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rose11691

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Posted: 11 years ago

#211

just woww update...hats off!!👏👏

...Jalal's all new passion...😳😳😛😛

...darling every time I read ur update...I love ur story more n more...u r just awesome yaar...⭐️⭐️

...completely love it...❤️❤️❤️

...it was a short update...😲...next time plz make it looong...!!😛

...Luv u...🤗

...and yes..."Update Pljjj"😆😆

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roshaeldsouza91

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Posted: 11 years ago

#212

Bhavani👏 subhallah😎

Loved it totally😳

Entire night ko spice up karna please😆 and please jaldi karna please please pleae

MA Ko issi raat me aisse karne ka sujhaaa i hope kuch zyada na kharab karein inka time😒

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Soumya

@baubles

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Posted: 11 years ago

#213

Hey,I guess I'm way too late...apologies for that..😛

I just read all the 10 chapters at one go now!! Can't believe I missed your FF...it's beautifully written dear.. 👏

Loving the gradual progress in Jalal-Jodha relationship,the understanding and trust building up and most importantly the love! Can't wait for more..do update soon🤗

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mandy001

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Posted: 11 years ago

#214

ammmaaazing...

dnt have any word to say...continue soon plz.

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Gudiyalovesguru

@Gudiyalovesguru

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Posted: 11 years ago

#215

excellent update...
loved it...
i guess maham.is gonna create rift between jalal and jodha...
continue soon...

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philantus01

@philantus01

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Posted: 11 years ago

#216

amazing update bhavini...

u beautifully described d character of jalal in d first half...

well i happy dat he has fallen in love wid her...

felt bad for rukaiyah...

part by part ua writing skills r improving...no doubt u hav bcum a very gud writer

🤗

thnk for d pm

do continue soon

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SShreShthA

@SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#217

⭐️⭐️SUPERB!!! SUPERB!!! SUPERB!!!⭐️⭐️

Awesome Job dear👏

I ❤️❤️❤️❤️ d Garden part most...

Beautiful dialogues and terrific Jalal's confusion...

and yipppeee i guessed right...😃😃😃

it is sujamal😊...

⭐️u r tooo goood yaar⭐️

Thanx for pm and do continue soon😛😛😛

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Az3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#218

Omg my Darling you shouldn't expect any jutis for this amazing chapter!! This was wonderful... I'm sure you understand by now that I'm a huge Ruqaiyya fan and her interactions with Jalal was penned to perfection by you!!👏👏👏 I don't mind that they spent this night together in fact, I'm thrilled😃😃😃

I hate Maham😡😡😡 I hope Jalal and Jodha are able to weather this storm but I trust you love!! Thank you so much for the mention my love... It's an honour❤️You have given us a rocking story and each of your updates are a treat🤗❤️

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Nancy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#219

Wow!!! 👏👏👏👏

I am so so so proud of You Bhavini!! You simply rock yar⭐️⭐️⭐️ Chapter 9 and 10 !! Brilliance Personified⭐️👏⭐️👏 The way with which you are carrying this amazing storyline forward just makes me SPEECHLESS everytime!!😳😳👏 Oh God yar ! Jalal and Ruqs spending time😡 But then, no use of it since Jalal addressed her as JODHA !😳😳 Wow!! That touched my heart!👏👏 So, Jalal was making love to Jodha...Hayye😃😃 Now, This Maham 😡😡 God, I wanna kill her!!😆 So, Precap is awesome (I still am worried about what will happen) !

Your way of writing chaps is so awesome and attractive!!👏👏👏

Keep it up Bhavini my darling!!⭐️⭐️⭐️ And You mentioned my name, Aww!!! That's really a very big honour!😃😊

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shahbhavini

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Posted: 11 years ago

#220

Originally posted by: Az3003
Omg my Darling you shouldn't expect any jutis for this amazing chapter!! This was wonderful... I'm sure you understand by now that I'm a huge Ruqaiyya fan and her interactions with Jalal was penned to perfection by you!!👏👏👏 I don't mind that they spent this night together in fact, I'm thrilled😃😃😃

I hate Maham😡😡😡 I hope Jalal and Jodha are able to weather this storm but I trust you love!! Thank you so much for the mention my love... It's an honour❤️You have given us a rocking story and each of your updates are a treat🤗❤️

Thank you !!!!!!!!!!! So much!!!

My favourite part in this chapter was Ruku and Jalal...and their pain😭...

I am glad you like this chapter also...

I am so happy It's my 10TH chapter...seriously I never though I will go so far... Thanks for motivation!!!!🤗🤗🤗