AkDhaFF:Pyaar Kii Ye Ek Kahaani (Chap 5 UPDATED) - Page 13

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SoniLuvsRT

Unres😛😛😛 1st of all i'm really very very sorry for late review😭😭😃 OMG update was fantastic & very very lovely😳❤️😳 renu darling u added caps too👏👏...i can imagine rajat & pari's looks...wow Rajat in black suit😳☺️ & pari in black gown..& The song was perfect...😳😳 can't wait for next update😛..5 new entries...very egar to know who r they.. Suberb job darling👏👏👏 & Thank U so much for PM🤗🤗

it okay dear ..u commented that what matters...😃

Thank you ...

thats song is one of my fav's

well 5 entries nahi bohat sarey honey waley hey per next wali mey nahi i think uski next wali mey ...😆

your welcome...🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
Note:
This FF is no were connected to our show nor to the history ..it is totally my imagination...and Apart from few character all the other are taken from Pyar ki ye ek kahani which used to air on Star One


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CH4: I HATE YOU
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He pull her to him and she came crossing down his chest ...now they literally hugging each other..his hands were around her waist and her one hand was around his shoulder the other was lying with her head on his chest...the music stopped but still our romantic couple didn't make any move..they were still in the same position ..he can now hear his heart beats sorry sorry those weird drum striking sounds from his heart ..not only him but pari too can hear it as she was lying her head on his chest ..and both the super natural were wondering what that sound was as they both were new to it..poor souls they doesn't know that this sound is only called as heat beat .. then they both heard an big drum beating sound then the small one in his heart ..which about them back to sense and both of them parted from each other.there was a pin drop silence for few seconds...but soon our wofly rajat broken it ..
"not bad blood sucker ...you dead bodies do dance good.."said rajat wink at her
"oh ya fluffy Alsatian. ..if animals like you can dance then why can't we?"pari reply with general attitude which she has
They saw each other with zenith of their attitude.
"and one more thing ..after this day ..i will never ever dance with you again..." informed rajat
"oh come on as if am dyeing to dance with you .."she said
"oh no sweety .. how will you die again becoz your are already dead" he taunted.
"oh really ..thank you for the information"she pretended as if she really didn't know about it
"your are most welcome blood sucker"said rajat
"what ever "she rolled her eyes.
"am i so handsome that you don't even want to leave from here??"taunted rajat
"handsome ??my foot you what ??"said pari in full on angry
"what"he asked sweetly
"i hate you fluffy Alsatian..!!!!"saying so she gave an jolt to her head in attitude, swirled around with her hairs against his face and left...
"same to you bloodsucker.!!!!" shouted back rajat ..
then he too swirled back and left from there..
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Here with our Mishka:
one of their hand were entwine with eachother s..her other hand was on his shoulder and his hand was on her waist..kabir was just lost in misha's eye..but misha was think in her mind.
"the music stop right ??then why this guys is still holding me..??"and she frowned
kabir saw her change of expression and read her mind and came to know that she is feeling uncomfortable and left her and without talking anything he left from there..misha felt some weird about this but she brushed away her though and moved to pari
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rajat was trying his hard not to think about pari but he was failing ever time...only one moto was running in his mind"DON"T THINK ABOUT HER"..but alas that moto was never effected by his heart aur mind who were totally lattu over pari...he gulped up his shot thinking about pari ..just then kabir came there and he read rajat 's mind ..and started laughing..
"not again.. don't tell me that you read my mind again ???" rajat wared his best friend
"yes i did.."said kabir still laughing
"kabirr"rajat glared at him
"what to do yaar.. am helpless my hero ..i never wanted to read your mind but unknowing i did it you see"kabir tried to clarify
"oye nautinki jut mat bol..i know very well about you you it purposefully"said rajat
"think as you want ..but frist tell me who that beautiful girl you were thinking about???"said kabir
" girl nahi vampire thi wo"said rajat making his face as if he was disappointment
"arey vampir he tho sab se beautifully hothey .."said kabir

rajat couldn't deny the fact that his blood sucker was surely the most beautiful vampire or to say the most beautiful supernatural. But he has to said out '' chodo na, kuch pite hai''
and both at the same time ordered-'' A CLEAN ROCK PLEASE!''
Rajat tried his hard to indulge himself in other activities, trying to forget her hard. kabir could read that his brain really appreciated the dance n her looks the most. after reading his mind he smiled at him.

