND PUNISH JALAL AND BENAZIR LIKE HELL!!!!😈😈

Thnx for review. Rajat ne agar yeh ff and tera comment padha toh direct faint hojayega. Will update soon.

omg! First of all 👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover

Thnx for review. Rajat ne agar yeh ff and tera comment padha toh direct faint hojayega. Will update soon.

Main toh ab nxt year ke december mein update dungi!
COMMENTS PAGE-10 TAK NAHI GAYE 😔

Edited part-
Just joking aaj ya fir kal update miljayega!

I'm back with nxt chapter. Sorry its kinda boring one.

Chapter-3
In Harem Corridor:
Benazir: Gustakhi maaf Mallika-E-Azaam. Agar aap ijazat de toh hum Jodha Begum ki marham-patti karde?
Before Hamida could speak Jodha replied.
Jodha: Isski koi aavashakta nahi hai! Hum apna khayal khud rakh sakte hai. Aur vaise bhi iss tarha ke choti moti chot-e hume apne kabu mein nahi rakh sakti.
Jalal: Itna guroor apke sehat keliye thik nahi Jodha Begum.
Jodha: Humne pehle bhi kaha hai, ab bhi kehrahe hai ki hum apna khayal khud rakh sakte hai.
Jalal: Jodha Begum aap...(Jodha cuts him in between)
Jodha (angrily): Apka pravachan(lecture) dena hogaya ho toh hum jaye?!
Jalal: Apko roka kisne hai? Jaiye beshak jaiye!
Jodha: Pranam ammijaan. Pranam Salima Begum.
Jodha leaves.
Hamida: Jalal yeh kesa bartavh(behave) kar rahe the aap?
Jalal: Ammijaan apko sirf humari galti dikhraha hai? Unka nahi?
Hamida: Galti humesha apka tha Jalal! Zabardasti nikaah karna! Phir apne aur Ruqaiya Begum ke bacche ka katil thehrana bina sacchai jane aur janbujh ke jashan mein unhe be-izzat karna! Galti humesha apki thi Jalal apki! Agar apne Jodha Begum se nikaah naa kia hota toh voh yaha naa hoti! Apko pata hai yeh harem bhi unke liye kaal-kothri(prison) hai?! Har waqt unka dum ghutta hai yaha! Pata nahi konse naa paak waqt mein aap jaise bete ko janam dia tha humne! Pehle toh hum apne apko khoste(curse) the apke iss bartavh keliye! Apko apne apse dur karne keliye! Apko apna waqt naa de pane keliye! Par ab! Ab apne apko KHUSHNASEEB samajhte hai ke HUM APSE HUMESHA DUR THE! Aur apne apko BADHNASEEB samajhte hai ke HUM APKE AMMI HAI! ISS KAL KI AAYI BANDHI(BENAZIR) KELIYE APNE BEGUM KO ITNA CHOT POHCHAYA AUR APNE APKO JODHA BEGUM KA SHOUHAR KEHTE HAI? CHII! Sharm aati hai apne aap par ke humne apko kabhi apna ek ahemm hissa samjha! Apki asli ammi toh MAHAM ANGA hai! Voh aurat jisne asaal mein apke aur Ruqaiya Begum ke bacche ka katil kia aur ilzaam apne hum shakal par laga dia! Jodha Begum ne apke liye jo khana banaya usme mirchi milaya! Jodha Begum ne jo khatt(letter) apko likha tha usme unhone sirf apka shukriada kia tha Tasneem vale ki kisse(case) keliye! Maham ne apse jhut bola ke Jodha ke khatt mein unhone apna mohabbat ka izhaar kia! JODHA BEGUM KO SAB SACH MALUM THA LEKIN UNHONE APKO NAHI BATAYA KYUNKI UNKE PAAS KOI SABUT NAHI THA! Maham apse Adham Khan ko kal-kothri mein baandh karvane keliye! Apko lagta hoga ke apke ammijaan ko apka fiqar nahi hai jo ab sach hai. Pehle fiqar hoti thi Jalal lekin ab nahi hoti! Itne paak-saaf insaan(Jodha) ko itna zalil kia ke voh ander se puri tarha tut chuki hai! Chi Jalal chi!
Jalal: Apko uss paigam ke bare mein kese pata chala?
Hamida: Humne apke aur Maham ke sare baate sun lia tha jab Maham ne voh khatt apko padhke sunaya tha. Hum apke hojre ke samne se guzar rahe the tab apki baatein suni thi. Aur tab bhi apki baatein suni thi jab aap diwaan-e-khaas se yun hi chale aaye the.
Jalal: Ammijaan hum...(Hamida cuts him in between)
Hamida- Mat bulaiye hume Ammijaan! Chaliye Salima Begum!
Hamida and Salima leave.

Jalal was totally shocked! Benazir kept her hand on his shoulder but he jerked it away! Jalal slowly walked towards his chamber looking devastated. Benazir stood there furious. She went back to her chamber after about 15mins.

In Jalal's Room:
As soon as he reached his room, Jalal collapsed on the carpet before his bed.
Jalal: Ya Allah! Yeh humne kya kia? Jodha Begum nirdosh hai! Lekin Badi Ammi ne toh hume pala hai. Hum unpe kaise shak kar sakte hai? Hume Badi Ammi se baat karna hoga!
Jalal gets up and heads toward Maham's room.

Just as Jalal was about to enter Maham's room, he heard something and froze!

In Maham's Room:
Maham: Hahahahahaha! Resham! Aaj hum bohut khush hai. Jalal aur uss rajvanshi begum ke bich itni dooriyan aagayi hai ke voh kabhi nahi bhadega. Kissi ko pata bhi nahi chala tha ki Jodha Begum ne jo khana Jalal keliye banaya tha usme mirchi humne milaya tha. Jalal aur Ruqaiya Begum ke bacche ko humne mara tha lekin ilzaam apne hum shakal par lagaya aur ab Jalal se jhoot bola ke Jodha Begum ne apne paigam mein apne mohabbat ka izhaar kia hai!
TBC
Precap: Mujhe khud hi nahi pata!

Sorry maine ch-2 ka precap follow nahi kia. Many of u wanted Jalal to get punished so changed da track a little bit.

wow kissi ki ff main toh maham anga ki asliyat samne aayi.

Awesome update plz continue soon

Originally posted by: roshaeldsouza91

Res

Nahi!!!!!!!! [Dramatical scream]

Originally posted by: SUMESHNI

Awesome update plz continue soon

Thnx will try updating soon.