~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , *UPDATED PT 12* : pg 32 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice os 👏
update soon and pm me when u update
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Originally posted by: sw123

wow nice os 👏

update soon and pm me when u update


Thanks dearu 😳😳 Will do 😃😃
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when will jalal find it out
anyway nice going
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i want jallal to find out it was jodha who danced on that day...
nice upt
cont soon
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Nice OS !! 👍🏼
Youe write brilliantly ! 🤗
n last mein update plzzz !!
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finally u updated.
It was superb!
Best of luck for exams.
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Hello sweeties 😛😛 I am back with update 😊😊 Enjoy reading and let yourself drown into the story 😳😳 Kindly ignore those grammatical mistakes and errors of typing 😊😊

~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , IN THE COURT~
~Part 7~
Recap : Jalal is unknowingly approaching the garden where Jodhaa is doing her tulsi pooja , she notices that he is checking feet of all women in the palace by passing , she panicked , Moti proposes her to help in removing her anklets , when Jodhaa looks up , she finds Jalal materialized infront of her.

Jodhaa is becoming more and more tensed seeing Jalal approaching and pleads moti "MOTI ISHWAR KELIYE INE JALD SE JALD UTARO" , Moti seeing Jodhaa tensed nods her head in a yes without asking anything , Jodhaa looks up , looking around and breathing heavily when suddenly she finds Jalal materialized there infront of her , she gets uttershocked , thinking "HAI BAGWAN YEH KYA KARDIYA APNE" holding tightly her lehenga's dress , silence takes place between them for a moment when Jalal breaks it by saluting her "ASLAMALEKUM JODHAA BEGUM" in a mischievous and teasing tone , she also does in answer "PRANAM SHEHENSHAH" , Jalal asks "AAP
BOHOT PARESHANI LAG RAHI HAI JODHAA BEGUM , PATAYE KYA BAAT HAI" , she curses silently her luck and fate , she thinks why do I have so many bad lucks not even to hide peacefully and unknowingly some facts? Why the fate is after me? She stammers saying "WOH AHEM SHEHENSHAH KUCH NAHI" , Jalal carefully looks at each of her gests to find what is she hidding from him? When all of a sudden Moti gets up
without knowing Jalal's presence and says "HOGAYA JODHAA , UTARLIYA TUMHARI PAYAL" , smiling and showing to Jodhaa her anklets , "YEH LO" , Jodhaa looks angrily at Moti , throwing thunders and flashes to her by her eyes , Moti doubts that may she has done something wrong and turns to look around to find and there she finds Jalal standing , she hurrily says "PRANAM SHEHENSHAH , SHAMA KIJIYEGA HUMEIN NAHI PATA CHALA KI AAP BI YAHAN HAI" , Jalal asks her "BATAO TUM NE PAYAL KYUN UTARLIYA" , Moti a bit scared answers "SHEHENSHAH WOH. . ." , Jodhaa cuts her in between and says "KYUNKI HUM NE UTARNE KO KAHA" daringly defending her , sensing that Moti is a bit scared , she orders "MOTI TUM JAO , INE HUMARI SHISHE KE SAMNE RAKH DO , HUM ABI ATE HAI" , Moti leaves hurrily after saluting Jalal. After Moti leaves , Jodhaa looks at him and says "AGAR AAP KI ANUMATI HO TO HUMEIN BI AGYA CHAHENGE" and starts to leave when Jalal cuts her in a midway and says "PAR HUMNE AGYA NAHI DIYA JODHAA BEGUM" , she looks up at him confusely , he stares longingly at her and says "HUMEIN AJEEB LAGA JODHAA BEGUM , HUMARI ANE SE APKO JALDBAZI MEIN PAYAL UTARNA , APNI BANDI KO CHALE JANE KEHNA , KUCH TO BAAT HAI , NAHI JODHAA BEGUM?" , Jodhaa looks at him sternly without letting him have any clue of her feelings and not even showing that she is shaken inside , she firmly responds "AISA KUCH BI NAHI HAI SHEHENSHAH , YEH APKA BRAM HAI" and starts to leave when Jalal holds her wrist and says (with husky voice) "HUM