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charu

@cjs369

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#771

hi,
I am not new to this forum...but came back after almost three months... as i have moved to another continent...
Read your FF at one go...its excellent👏
you have an extremely fine art of story telling...love the way the story is progressing...
and also like reading about jalal n jodha in a modern day scenario...
your detailed description about the expressions n emotions takes us into ur world of imagination ...you understand ur readers so well... and give us exactly what we want to read...

and I must mention this ...i love the way you have gathered few chapters together and marked the page number on the first page ...it not only makes it easier to find them but also getting to read4-5 chapters at a time retains the continuity and fills our hunger for Jodha n jalal romance...

Please add me to the list of readers u msg to... waiting eagerly for ur next update

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#772

Originally posted by: lashy

I know re... Jo Ja ke alaawaa 😡

I know...!!😡😆

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#773

That was WOWWW di, without any exaggeration!!! I so so loved it..🤗

Your words are so uplifting dear...🤗 and so encouraging

Abdul and Meera are true sweethearts...Jalal n Jo are lucky to have such truly amazing friends who can read them so well and who genuinely care for them!😳

Awww😳

Abdul's worry is not wrong...they are two very different people indeed- different lifestyles, she's from a conservative family and he's the late night partying types,flamboyant kind of person! Of course, he will see his doubts cleared eventually but loved seeing his genuine worry for Jalal..❤️❤️

Awww thanks for explaining it all in 2 lines...well said...

Same to Meera for being so sure to get Jo's parents to agree for the party...for this time Jo deffo wants to go!

Yeah!

And of course for being NORMAL..I blush even simply imagining Jalal staring at me☺️

ROFL...😆

The teasing sessions were awesome..Jalal blushed(hayye marr gayi mei)🤢😳

I so wanna see Jalal in the show blushing...have never seen him blushing once...Hakim villain banne se pehle ek baar apne bhaijaan ko blush karvaake jaa please 😆

Jo's dresing and cooking all special now..ahem ahem😳

Yup!

The football scene was again tooo good! Jo checking Jalal out ha, it's so good to see Jo being normal..and then chiding herself for being that 😆😆

Loool..was one of the toughest scenes to write for me... thank God it came out looking sorta ok..

Renu..well I guess it's gonna take her some time to accept things. It looked like she let out all the pent up frustration! It was realistic..poor Jo, I guess she'll just go about doing the project stuff and leave from now!

Awww... with renu..yes it was pent up frustrations..

Ending with Jalal as always...the way you described Jalal during the football match...hayyee! It should be illegal to look like that without a permit(faints) 😆

Imagine my haalat having to describe THAT!😆😆

And he really asked Jo is she would come to the match just for him Loveee him☺️

loool..but she's coming for the sake of the university na...

Ok since my comment seems to be unending..I'll continue later elsewhere or it's gonna end up as big as your update! 😆

loool I have no complaints!😆

Update very very soon...I'm not gonna wait long this time, I want the next part as soon as possible! 😛

Love you sooo much🤗🤗

Love you more🤗🤗

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kushboo

@-Khush-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Hey lashyyy!

I read your comment on the OS asking if I read this FF thanks to my likes, sorry I took a long time to drop in here since then due to college opening and all ! :)

Awww Dravid's name is enough to make me read this

Jodha begum , peeps like Dravid and Tendulkar are long gone to make this game graceful ! Ever heard of Mr. Kohli and all ? 🤣

Oh God ! Ignorance is bliss for these two here also lol ?!

Mahaul gambhir hai thanks to sun meera's audha ka paudha finally growing here now 😆 😡

Lashy , Bahut cracking jokes and checking figure ho Gaya ! Now let there be mental and physical tension ! Pull push pick touch dance and ... You know the list very well 😛

Edited by -Khush- - 11 years ago

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#775

Originally posted by: Bobby13
No Lashy. That was not my suggestion. That was my guess. I like to guess how the story goes, but it does not mean that I want it to go that way. Also I don't think I will get ever disappointed by your writing. You write so nicely. It's so light hearted and humorous. The way you treated the characters of leads also is very nice. Why are people like you are not in Jodha Akbar creatives group 😔.

Hey thanks so much Vani 🤗such beautiful words

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#776

Originally posted by: sw123
superb update

Thanks for your encouragement dear 😊

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Originally posted by: justlovetv
really nice update!😃

Thanks dear😳

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Shraddha

@lashy

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#778

Originally posted by: riyasp
Beautiful. 👏

I am a silent reader from GHSP time. Your writing made me comment dear.

Once again marvellous.

Wow those were some marvellous and very encouraging words for a writer ..

Hope I am able to keep you entertained for long.. 🤗

would love to know you better ...😊

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#779

Originally posted by: lashy

That was WOWWW di, without any exaggeration!!! I so so loved it..🤗
Your words are so uplifting dear...🤗 and so encouraging

Abdul and Meera are true sweethearts...Jalal n Jo are lucky to have such truly amazing friends who can read them so well and who genuinely care for them!😳
Awww😳

Abdul's worry is not wrong...they are two very different people indeed- different lifestyles, she's from a conservative family and he's the late night partying types,flamboyant kind of person! Of course, he will see his doubts cleared eventually but loved seeing his genuine worry for Jalal..❤️❤️
Awww thanks for explaining it all in 2 lines...well said...

Same to Meera for being so sure to get Jo's parents to agree for the party...for this time Jo deffo wants to go!
Yeah!
And of course for being NORMAL..I blush even simply imagining Jalal staring at me☺️
ROFL...😆
The teasing sessions were awesome..Jalal blushed(hayye marr gayi mei)🤢😳
I so wanna see Jalal in the show blushing...have never seen him blushing once...Hakim villain banne se pehle ek baar apne bhaijaan ko blush karvaake jaa please 😆
Yes please!

Jo's dresing and cooking all special now..ahem ahem😳
Yup!

The football scene was again tooo good! Jo checking Jalal out ha, it's so good to see Jo being normal..and then chiding herself for being that 😆😆
Loool..was one of the toughest scenes to write for me... thank God it came out looking sorta ok..
You call this OK?? I fainted there, you know!

Renu..well I guess it's gonna take her some time to accept things. It looked like she let out all the pent up frustration! It was realistic..poor Jo, I guess she'll just go about doing the project stuff and leave from now!
Awww... with renu..yes it was pent up frustrations..

Ending with Jalal as always...the way you described Jalal during the football match...hayyee! It should be illegal to look like that without a permit(faints) 😆
Imagine my haalat having to describe THAT!😆😆
I can!! 😆
And he really asked Jo is she would come to the match just for him Loveee him☺️
loool..but she's coming for the sake of the university na...
She can say that if she wants to..he did give her that option, tabhi muh nahi kholi na..that made it look like she didn't know how to say yes to the comin-for-him option and went back to the univ, did I make any sense?😆

Ok since my comment seems to be unending..I'll continue later elsewhere or it's gonna end up as big as your update! 😆
loool I have no complaints!😆

Update very very soon...I'm not gonna wait long this time, I want the next part as soon as possible! 😛
Love you sooo much🤗🤗
Love you more🤗🤗