AkDhaFF:Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani (Chap 5 UPDATED) - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow sounds interesting...👍🏼waiting for the update
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Note:

Other than Rajat,Pari and Lavina other character are all from Pyar ki ye ek kahani which used to air on Star One
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CH1 : Ishq shava
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Away from human's exploration there exist an landscape called The Land of Supernaturals ..This landmark is highly blessed by supernatural beings. Every kind of supernatural being resides here, occupying merely one forth of complete land . Rest is covered by forest. this Land is divide into four communities..the superior community is were wolfs followed by witches and wizards then comes vampires and lastly hybrids..All the communities have royals..except hybrids ..they only have leader but no royal ...still today also hybrids are still hated by both vampires and were wolf..vampires hate were wolf and vice verse ... in this situation an supernatural love story ...
Place:SN Disco
Time:midnight 12:25
Theme of the party : Mask
An BMW car stop near the gate of SN disco ..An hand hunk of 19 year got down from the car ..all the girls started drooling over him forgetting about every thing..an killer smile was playing on his lips...
(his was how he was looking):


he soon moved in..."rajat"some called him he called him.. he turned to see his best buddy Kabir"hey kabir ..wass up??"said rajat hugging his best buddy .."fine yaar tu kesa hey?"said kabir breaking the hug ." cool"soon they both joined there other friends
Out side the disco:
"oh god es ladki ka me kya karu ?? bikul time sense hi nahi hey"Misha was cursing her best friend who was late
"mishu dear am here "came an sweet voice,misha turned back and found her best friend and hugged her and said"finally your here" ."well tuje tho pata hey namom aur dady ko mana ke aneme kithana time lag tha hey???"her buddy reply her .."what ever ab chal andar chale they hey ..." said misha dragging her friend with her..(both of them were having masks on their face..)
PARI's mask:
MISHa's:


they both went in and joined there friends...after some time in the pub there started an argument that was"who is the best in dancing boys or girls???"
soon our hero and heroine too joined it...
"What happen, why are you all screaming?"said paridhi /rajat to there respective friends.
"Look na pari! This boys are saying we are not talented and only thing we know is to get people in trouble.!!!"said one of her friend..and rajat over heard it
"Well listen, that's because its true... you girls have no talent. And I bet you girls cant even dance.."said rajat to pari friend..pari got angry on this point he moved her friend and came face to face with rajat..(she wearing an mask guys so he didn't see her face nor did she as he was also wearing an mask )
"Excuse me, you just met us.. how do you know that if we can dance or not ? Well, see Mr.."pari stop in between as she didn't know his name."rajat"he helped her."ya what ever We can dance, do you get that! As matter affect! Can you dance? I bet you cant dance that's why your telling us that we can't dance. "so you Ms...(stops and thinks for a min) what ever your name is .. you, think we cant dance? Listen..We(points to the all boys including himself) are the dancing stars.And if you don't believe that we can dance than How about A Dance faceoff ??"
"bring in on"said paridhi
"yes bring it on boys.."Said misha
"ya ya bring it on.."said kabir
all the dancers gets on to the dance floor..dived into girls and boys teams with best dancers..
Face off b/w boys and girls:

Ishq shava, mushq shava
Khushamdeed e Marhaba
( Boys start ..kabir and rajat do the same steps as SRK..)

Ishq shava.. haay
mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. haay e Marhaba.
( girls start ..pari and misha do the same steps as Katrina..)

Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
( rajat goes near pari)
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed e Marhaba
( pulls her closer and twirls her )

Ishq shava.. mushq shava..
Ishq shava.. haay
mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. haay e Marhaba
(pari moves away from his grip and joins the girl and does cool steps)

Shauq hai shauq sulagne ka
Saans me saans uljha toh zara
( midhi(misha and paridhi) does some awsum moves )

Aaj ki raatein kiski hai
Kal ki raat teri na meri
(midhi does some hip hop moves)
Chaand utha chal toss kare
Chehra tera aur jaan meri
(misha goes near kabir and does the same step which srk and kat did)
ishq shava, mushq shava
Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed e Marhaba