''has kyun rahe ho!'' asked rajat with a stare

''nahi kuch nahi!''-excused kabir. They soon joined their other friends.
here pari and misha too were enjoying the party ...but our pari carried out herself with an uniqueness. She was particular about her acts and poses. She walked with more grace, avoided to give extreme emotions on her face. Her talks were usually logical and really proved to be a good orators for all her friends and relatives in the party. And off course she needs to look different, BECAUSE...

She was under a keen observation of someone special. She was well aware of it. Someone was staring her persistently throughout the event with his piercing eyes, exploring her, her body, her body movement, her expressions. who else was it ??our rajat was one who was constantly gazing pari , and pari knew it. She was not uncomfortable about it but instead she tried to impress him more...
and here rajat was enjoying it ..he just could not help staring her. He just didn't pay attention to his friends and his surrounding. All he did after that was simply admiring her, her looks, her grace and her body language. She surely deserved his gaze after the lovely dance she did with him.soon there was an small eye lock section between them ..which didn't went unnoticed by our kabir..which was broken by the clearing-throat-noise ..ofcurse by their buddies ..mishka
"ahem ahem!" came the clearing-throat-noise again
parijat turn toward their friend and started talking to them..
Slowly .. slowly the party turned off. Gathering slowly turned up null, everyone was leaving. BUT rajat made sure to bid a good bye to pari through his eyes . She smiled, which was going to be rajat's good bye and good night . They both slowly proceeded towards respective family.
"so how was my son's first couple dance???"asked Madhu moving her hands in rajat 's hair
"couple dance..nahi maa meney nahi kiya hey "he lied to his mom
"kya??what do you mean by that raj?"madhu said little bit worried
"wo magical vase se jo chit milethi us number per koi ladki nahi thi maa"informed rajat
"per ye kesi ho sakth ahey??" madhu said in an dubtful tone
"ab mere number mey koi girl nahi hey tho me kya karu?? and more over to that you know na maa am not interest in such thing "said rajat giving an help less expression
"ah wo tho hey ..chalo hum chalthey hey "said madhu
but yes she had a strange tension on her face.

both the Raichand and khurana families left to their respective palace.
PRECAP:
'''aisa kabhi kuch nahi hoga, aap chintha maat kijeye . Hum rajat se yeh kasam bhi lelenge ki voh hamesha aapne saath chandan(sandalwood) rakhe Aur hum dono uski SHS mey padhai khatam hote hi , uska soul badal denge,ek aur SN ki sharimey (body) jiski soul mate ek vampire ya hybrid na ho"
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PariJat in same bus.. aagal bagal wali seats mey..and their nok jhok.
Introduction of SHS
and many more new entries😃
so am done with the 4th chap...i didn't do any proof reading so just ignore typo...i know it was just an piece of shit... but ah next update is going to an jumbo one...so stay tuned.pls give ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...any types of doubt are welcomed.criticism and suggestions are most welcomed
With lots of love ,
Renu.

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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
loved their nok jhok...
thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago

thank you ...😃

Originally posted by: unishaz

superb.. thanks for pm..

thank you ..

and Ur WC...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goldenmoon

nice update
loved their nok jhok...
thanx for the pm...

thank you ..

happi that you liked it...😃

Ur Welcome...

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Asapom

nice chapter

parijat eyelock
continue soon

thank you ..

will continue for sure...😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just awesome
especially those dance moves
agla waala ch lamba dena
and please pm me after updating


Loved it 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JAfan

Just awesome

especially those dance moves
agla waala ch lamba dena
and please pm me after updating


Loved it 🤗

thank you dear...

yup next wali lambbb hogi...😆😆

i will dear ..🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Sofia13


*UnRes*

Finally got time to edit my post😆

Coming to update..it was an AwesOme chap.👏👏
super duper liked it😳
LOving ur ff ...just superb👍🏼

Wonderful Update...keep it up⭐️

Thank you Dear..!!!!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Renu ! Please pm when u update! I really like the story of vamp and wearwolf!
Thanks

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