OS about jealousy track.

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Jalal had been insulting jodha everyday...kabhi fuction se bahar karva dena,kabhi khud se milne ki izzazat nahi dena,toh kabhi kuch aur...all this was piercing jodha's heart,but she couldnt understand why,untill one day she saw benazir going to jalal's room late at night..she couldnt control herself and went near his room,there were no guards stationed outside so she dared to peek inside...what she saw left her heart shattered...benazir was bending towards jalal and halal had his hand at the back of her neck,both were about to kiss..jodha couldnt take it anymore,she rushed back to her room and fell on the bed crying..."KANHA ,YEH HUMEIN KYA HO GAYA HAI,SHEHENSHAH NE HUMSE ITNI BADSALUKI KARI PHIR BHI HUMEIN UNKI BAATON KA ITNA BURA KYUN LAGTA HAI"...MOTI COMES THERE,she knew what all had happened,she tried to consol jodha...
moti-bas karo jodha,aur kitna ro gi tum,tum jab shehenshah ko sirf dost manti ho toh itna kyun bura lag raha hai tumhe..

jodha-pata nahi moti,aaj aaisa lag raha hai,ki kissi ne hamare andar se hamare hriday ko kheech ke nikal kar uske tukde kar diye hon...humein itna bura kyun lag raha hai moti...

moti-jodha,kahin tum shehenshah ke liye dosti se kuch zayada mehsoos toh nahi karti...kahin tumhe unse pyaar toh nahi ho gaya...

jodha is shocked...she wants to deny this but her heart is not able to,she knows she has fallen in love,she starts crying even harder...

jodha-tum shayad sahi keh rahi ho moti,magar humein yeh baat chupani hogi...shehenshah humse nafrat karte hain...cahe kuch bhi ho jaye,ab hum shehenshah ko apni shakal kabhi nahi dikahyenge...

in jalal's room...

while jalal had been about to kiss benazir,he was imagining jodha in her...

jalal-jodha begum,aapkitni khoobsurat hain...hum aapke deewane se hote ja rahe hain...

benazir gets shocked,no one who she had been with,had ever imagined anyone else when they were together..se couldnt handle this..
ben-shehenshah,hum aapki begum nahi hain,hum benazir hain...

jalal gets out of his dreams..and looks around...indeed it was benazir...jodha was no where...he starts getting irritated...

jalal-aap yahan kya kar rahi hain...

ben-aaphi he humein bulaya hai sheheenshah...hum apka mann behlane aaye hain...

jalal-aap yahan se ja sakti hain...hum akele rehna cahte hain...

ben-magar shehenshah,hum apki acche se khatir kar saktein hain...

jalal(shouts)-kaha na humne,humein akele rehna hai,jeyeye yahan se...

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a few days pass,jalal regularly goes to do his morning exercises wanting to see jodha,but jodha had sworn to not show jalal her face...she used to get up very early ,get ready and do her puja and get on with her day,everyday she used to go out,to the village,would try to understand the plight of the people...she used to take permission from her ammijaan,and HB knew that jodha and jalal were not on talking terms,even she had seen jalal insult jodha,and she wanted jodha to get back her lost smile.

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one day jodha was going to meet HB when she heard benazir and her caretaker talk about smthing that shook the earth from beneath her feet...

ben-bahut samay guzar chuka hai,humne shehenshah ka bharosa bhi jeet liya hai,ab humein apna kaam kar dena cahiye...shehenshah ko marr kar unka sar hum apne sartaz ko pesh karenge...woh humse khush ho jayenge...

jodha could not believe her ears...this girl wanted to kill the shehenshah,jodha wanted to go and warn the shehenshah but knew he would never listen to her,so she did the next best thing...she went to hamida bano and told her everything...maham anga was also there when jodha was telling hamida bano about benazir...she couldnt believe it that benazir was an assassin...she went to immediately inform jalal...

mm-jalal,hum jante hain aapko sun kar hairani ho rahi hogi,par humne apne kano se suna hai yeh sab(maham wanted to take the credit herself)...kuch jaldi karna hoga aapko jalal...

jalal-hum sab sambhal lenge badi ammi...

that night jalal was strolling in the gardens thinking abt what all had happened...he had given this dancer so much respect...even chosen to insult jodha for her,and this is what happens...just then his eyes fell on the terrace and he saw a sight he had not seen in a few weeks...jodha was standing there gazing at the moon,her face though pale and her eyes filled with unshed tears,were the most beautful sight he had seen in his life...he couldnt move,couldnt tak ehis eyes off her...