NE APKO JANE KO NAHI KAHA JODHAA BEGUM , PHIR BI AAP KAHAN JA RAHI HAI" when all of a sudden a guard arrives in the garden , salutes them "ADAB SHEHENSHAH , BEGUM SAHIBA! HUZUR HUM APKELIYE EK PAIGAM LAYI HAI" , Jalal still holding her wrist while Jodhaa is trying her best to free her hand , he orders "KAHO" , the guard "HUZUR , SUBA APNE HUMEIN BENAZIR MAUTARMA KO ISS WAQT HAREM KE PAAS ANE KO KEHNE KA HUKUM DIYA THA , WOH APKI HUKUM KE SAATH FORAN AGAYI , APKA INTEZAAR KAR RAHI HAI HUZUR , YEH UNKI TARAF SE APKELIYE PAIGAM HAI" , Jalal smirks and immediately looks at Jodhaa , who knowing that Jalal would first see her reaction to not miss any chance to taunt her , she acts as nothing bother her and continues trying to free her
hand. Jalal nods and orders the guard to leave. Finally she succeed , she smiles and leaves saying "PRANAM SHEHENSHAH" , and once she turns her back from him , she finally let appears her sadness on face and walks silently toward her chamber. Jalal looks on and smirks cunningly
saying "APKO KYA LAGA JODHAA BEGUM , HUM APKI DIKHAVA NAHI PEHCHAN PAYENGE" , he lowly laughs and says "HUMEIN PATA HAI , AAP KO IN SAB SE FARAK PARTA HAI" , he angrily says "AB HUM AAP KO ACHE SE SABAK SIKHAYENGI , TAB AAP KO PATA CHALEGA , HUMARI SAATH KHELNE KA KYA ANJAAM HOTA HAI" , Benazir makes her way in the garden and salutes Jalal "ADAB SHEHENSHAH" , Jalal hearing her
footsteps immediately looks at her anklets and the thought of finding the dancer who mesmerized him that night comes , he ordees her "BENAZIR EK KAM KARO , INE UTARO AUR ISS PAYAL KO PEHNO" , she happily agrees sensing that Jalal is valorizing her , but as it's a bit different from other payals which she usually uses to wear , she turns and shakes it forcefully not being able to wear it , Jalal irritately intervienes "RUKO YEH TUM KYA KAR RAHI HO" , she requires "SHEHENSHAH PATA NAHI ISE KAISE PEHNA JATA HAI , HUM SE NAHI HORAHI HAI" , Jalal recalling the gangaur moments and how he has found it , says "YEH PAYAL HUMARELIYE BEHAT AZIZ AUR KEEMTI HAI" , he says I will help you to wear it , he kness down near her feet meanwhile Jodhaa is on her way coming back to the garden as she unintentionnally forgets her arti thali there near tulsi pooja (I KNOW YOU GUYS FEEL LIKE STRANGLING ME AFTER READING THIS :D) , Jalal aproaches her feet and make her wear it when Jodhaa reaches the garden and sees it shocked , heart-broken , it's sadenned her when she sees that it's her payal which Jalal proposed to make her wear that day in the garden , saying that he will keep it with him at secure place , Jalal looks up and sees Jodhaa , he smirks and holds intentionnally Benazir's hand and says "LAGTA HAI YEH PAYAL TUMHARI LIYE HI BANI HAI , KITNI SAJATI HAI TUMHARI PAIRON KE SAATH , BEHAT KHUBSURAT LAGRAHI HAI" , he asks her to walk for him , she does when Jalal rather then looking at Benazir cunningly smirks and looks at Jodhaa , she acts as she saw nothing and nothing bother her , she takes her pooja thali and leaves. Benazir angrily thinks "PHIR BI US JODHAA BEGUM KELIYE YEH SAB KAR RAHI HAI , US MEIN HAI KYA JO SHEHENSHAH USE APNI ANKHON SE NAHI HAT SAKTI" , to divert him , she says "BOHOT KHUBSURAT HAI NA SHEHENSHAH" , he doesn't respond to it and asks her to walk so that he could hears the sound , she does it again annoyingly , Jalal gets shocked by hearing the sound , he rethinks about it when the dancer ran away from him , he compares those two payal's sounds and conclued that they're same , he is utter shocked and flabbargasted murmuring "JODHAA BEGUM THA WOH JO. . ." , Benazir cuts him in between saying "SHEHENSHAH" , he asks her to leave him alone and as she is about to leave , he hears her footsteps and asks her to remove the payal and wears her's , she is shocked but still quietly obeys. After she leaves , he stays there rethinking about all events , then he makes his way toward Jodhaa's chamber to know more!!!

