~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , *UPDATED PT 12* : pg 32 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
I feel bad for payal..par chalo let's see what happens after that
anyway good post 👏
nd thnx for pm
Edited by shreya931 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
amazing update... .plz continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
⭐️ PROMOTION ⭐️
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Firstly , I am sorry guys if you were expecting for an update and you get this nonsense 😃😃
And sorry for annoying all of you who weren't interested at all but STILL 🤣🤣
Chalo guys , I am going to promote here my new FF : I realize that my heart beats only for you (I know it's crapy and long but it isn't without any reason 😉) 😆😆 Please do give a look , it's gonna be really interesting 😛😛
Here is the link of it , enjoy the story 😳😳 :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3863744&PID=98487130&#p98487130

Sweetly

- ❤️❤️ Sweetystubborn ❤️❤️


P.S : I have written it in 'Hara rang' because Jalal ko hara rang pasand hai ☺️☺️
Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: AriyaBestLover

Tu nahi sudhregi Tenzin.


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Posted: 11 years ago
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sweety dear...
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maine bhi hare rang se likha hai,jalal ko hara rang bht pasand hai na...to is bat update pleuzzz...😃😃😃😃
Edited by shreya931 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Plz plz plz plz plz plz plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

⭐️ PROMOTION ⭐️
🤗 🤗
Firstly , I am sorry guys if you were expecting for an update and you get this nonsense 😃😃
And sorry for annoying all of you who weren't interested at all but STILL 🤣🤣
Chalo guys , I am going to promote here my new FF : I realize that my heart beats only for you (I know it's crapy and long but it isn't without any reason 😉) 😆😆 Please do give a look , it's gonna be really interesting 😛😛
Here is the link of it , enjoy the story 😳😳 :

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3863744&PID=98487130&#p98487130

Sweetly

- ❤️❤️ Sweetystubborn ❤️❤️


P.S : I have written it in 'Hara rang' because Jalal ko hara rang pasand hai ☺️☺️

that was a good story 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
I am sorry dearies for the long delay and also because these days I am very busy with studies as I am preparing for the exam at the end of the month that's why I am going to take lots of time to update chapters and I am less online so please don't feel bad if you have asked numerous time to update and I didn't did !!! This update is specially dedicated to Arshu honey aka Arshaya 😳😳 and update gang 😆😆