( Boys does the same step as SRK)
Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed-e-marhaba

(kabir and misha has an Face to Face)

Ishq shava.. haay.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay
Dil dariya hai rukta nahi
Paani pe chal ke dekh zara



(karaj(kabir and rajat) does some awsum moves)
Baadalon pe paanv rakho kabhi
Unme zameen nahi hoti
(girls does some cool moves)
Dil ki hardil pe had hogi
Koi laqeer..
Nahi hoti hai
(Boys goes near the girls and does the same step as SRK and girls moves back the same way as Katrina did)
Ishq shava.. haay.. uh uh haay
Mushq shava.. uh uh

Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay
Khushamdeed.. e Marhaba

Mila mila mila mila aankh mila
Laga laga laga laga aag laga
Zara zara zara zara paas toh aa
Khushamdeed e Marhaba

Ishq shava.. haay
Mushq shava.. haay haay..

(all together dancing now..pari's hand is on rajat shoulder and rajat hand on pari waist according to the step and they both are share an eye lock.. rajat realized that the girl was an vampire who is with him and misha and kabir were also in the same state.they were in the same state , until they heard the guys and girls shouting & screaming. They feel awkward after LLHH but decides to leave that aside for the time being & they moved to the gang to find out whats was happened)
"will some enlighten me that what going on here???"pari /rajat to there respective friends
"arey raj see na this grils are not agreeing that we were far better than them.."said one of rajat friend
" hello please don't speak like you people conquer the world by dance! did you get it??"rply one of pari's friends
"Is this the best you "Dancing Stars" can do?"misha said in an mocking tone
"hey Listen babe's We just went easy on you girls with so called dancing skill so that you people can compete with us"said kabir
" what???What did you just say?"misha said in total angry tone."
Relax dear Its not a competition .. These boys just wanted to see if we can dance or not that it .."said paridi with tons of attitude
"Oh please... you think? What you did was dance?, moving your hands & legs is not call dance babes" said rajat .
"Excuse Me! did you mean that what we did was not dance??" pari frowned

"Are you deaf? tumey sunaya nahi detha? what i said i mean it full"said rajat
that was it all the girls got angry ..paridhi was about to back answer him when her phone rang and she excuse herself and went from there
"kya?..i coming i will there in 10 mins.."said pari and she went near misha and said her about everything and she moved out of there and rajat follow her engining others in the fight..
she came out and start rushing to her house but in that process her mask fell down but she did care about that.. rajat came out and saw her mask lying on the ground and pick it up..
"koni ho tum ms.vampy?"he said smile at her mask and he took it with him
8.5 Mins Laters:
Raichand Mansion :
she was tip toping in the hall ..she was gng towards her room...
"pari"a voice came.
she stop there and truned back to see this bro there.
"pheww bhai aapney tho muje darahi diya hey...meney socha ki papa hey"said pari
"wo mom aur papa bahar gaye varana aj tera band baj jathi "said Abhay
"wo tho possible hi nahi hey..becoz meri bhai hey na muje bachaney keliye.."said pari
"acha ..es issue me tho me tumey bachavunga ..but haar issue me tuje bacha nahi pavunga .samji?"said abhay crassing her hair
"bhai esa koi issue hi nahi ane dungi bhai"said pari iwth an cute smile on her face..
"tek hey ab chal jaladi jakar apana dress change kara le mom aur dad ki anesi pheley.."said abhay
"yes marshal"said paridhi giving him a salute
abhay smiled at his sister's act...both went into there respective rooms...

PRECAP:
Royal Party
parijat and misha ,kabir 's ball dance...
[note: rajat came to know that pari is vampire becoz of the coolness in her body ..and only vampires have cooled bodies ..if any more doubts feel free to ask..😃]

so am done with the 1st chap..hope ki you people liked it...😃so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ...pls give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
With lots of love ,
Renu..

