~ FF AkDha in Jungle ~Thd 2 ~ Part 50 on Pg138 Updated 28/3/14

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swetha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#871

wow excellent superb splendid

👏👏👏👏👏

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apsara310882

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Posted: 11 years ago

#872

thanks for the update
the minute i saw ur update, i didnt even bother for my tomarrow's preparation for my class.
u have totally made me addict to your ff
i love this addiction so much
keep updating all ur ff soon
waiting

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mandy001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#873

amazing chapter nancy...u r truly an awesome in writing thr feelings.

plz update soon ds nd dead love also...i read all d parts of dead love ystrdy nd i fell in love with that story. i cant wait for dt story plz update soon.

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#874

Thanks for the awesome update Nams..!!!😳

Jalal's sadness and the state in which he was so touching..felt terrible for him!😭

So glad Jo is ok now!! Yay! And the last hug was

Update sooon!!! Love ya🤗

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taaniroyal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#875

Awsum superrrbb Update ...
Teri juki nazar teri har ada lovly

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meghajj

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Posted: 11 years ago

#876

Mindblowing piece👍🏼👏

❤️🤗

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fatma201

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Posted: 11 years ago

#877

Awesome, thanks for the update

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Tanzia Scott

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Posted: 11 years ago

#878

This is one beautiful story, i love this update can't wait for the next one (Hint, Hint).

I think i will just read it all over again.

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Hena

@sunshine_sun

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Posted: 11 years ago

#879

outstanding update dear 👏⭐️

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alinakhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#880

Heyy my Princess what a beautiful update 🤗 🤗 filled with full ov love n emotionz... ⭐️

I loved it. I loved it . I juz loved it.. ❤️❤️❤️

M speechless usual... 😳😳😳😛

I love how u beautifully portray jalal'z emotions with full ov love & care.. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I cud c how jalal has completely broken when he saw jo unconscious lying on d bed.. 🤢🤢🤢 n how he made his way to saleem baba'z ashram & how he broke down infront ov him & how he joined his hands saying "Unhe bacha lijiye baba.. bacha lijiye unhe.. kis baat ki saza mil rahi hai unhe.. kyon unhe itna dard pahuch raha hai (he was choking with each word he spoke) Hum unhe itne dard mei nahi dekh sakte... Kyon humesha unhe itne dard se guzarna padta hai.. ab to vo maa bane wali hain..kya phir bhi Allah ko unpar taras nahi aaya jo unhe is haalat mei pahucha diya..hum unse be-intehaan mohabbat karte hain.. aur agar unhe kuch ho gaya to hum khud ko na to kabhi muaf kar payenge aur naa hi khudse kabhi nazar mila payenge" I cud visualize dis scene how he begged infront ov him.. 😳awww it was sooo touching . 😭😭 n d way he caresses his head blessed him made him relieved.. 😊

I loved d section whr she saw him coming 2wrds her, how he came n hug her n she hugged him back too... n d way he whispers in her ears "Jodha ab bahut hua.. hum jaante hain tum thik ho..aur tum humari khunkhaar baaghin ho.. dekho hum tumse milne yahaan tak aa gaye hain..ab jaldi se humare saath chalo".. Ab hum tumhaare bina ek pal bhi
nahi guzaar sakte".. wow it was lovellyyy... 👏👏👏👏👏👏

I loved it how he entered d room all breathless n d way dey saw eachothr with melting eyes.. how his eyes r stucckd on her n d way he said "Takhliya"..😛😛 how dey two talks with der eyes xpressns.. haayye how he came n sat near her with care n how jo was looking @ him with love... 😳

And d way he caressed her forehead & kissed her.. as she was abt 2 say d way he puts her fingers on her lips ☺️... and lastly his fear came out loosing her n d way she responded n dey hugged eachothr with utmost passion.. loved it

Haayye so many wow & lovely moments.. I loved it..

Song was perfect foh d situation . 👍🏼 👍🏼 🥳

U've done a Marvellous job by writing dis so wonderfully.. 🤗 👏👏👏

U r d Best Author 😎 😎 😎 🤗 .. keep rawking Princess 👏👏👏

Muawh ..