AkhDa FF- Pyaar Kiya Toh Nibhana *NEW Author's Note* Page 65 - Page 12

Originally posted by: 1234philli23

beautifully penned down d emotions,,,😊😊

ok to b honest i neva cried (exaggerating)...ok i dint cry but my throat was choked up...😭😭

specially on d part where maan singh was trying to console jalal...whn he spoke abt his bhuasa(being d pride of amer)😭😭

the proverbs used wer marvelous...👏👏

i donno hw u put up al dese words together n make a beautiful story *amazing*👍🏼

ur story connects wid d audience...hats off to ur writing skills⭐️

last but nt d least 😡suspense😡...u stopped writing whn d story was at its peak...😡

really wanted to know y hamida made jodha to leave ...y shez separating a baby frm d mother?😕😕

ur suspense kills me...🤢

thnx for dis lovely update...muahhh!!!!!!!!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗

Oh Priyanka my love thank you so much for the lovely review!!!🤗 I had my doubts seriously but thanks to all of you I feel better!!🤗... I'll update Tu Jahan after exams then this... All will be revealed soon😈I'm just sorry about my stupid exams because it'll make you wait

thanks..love di.t..brilliant...can't wiat for the nextx part

Originally posted by: udaymanyata07

thanks..love di.t..brilliant...can't wiat for the nextx part

Thank you yaar!!🤗

👏awesome story but do update ham par reham karo

Originally posted by: shivalkar

👏awesome story but do update ham par reham karo

I'll try😆😆😆 But I got the bane of my life over my head... EXAMS😡😡😡... Even if I do update the updates will just be rushed like this one... When I have lots of time I can make nice long update😛😛😛 And I know I've become very evil lately😈. Yeh cliff-hangers chodh ne kaya naya shauk hume paal ke rakha hain😆😆😆 Hopefully Shaguni Bai can help me.. She's on her scooter coming to South Africa as we speak... And Tahni sent a rocket for her as well🤣

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

sorryyy for troubling u...😊😊

luv u yaar sooo much...🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Thanx in Advance...😃

Arre Shreshtha my sweetheart no trouble... I'll do anything for you guys!!🤗... I'm just annoyed because I had such big plans for the chapter and it never turns out as planned But it's done so yaay😛😛😛

Azra dear...
I don't know how to put 2 emotions together ...The horror of what I read abt Jalaal doing to Jodha and the Mastery u showed even in ur time-crunch...!!!! Horribly Brilliant it was!!Yes, that's the word to describe...!!!!😃

Azra, it was so heart wrenching to c how jalal betrayed her right after he slept with her and how heartbroken jodha was. Gosh I am so angry at jalal. he deserves all these pain he si going through. I think he should be tortured more but I so desperately want to know what ahppen after jalal slapped her and jodha went back to her room etc and the pregnany and labor etc.

Originally posted by: Az3003

Wow thank you so much!!🤗This honestly means the world to me❤️.. This chapter made me cringe with embarrassment but I'm glad at least you liked it🤗

aww..u deserved it girl😳
it was srsly amazing..I really like the way of ur writing😃
You're Brilliant🤗

😭Vow what a story! Feels like crying update soon!