~OS : BENAZIR AND JODHAA'S DANCE DUEL , IN THE COURT~
~Part 6~
Recap : Jodhaa is dreaming on Jalal discovering truth about her when suddenly moti makes her entry and takes Jodhaa out of her illusion!!!
Moti enters in Jodhaa's chamber and finds her fully lost in million thoughts in front of the mirror. She gets surprised as it's very late at night and usually at this time Jodhaa is already in bed then how come she is still there , inconscient? What's she thinking about? Is something wrong? Is she alright? Jodhaa doesn't seem noticing her presence which makes moti worried and she calls her in panick :
"Jodhaa , jodhaa" but Jodhaa remains lost in thoughts and doesn't respond to her , moti gets more tensed as now she thinks really something is wrong with Jodhaa!!! So she bends in front of Jodhaa and puts her hands on her shoulders completly shouting to her with tears of fear in her eyes "Jodhaa , jodhaa kuch bolte kyun nahi? Sab kuch theek hai na??? Jodhaa" and she gently caresses her face saying "Kya hua tumhe" , feeling someone's touch all of sudden she awakes and gets back into sense , much to her shock to find moti all teary eyed in front of her!!! For a second recalling all her thoughts , she gets shocked , doesn't knowing how to explain it to herself but she leaves all these behind as now moti needs her , she surprisingly answers in a shock "Han , hum to theek hai moti par agar hum yeh prashn tum se puchte to??? Tumhari ankhon mein ashru??? Kya baat hai moti???" Moti sigh in relief , folds her hands and closes her eyes to thank Ambe ma as nothing happen to Jodhaa. Jodhaa gets shocked by this bizarre gest of moti asks again worriedly "Moti , moti humari prashn ka utar do , kya hua hai tumhe , kyun istara ajeeb ajeeb . . ." but before she could completes , moti cuts her in between saying "Ambe ma ka shukr hai aap theek hai Jodhaa , kitne baar tumhe bulake chilaya humne , par tumne utar dene keliye itni samein lagaya ki hum chintit hogayi" and she wiped her tears smiling!!! Jodhaa gets utter shocked after listening to her , how can she be so lost-minded , selfless like this??? She self thoughts "Yeh humein kya hogaya kanha , aisi kaisi hosakti hai??? Hum soch mein itni dubgayi ki moti ko sunaya tak nahi??? Aur kaise soch . . ." still shocked and unbelieve Jodhaa stays quiet for a moment after moti's answer but moti interrupts her saying "Ab itni ratri hogayi hai Jodhaa , aap jakar sojaye , hum bi sojate hai" , she fakely smiles to moti in order to reassure her not letting her doubts about anything and self thought "Bechari moti humari wajah se itni chintit hui hai , jahan tak humne use ruladiya , ab bohot hua hum istara kabhi bi nahi sochenge" and answers smilingly "han moti hum sojate hai , tum bi sojao , aj bohot thak gayi hai na?" , moti "han Jodhaa , hum chalte hai shub ratri" , jodhaa "tumhein bi" and moti leaves her chamber leaving a Jodhaa all troubled!!! Jodhaa removes all the rest of her jewelleries and lehenga , wears a long and pink light skirt with pink blouse and goes to bed. At bed but still she doesn't succeed to sleep and rethinks about all the events passed while making a long braid with her hair and she tells to herself " bas Jodhaa bas , tumhari bewukoufi ki wajah se tumhe moti ko kis hal mein daldiya yeh kaafi nahi kya? Tum phir se aisa kabhi nahi sochenge , kabhi kabhi nahi , sharmani chaiye tumhe ek rajvanshi honeke nate mein aisi ashub soch dalne keliye" trying to convince herself and thinking she falls slowly asleep!!!
~In the morning~
Jodhaa gets up and is dressing herself with the green lehenga that Jalal offered her but when she realises it by looking herself in the mirror , she gets up and angrily murmurs to herself "Nahi , kabhi nahi , nahi pehnenge hum uski diye hue vastr" , she removes it and puts it by naping it in the cupboard and wears a yellow lehenga , the favourite color of her Kanha!!! She then looks herself in the mirror , wearing her bangles and readjusting her bindhi and says "Ab zyada ache lagti hai , haina???" looking cutely at Kanha's statue and giggles on her foolishness. She goes to prepare arti thali and beautifully decorates it with gorgeous and fresh flowers as her and goes to sit infront of the Kanha's statue , wonderfully decorating it and then sings the bhajan with her mesmerizing and melodious voice which as always steals the souls and hearts of true lovers and kind hearted people!!!
BGM : HAI MURLIDHAR
Her voice resonated in the whole palace where every women in the harem praises her voice "Subanallah , kitni surili awaz hai , har subha iss awaz ko sunke din shuru karna bohot acha lagta hai" , "Mashallah , kya jaadu hai Jodhaa begum ki awaz mein" , moti passing side by the garden in harem , smiles to herself proudly thinking "Aisi hi hai humari Jodhaa" and goes to her chamber to join her for tulsi pooja. Moti is about to call her but seeing her still praying stops herself and waits for her while Jodhaa is praying with all respect of her innner soul and purity and then requests Kanha "Aj naya din hai Kanha , hamesha ki tara ap humari saath dena , humein shakti dena , taki hum har musibatein , har mushkilein ka samna karsake , humne fanqira ban ke diwaane khas mein jo kiya woh humne jaan bhuj kar nahi kiya par hum majboor the , humne apni dil ke nahi palki apni dimag ko suni hai aur usne humein shehenshah ko sabak sikhane ko kaha , woh humari itni beizati aur takleef ponchne ke baat bi woh wahan apni khushi ki jashn mana raha hai aur yeh humein bilkul sweekar nahi hai to isliye Kanha iss mein aap humari saath dena take une kabhi