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Recap:

Jalal- ummm... would you like to spend some time with me? Means will you come with me for shopping?

Jodha- shopping?

Jalal- Yes actually I can't decide what to buy... will you help me?

Jodha-Oh Ok! I will come to your home at 10 am...

Jalal- Ok!!

Jalal returns to home and retires to bed. Jodha who is really tired today falls asleep.

Part 16

Next morning Jodha reaches Jalal's home. They leave for shopping. Jalal stops his car in front of a mall and today's adventures shopping starts. Jodha is all busy in observing suits.

Jalal- Hey we are not gonna buy cloths here. Come we will shop in my friends shop.

He pulls her to his friend's designer dress shop. Jalal's friend is a popular fashion designer. His name is Jayson. He is girly.

Jalal enters his salon cum spa cum shopping gallery. Jayson welcomes them.

Jayson- Oh my my! Look who is here. My sexy Jalal.

Jalal smiles and Jayson gives him a flying kiss. Well is she your new girlfriend? Jayson looks at Jodha from top to bottom. She feels awkward.

Jalal- She is my friend and secretary. I want you to change her look.

Jodha - But sir we are here for your shopping before she could complete her sentence Jayson's assistants pulled her and make her stand infront of a mirror.

Jayson- Well you will look hot if I personally treat you.

Girls bring chair... First we will change her hair. Jodha looks at Jalal. He signals her Its ok!

Jayson and co. makes Jodha's hair wavy and tumblr. Her straight hair turns wavy.

Jayson - Well honey give me five minutes brake I'll choose beautiful dresses for you... Well what is party theme?

Jalal interrupts- The theme is Royal.

Jayson- Ok my love! I'll be right back in 5 minutes.

Jodha angrily looks at Jalal.

Jodha- What is this? Today my mother is surely gonna beat me for cutting such long hair.

Jalal- It's called turn over. After this we will do my shopping. He smiles like a kid.

Jodha starts giving him lecture on wastage of money and bla blaa... Jalal suddenly put his finger on her lips making her shut up. Its my money and you are my friend so I will decide what to do with my friend and money.

Jayson comes and instantly put his hand on Jodha's waist. She looks at him with puzzled face.

Jayson- Come on honey lets go and choose a hot dress for you. Come sexy he calls Jalal too.

Jayson- Which type of dress you will prefer honey?

Jalal is well aware that Jodha is uncomfortable in carrying short cloths. So he suggests A beautiful party Gown.

Jayson shows a beautiful red white dress and matching shoes and accessories.

Hey honey... go and try it! Jodha with much difficulty goes to changing room and tries that dress. Jayson takes Jalal's leave for attending other customers. Jalal waits for Jodha to come and show him how she looks in that dress. She manages to wear that gown and peeps out from room.

Jalal- How is fitting? Is that ok? Come and show me. He literally pulls her.

She is looking like a princess in this dress. She feels little uncomfortable because Jalal is looking at her without blinking eyes. Is it okey? She asks.

Jalal- Beautiful...

Jayson comes and says- Beautiful hot sexy and muwwahhh... You are looking beautiful...

Jalal your secretary is hotter than you! He checks fitting and other things... Perfect. Made for each other. Jalal smiles and agrees with him. Should I pack this?

Jalal- Ok!

She again goes to changing room and wears he anarkali. Both goes to counter. Jalal takes the bill and asks her to wait outside the shop.

Jodha- Why?

Jalal- Do what I said. No arguments.

Counter lady- Sir would you like to pay 20 thousand cash or credit card?

Jodha shocks when she hears 2o thousand... She looks at Jalal with widened eyes. She feels really awkward.

Jodha- Why you paid my bill? There was no need of this dress then why..?

Jalal just smiles and says now it's my turn. They enter in a shop which is especially for men.

Manager- Welcome sir... welcome Madam.

Jodha tells manger description of suit and he shows them suits.

In no time Jodha selects a suitable dress for Jalal.

Manager- Wow madam you know your husband very well. You chose a charming suit for him in no time.

Jodha feels shy when he says YOUR HUSBAND!

Jalal- My wife is very intelligent. She knows me inside out.

Manager- It's because power of love.

After paying bill...

Jalal- Ok Jodha we should eat something now. Let's go to restaurant.

Jodha- No we will go to eat moong daal ke pakode and pudina chutni.

Jalal- As you wish Ma'am.

They comes to a shop of Chat and pakodas. Jodha orders food.

Jodha- Have you invited Ruquiya too?

Jalal looks at her with stern face and says No.

Jodha- Why? She is your...

Jalal- Hey look I don't want any discussion this topic anymore. I haven't invited her and you are also not going to do so.

Jodha is disagreeing with Jalal's decision. She is unable to say anything further because as he is not in mood to talk on this subject anymore.

At evening Jalal drops Jodha at her home.

Jodha (sitting in the car)- Bye! See you tomorrow.

Jalal also says good bye. She gets out of the car when her dupatta gets engaged with button of his jacket. He slowly removes it and leaves.

** Night**

Jodha is still confused with Jalal's behavior. Why he brought such expensive clothes for me? Should I call and ask him?

Finally She calls him...

Jalal- Oh So you cant spend some time without me!

Jodha- Oh shut up! I called to ask you... Why you brought dress for me?

Jalal- Is it necessary to tell you?

Jodha- It's not time of kidding. Please tell me why?

Jalal- Ummm... Because I love you!

Jodha- What?

Jalal- Hahahhahah! I'm joking. It's my way to say Thanks! You thought I love you?

Jodha- No... I asked because... ummm... Well Good night. I am sleepy. See you tomorrow.

Jalal- Wait. First clear my doubt. You really thought that I love you?

Jodha- Have you tried your new suit? How's it?

Jalal- Don't change subject Miss sexy anarkali...

Jodha- Bye sir! In hurry she cuts the call and smiles to herself.

Jalal smiles too.

Jalal (to himself)- I really love her? He thoughts. Here Jodha is also messed up with thoughts of Jalal. They both are unaware of their feelings. Is that love? Or just friendship? Or just attraction? Or nothing?

Precap-(Same as previous) Party and Aadham's plan.

Sorry guys I know this chapter is too short and not much good and I delayed so much. I am busy with my prelims of 12th board examinations. I hope you buddies will understand my problem

Edited by PupCat - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hii dear 🤗
after a looonnnggg waaaiiittt 😉
firstly thnxx foh d PM 😃
though d update was short bt it was nice 👏
liked dresses der choice is good 👍🏼

looking fwd foh d AhdhA'z love confession

do update ua nxt part soon 😳😳

En Awl d v bst foh ua xamz 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼



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Posted: 11 years ago
finally got update...bhut wait krwaya yr vry bad.

now come to d updaye...in madhuri style...maar dala...

uff love my jalal like ds. nd love thr chit chat on fone. m in love vd ds ff yr sachi.

ds time plz update soon nd long chapter.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesum Update 👏And Thankx for PM 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww soo cute wish i had such a friend as jalal haha
keep up da good wrk dude 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update 👏👏 Good luck wid ur prelims of 12th board examinations

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