AkDha FF Izhaar-E-Mohabbat TEMPORARILY DISCONTINUED!! - Page 3

Wow!!...
Dil garden garden kar diya!!!... 👏
Serial ke track se toh behtar hai!!...
Awsm start!!... 😛
Pls plz update sooon!!!!... 😉
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Awesome writing .loved it plz continue soon and plz pm me

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Arshaya

OH MY *-* *-* WHAT AN AWESOME UPDATE DEAR 👏👏

Vow !!! Awesome!! Dil khush kar diya... I was getting more mad at Jalal, how dare he was giving her room to Benzir... Superb!!!! love it... Their romance superb!!! 15 20 25... that is so cute... U are an awesome writer.. please continue soon!!!🤗🤗🤗

I'm back with nxt chapter. Thnx for ur support. Especially Tahni and Nancy. Here's da chapter.

Chapter-2
Jodha: Parantu agar apko apke kaksh mein kisiko le jana hai toh Ruqaiya Begum ko le jaiye.
Voice: Nahi Jodha Begum!
AkDha turned to face Ruqaiya!
Ruqaiya: Adaab! Jodha Begum hum Jalal ke bohut acche dost hai par aap unki mohabbat hai. Yeh haq sirf aapka hai
Jodha: Parantu...(Ruqaiya cuts her in between)
Ruqaiya: Hum kuch nahi sunenge Jodha! Apko yeh faisla swikar karna hoga!
Jodha finally agreed after lots of pleads from RuqLal.
Jodha: Theek hai. Hum swikar karte hai!
Ruqaiya: Aur haan abse hum dono dost hai issiliye aap hume sirf Ruqaiya kehke bulayengi.
Jodha: Aur aap hume Jodha kehke.
Jodha Ruqaiya hugs!
Ruqs leaves.
Jalal: Chaliye saman baandh lijiye apko humare hojre mein jana hai.
Soon Jodha's packing was done and Ja-Jo were standing outside Jalal's chamber. Jodha lifted her right leg and was about to put it inside Jalal's room when...
CRASH!!!!!!!!!!
Jodha's eyes flew open!!
She was in her room and the wind of the MONSON SEASON was blowing so fast that a vase nearby fell down crashing into thousands of pieces as well as JODHA'S HEART!
Jodha: Voh sab bas sapna tha? Hum apne kaksh mein hai? Shehenshah?!
She looked around to get a sight of Jalal but he was nowhere.
Jodha: Yeh sach hai ke hum Shehensha se prem...(she sobbed for sometime and then got normal).
It was early morning so Jodha quickly got up and called Moti.
Moti: Haan Jodha bolo.
Jodha: Hamare snanh ki yojhna karo.
Moti: Itni subah?
Jodha: Prashna puchna baand karo aur jao.
Jodha did her daily routine and thought of practicing sword fight. She wore a white practice dress red border {white dress with golden border toh benazir ko de dia nah!}.

Practice ground:
Jodha was practicing with a lady(who knows swordfight and has come from Amer with Jodha) when suddenly Maham's saying rings in her ears. The conversation between Maham and her where Maham said that she is just a bandhi to Jalal and other nonsense talk of Maham.
Suddenly the sword of the lady-opponent(L.O) cuts Jodha's right side's lower arm.
L.O: Shama kardijiye Rajkumari (All the amer bandhis call Jodha as Rajkumari cause its their habit except Moti and Reva who call her by her name).
Jodha: Koi baat nahi. Tum jao. Hum aushodi lagane jate hai.
Jodha was going to her chamber when she came across Hamida and Salima.
Hamida: Adaab Jodha Begum.
Jodha: Pranam Ammijaan. Pranam Salima Begum
Salima: Adaab! Ya Allah (now noticing Jodha's wound)! Jodha Begum! Apke haath mein se toh khoon nikal raha hai.
Hamida: Ya khuda! Apko chot kaise lagaiyi?
Jodha: Woh ammijaan hum talwar-bazi ka abhiyas kar rahe the, tab lagaiyi.
Hamida: Chaliye hum marham-patti kardete hai.
Voice: Kon kiski marham-patti karega ammijaan?
It was Jalal with Benazir beside him.
Salima: Adaab Shehensha.
Jodha (a little angrily): Pranam.
Hamida: Jalal woh darasal talwar-bazi karte waqt Jodha Begum ki haath mein chot lagaiyi.
Jalal: Toh kisi bandhi ko bula lijiye. Aap kyun karengi yeh sab?
Hamida (angrily): Jalal! Hum Jodha Begum ko yun bandhi ke havale nahi chod sakte!
Benazir: Gustakhi maaf Mallika-E-Azaam. Agar aap ijazat de toh hum Jodha Begum ki marham-patti karde?
Before Hamida could speak Jodha replied.
Jodha: Isski koi aavashakta nahi hai! Hum apna khayal khud rakh sakte hai. Aur vaise bhi iss tarha ke choti moti chot-e hume apne kabu mein nahi rakh sakti.

TBC
Precap: Jodha's jealousy growing and Jalal and Benazir getting closer!

Arshaya: Iss baar lamba wala comments and agar page10 tak comments nahi pocha toh chapter 3 nahi milega!

it was a dream😲😲😲,my heart also shattered into 1000 peices😭 chalo lets see ye jealousy track khan tak jata h😉

amazing update.i thought jalal would be tensed seeing jodha in pain,but he is enjoying.:(

Originally posted by: shreya931

it was a dream😲😲😲,my heart also shattered into 1000 peices😭 chalo lets see ye jealousy track khan tak jata h😉

Sorry dear. But keep reading. Izhaar e mohabbat toh hoga hi akdha ke bich. Just stay tuned to da ff

Love you PariJat and AshVik as well