pata na chale ke iss ke piche keval hum hi hai , kalrat jaise ashub soch kabhi humare maan mein math ane dena kanha , yeh saab bhool kar humein ache se iss naya din ko shuru karne mein madad karna" and as she finished she gets up and turns back and sees moti waiting for her and she happily says "arey moti tum , kab se humari intezaar kar rahi thi???" Moti comes to her and sweetly holds her chin saying "Take meri laadli apne pyari se kanha ji ko ache tara se pratna kar sake isiliye to humein intezaar karna hi tha" Jodhaa sweetly giggles to her friend's kidness and says "hum hum acha yehi baat hai ya phir koi aur? batao tum itni khush kyun ho???" Moti "Jab hum aapke kaksh mein arahi thi to humne dusri begumon ko tumhari awaz ko prashansa karne suna to humein bohot garv hua apni Jodhaa par" Jodhaa smiles and says "Acha , ab choro yeh sab baat batmein karenge moti pehle tulsi pooja keliye chalte hai bohot dehr horahi hai" Moti agrees and they go in the garden where is the tulsi plant and Jodhaa starts rituals and prayers meanwhile Jalal in his chamber is thinking about her and is trying to find any hints to know who is her then suddenly the thought of her payal comes through his mind and recollects how she runs away and it's sound and he begins to murmur "Yeh payal , payal , aur iski awaz , payal payal . . ." and remembers that he had Jodhaa's payal and rushes to the jewellery box beside the prestigious big armory next to his royal bed and takes it out and begins to play with it recalling gangaur's event and his first meeting with her and passionately spells her name "Jodhaa , Jodhaa begum , pata nahi iss samein apki zehen mein kya chal raha hoga , kyun kiya apne humari saath aisa? Paigam likha , apne paas bulaya aur istara humari beizati ki" and by recalling her rejection moment , he gets back into revenge mood and says "Iss keliye to ap ko saza pukatni paregi Jodhaa begum aur tab aap ko iss ka ehsas hoga , ki aapne humari andar ko kaise jala diya , waisehi hum apke saath karenge" and cynically smirks but little did he know that the clue to identifie the person who he is looking for is just in front of his face and he has just to listen to it's sound but being deeply drown into Jodhaa's thoughts and revenge , he doesn't give attention to it when a guard interrupts him in his thoughts saying "Huzur ki aram mein khalal dalne keliye muafi chahti hai par mautarma benazir aap ko milne keliye iltija kar rahi hai" , which annoys Jalal , who irritadely orders him to tell her that he doesn't want to meet her today but when he rethinks about his plan , he stops the guard "Ruko , use kehdo ki hum use harem ke paas milenge" , guard bows his head and answers "Ji huzur" and leaves!!! Jalal evilly smirks of his idea and says "Ab maza ayega Jodhaa begum" knowing that Jodhaa does her prayers in the garden near the harem!!! As he is about to leave his chamber , he finds himself having her payal's in hand and recalls the way she holds his hands and the way he promises to be hers only and asks her to be his forever while a cold wind passes through his face , blows his hair and a tear rolls from his eyes which awakes him and he rudely wipes it off saying "Bas , ab aur nahi" , he thinks to find the dancer as he is able to recognize that it's her only by her payals sound , so he closes his hand holding tightly her payal and gets out of his chamber!!! He comes near the harem where is the immense garden with magnificient different smells , creatures , flowers and colors!!! But Jalal owns all of these , all of these are on his property , under his power and he is the badshah of Agra and Hindustan so he doesn't even care and gives attention to all of these and keeps looking at the feet of begums and women passing beside him and listening to their payal's sounds!!! Jodhaa finishes her prayers and when she turns toward moti , she notices it to her utter shock and surprise!!! By looking at each of them , he unknowingly begins to step forward the garden , Jodhaa widened her eyes and looks to her feet which are still wearing the payals of last night of Jashn , she panicks and fastly puts her arti thali beside tulsi
plant and bends down to remove her payals , moti notices it and says "Jodhaa kya hua , kya kar rahi ho tum" , fearing that Jalal would hear , she asks moti to shush , moti understanding that it isn't the moment propose her to remove her payals. Jodhaa who is hardly trying since the beginning and doesn't succcess in removing it nods in a yes and moti begins to remove it!!! As Jodhaa gets up , she sees Jalal approaching toward them and she lowly asks moti "Moti , Ishwar keliye jald se jald , ine utaro" As she looks up , she is flabbergasted to find Jalal materialized infront of her!!!

KYA JALAL KO SACH PATA CHALEGA YA PHIR SE JODHAA APNE APKO BACHA PAYEGI????
Precap : Jalal overhears Moti and Jodhaa's conversation

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P.S : Arshu sweetu ab teri bari 😆😆 UPDATE PLZ 🤣🤣 Warna teri inbox to gaya kam se kam 😈😈 Dishum dishum of "PM" kardungi 😎😎

Edited by sweetystubborn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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are yaar..bht khel li aankhmicholi..😕bus ab pta lag jaaye..akbar ko..😉😆
nice update..pm me mxt tym😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shreya931

are yaar..bht khel li aankhmicholi..😕bus ab pta lag jaaye..akbar ko..😉😆
nice update..pm me mxt tym😛


Thanks 😳😳 Han beshak khelega hide and seek warna suspense kahan se ayega 😆😆??

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