jalal(in his heart)-aapne aaisa kyun kiya jodha begum,humein toh laga tha ki hamare beech sab badal gaya hai par aapne hamri itni bezaati ki,humein itna kard pohchaya..toh aaj aapko dard pohchate waqt humein kyun itni takleef hoti hai...kyun aaise lagta hai ki koi hamari jaan nikal raha hai...humein kyun itna dukh hota hai jab hum aapko dukh pohchate hain...

just then jodha looks down where jalal is standing,both are seeing each other after a few weeks...jodha wants to fill her eyes with his essence but has already decided what her next step will be,and getting attached to jalal will only spoil her decision..jodha turns away from jalal and goes back to her room leaving jalal behind with tears of frustation ,anger and smthing he hasnt been able to understand.

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the same night jalal catches benazir red handed,trying to mix poison in his drink...he not only catches her but also manages to make her spill the whole plan of abul mali waiting for her sign to capture agra...he makes her give the sign to abul mali and when abul mali finally wages a war against jalal,he is captured by jalal...and killed...jalal is finally at peace,one of his biggest enemies is dead...he finally has one less thing to worry about...he rushes off to maham to celebrate the good news..he is about to enter her chamber when he hears her and resham talking...

mm-dekha resham ,humne kaha tha na,ki hum begum jodha ko jalal ki zindagi se nikal kar bahar kar denge...

resham-haan huzoor,apne toh kamal hi kar diya...woh khat jo begum jodha ne shehenshah ke liye like tha,apne usmein aaise cheezein jod kar boli ke kissi ko hak bhi nahi hua ki aapne shehenshah se jhooth bola,aur upar se shehenshah ke khud woh khat phad diya...hahahaha...

mm-yahi toh resham,aur tumhe pata hai,itna kuch hone ke baad bhi woh jodha ,jalal ki jaan bachana nikli thi,benazir ke baare main ussi ne bataya...bewakoof kahin ki...humne apne bete ka badla le liya resham...humne jalal aur jodha se apne bete ka badla le liya...

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jalal was shattered,his badi ammi had played such a foul game with him and jodha...she had seperated him from jodha..NO...jala thought...she dint do it u fool...you did this yourself...u insulted jodha in front of everyone...u hurt her pride of being a woman,of being a married lady...u insulted her when she came to clarify her stance,u blindly trusted maham anga...u asked her to get lost...u have hurt her beyond repair...jalal dint know where his feet were taking him...but he landed in front of jodha's room...he could not see any lights inside,so he asked the guards whether jodha had gone to bed early...the guards looked confused...dint the shehenshah know anything...

guards-nahi shehenshah begum jodha is not here...

jalal-what do u mean,she is not in her room?

guards-we saw her going to begum barium makani's room...

before they could complete their sentence he rushed to HB's room...jalal entered the room but could only see his mother there...

jalal-ammijaan jodha had come to ur room,where is she...

HB-aap kyun pooch rahe hain jalal,koi aur kasar baki hai kya...thodi aur bezatti karni hai kya u bechari ladki ki...

jalal-hum bahut sharminda hain ammijaan,humein laga unhone hamari bezaati ki magar humse bahut badi galti hui hai...hum unse mafi mangana cahte hain...kahan hain woh...

HB-ab bahut der ho chuki hai jalal,bahut der ho chuki hai

jalal-nahi aamijaan,hum unke samne gir jayenge,magar unse mafi zaroor mangeinge...kahan hai woh...

when hamida dint answer,jalal could not take it anymore...

jalal(a little loudly)-boliye ammijaan ,kahan hain jodha...

HB-WOH JA CHUKI HAI JALAL,AAPKO CHOD KAR...WOH AMER JA CHUKI HAI...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely OS😃 Wish this would actually happen!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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😳very well written dear🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah wah...
Hum aapse bohot khush hue aanchal begum😛😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautiful - if only the creatives could be this creative
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice OS yaar ... write the Second part also...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ahhh...finally found it...

wonderful os dear. plz update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Awesome Awesome!
Continue soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely aanchal...i hope it happens in the show also😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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AAchal!!!!!!!!! vow!!! superb! this is really awesome! I can't wait for Jalal's realization of his mistake... then he will apologies to Jodha👏👏👏👏 THIS OS DESERVE⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

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