THORI DEHR MEIN PART 8 UPDATE KARDUNGI , STAY LOGGED GUYS 😛😛
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I AM BACK SWEETIES 😳😳
~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , IN THE COURT~
~ Part 8 ~
Recap : After Jalal discovers that the dancer was none oothr then Jodhaa , he asks Benazir to leave , Jalal rethinks of those events and goes to Jodhaa's chamber in order to know more!!!

Jalal makes his way toward Jodhaa's chamber meanwhile in Jodhaa's room , Moti is asking Jodhaa why did she act weirdly and ask to remove payals when Jalal come? What is she hiding from him? Jodhaa tells Moti that is nothing like this , My feet was just aching even more with those heavy payals that's why I wanted to remove them. Moti doubtly asks "PAR JODHAA YEH TO TUMHARI SAB SE PASANDI WALI PAYAL HAI NA , AUR AJ TAK AISA KUCH HUA HI NAHI" , Jodhaa is uncomfortable as she knows that she is lying to her close friend with whom till now she uses to share all secrets and things that she doesn't share with others , Jodhaa with low tone while undoing her long braid says "THEEKE MOTI TUM JEET GAYI , HUM TUMHE SACH PATAYENGE PAR PEHLE HUM SE VADAH KARO KE TUM YEH KISI MATLAB KISI SE BI NAHI KAHENGE , THEEKE?" , Moti happy to know that she knows perfectly her friend and that she wasn't wrong , sweetly smiles , holds her hands and says "VADAH KARTE HAI HUM TUMSE JODHAA , KISI KO YEH BAAT NAHI PATA CHALEGI" , Jodhaa smiles in relief and asks moti "THEEKE PAR PEHLE DEKHO KOI HUMARE KAKSH KI BAHAR YA AAS PAAS NAHI HAI" , Moti is a bit tensed thinking , is it such serious matter that she is taking such precausion , but to reassure Jodhaa she goes to see from window if there are anyone around the chamber , but there is no one , she goes to Jodhaa to inform her and then Jodhaa says "ACHA AB SUNO MOTI , TUMHE YAAD HAI USS RAT KI JASHN KA JAB BENAZIR . . ." , Moti confusely looks at Jodhaa and says "HAN HAN HUMHE ACHI TARA SE YAAD HAI , PAR JODHAA , BENAZIR ISS MEIN MUAMLE MEIN KYA KARNE AYI HAI?" , Jodhaa annoyingly requires "MOTI , PURE BAAT SUNO TO , TUMHE YAAD HAI BENAZIR KE BAAT EK FANQIRA AYI THI , JASHN MEIN , USNE APNI MUJRA KE SAATH SAB KA DIL JEET LIYA THA NA?" , Moti excitedly responds "HAN JODHAA , USKI CHEHRE TO NAHI DEKH PAYI HUM PARANTU DEKHNE MEIN ITNI SUNDAR THI KI USKE JANE KE BAAT BI , MEHEL KI BAHAR LOG USKI PRASHANSA KAR RAHI THI , SHEHENSHAH KHUD APNI TAQDEER KO CHORKAR USKE SAMNE BEHT NE AGAYI , AUR . . ." Jodhaa answers shyly "AUR WOH. . ." but Moti doesn't finish to explain , to describe her beauty , grace and to praise her so she cuts in between saying "JODHAA TUMHE ANA CHAHIYE THA , CHEHRE TO NAHI DEKH PATI PARANTU USKI MUJRA TO DEKH PATI , HUME SHAMA KARNA JODHAA PAR SHEHENSHAH BI US KI DEEWANI HOGAYI THI , ARE AISA PEHLI BAR HUA HAI JO EK BADSHAH APNI TAQDEER CHORKAR KISI FANQIRA KE MUJRA DEKHNE KELIYE UNKE SAMNE BEHTNE GAYI" , Jodhaa says lowered eyes "MOTI , WOH FANQIRA. . ." , Moti teasingly cuts her saying "HUMHE PATA HAI JODHAA TUMHE JALAN HORAHI HAI , ITNA KUCH KAHA HAI HUM NE USKE BARE MEIN , PAR HAN KAHO US FANQIRA KYA?" , Jodhaa gets up and goes to sit infront of her mirror , touches passionately her anklets and says "WOH HUM HI THI" , Moti stays there spellbounded and utter shocked asks again "KYA , YEH TUM KYA KEH RAHI HO JODHAA , WOH . . TUM" , Jodhaa recalls her performance , the way Jalal was staring at her longingly that night , when they were alone in the hall , and the way she runs away from him and blushes , Moti seeing Jodhaa blushing says "PAR JODHAA , HUMHE YAKEEN NAHI HOTA KE WOH TUM . . ." , Jodhaa cuts her in between and says "TU SUNO MOTI" and she sings the same song which she sang that night on jashn.
Jodhaa starts to sing : TUM NE HUM KO HI KYA
BEWAFA SAMJA A A A
JHUTE ILLZAM , MERI JAAN LAGAYA NA KARO
JHUTE ILLZAM , MERI JAAN LAGAYA NA KARO
DIL HAI NA ZUKH AISI TUM AISE DUKHAYA NA KARO
JHUTE ILLZAM
MERI ANKHON MEIN JO ACHI NAHI LAGTE ANSU
YEH AGAR SACH BI HAI KE MUJHKO PATAYA NA KARO
DIL HAI NA ZUK AISI TUM AISE DUKHAYA NA KARO
JHUTE IL ZA A A A A M
H A A A A N JHU TE IL ZA A AM
Jalal who reached quietly near her chamber since the beginning gets the strong confirmation that the dancer was none other then her , he gets stucks there staring at her singing from the window.
HIT LIKES AND LEAVE YOUR REVIEWS PLEASE 😛😛
GUYS I'M SORRY FOR THE SHORT AND LATE UPDATE , NEXT TIME , I PROMISE TO GIVE A LONG UPDATE 🤗🤗

PRECAP : CONFRONTATION BETWEEN AKDHA

Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Buddy I was waiting for ur update from many days...plz do continue..luvd this update 😊 😳

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