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow nice,continue soon.so i hope pari also understood by rajat's hot body that he is a werewolf.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Wow Renu!!!!!!!!😃It was just too Awesome Update yaar!!👏 👏 ⭐️
I totally loved it from the beginning to end!!❤️Just Awesome!!!!!!!!👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️
I loved the Dance alot!!It was too Amazing to Read!!Especially PariJat's close scenes were a Treat!! ❤️ 😳But I felt ki Parijat ke Close Scenes Bahut kam thePls Give More close and intense scenes between them na in their Next Precap waala Dance in the Royal Party!![😉 😳
So Rajat identified that Pari is a Vampire!!
Loved How He picked up the mask and followed her and Gave her the title of "Ms.Vampy"!!❤️ 😳 😆
Abhay and Pari's bro-sis waali bonding is just Awesome!!👏Loved it the most❤️And That's My most fav part here!!😛 😉 😳 ❤️ 😃 ❤️
So My Abhay is a caring and protective brother.And Supports and protect Pari in everything.😃Let's See If He'll support her When She falls in love with a Were Wolf!!😉I So Hope that He will!!😛 😳

Pls Continue Soon if possible!!😃
I really am loving this Story Yaar!!❤️ 😳 ❤️
You are such an Amazing and Innovative Writer!!👏 👏 ⭐️
And Thanks Renu for adding the PKYEK waala note in the beginning!!😃 😳 🤗
And Again Thanks in advance for the PM Yaar.😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it...continue soon...plz pm me..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow Yar Renu!😊😊😊❤️! Literally, only because of you could I get back to PKYEK.❤️❤️.OMG👏👏👏👏 What an imagination first of all😳😳 Brilliant! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ You made my day with this amazing storyline👏👏 Loved the intense dance🤗..😳😳 ❤️Whole chap was amazing👏⭐️👏 Waiting to see PariJat reactions on when they meet each other❤️❤️👏 And now that in serial, Jallu took her payal..❤️You very well co-ordinated here..replacing payal with HER MASK!!😳 Amazing! ❤️❤️Gurl you doing great!👏👏 PLease continue soon Renu! Love you🤗❤️

Edited by PrincessNancy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

thank you ...😃

Originally posted by: aanchal_c

wow nice,continue soon.so i hope pari also understood by rajat's hot body that he is a werewolf.

thank you ..

well that not possible dear..😆😆 not only werewolf but wizards also have hot body temperature..only one way to recognizing them is to see them when they change there forms(human to were wolf)...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: --Janvie--

OMG Wow Renu!!!!!!!!😃It was just too Awesome Update yaar!!👏 👏 ⭐️
I totally loved it from the beginning to end!!❤️Just Awesome!!!!!!!!👏 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️
I loved the Dance alot!!It was too Amazing to Read!!Especially PariJat's close scenes were a Treat!! ❤️ 😳But I felt ki Parijat ke Close Scenes Bahut kam thePls Give More close and intense scenes between them na in their Next Precap waala Dance in the Royal Party!![😉 😳
So Rajat identified that Pari is a Vampire!!
Loved How He picked up the mask and followed her and Gave her the title of "Ms.Vampy"!!❤️ 😳 😆
Abhay and Pari's bro-sis waali bonding is just Awesome!!👏Loved it the most❤️And That's My most fav part here!!😛 😉 😳 ❤️ 😃 ❤️
So My Abhay is a caring and protective brother.And Supports and protect Pari in everything.😃Let's See If He'll support her When She falls in love with a Were Wolf!!😉I So Hope that He will!!😛 😳

Pls Continue Soon if possible!!😃
I really am loving this Story Yaar!!❤️ 😳 ❤️
You are such an Amazing and Innovative Writer!!👏 👏 ⭐️
And Thanks Renu for adding the PKYEK waala note in the beginning!!😃 😳 🤗

And Again Thanks in advance for the PM Yaar.😆

thank you mishu...🤗

they just meet na dear...next chap me pakka zada hongey...😃

yes he is so smart...😉😆

yup he is very suportive and care too...well you have wait it know about that...

i will continue dear..will update ASAP...

and thank you ...😃

arey kithani baar bolegi ??thank you ??😆😆chal your most welcome...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: barbie100

loved it...continue soon...plz pm me..

thank you will continue soon...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I edited my comment! Awesome Chap 👏👏

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