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Neha Mishra

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Posted: 11 years ago

#91

Loved it dear ... do continue soon and please write a bit longer if you can :)

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SShreShthA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12
dearr kal takk pakkaa...now m moms asking mee to sleeppp...meraa dimaag abhi itnaa chal raahaa too pakka ok sorryy...sweetss tommm okkk...😊

OOKKK...BT DONT FORGET...

GUD NIGHT SWT DRMS...

MAI BHI JAATI HO... SUBH SE NET PAR BETHI HO...DAAT KHANE HI WALI HO...😆😆😆

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Yoga priya

@yoga23priya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#93

I have to add ur FF in gallery, plz write the proper heading for your FF.

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noopur

@noopur

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Posted: 11 years ago

#94

very nice update 👍🏼
loved it
do continue
thanks for the pm❤️

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#95

ok guys here you go next romantic chapter...

hakim sahibaa enters...

she checks jodha...jodha was lying still ..not moving..jalaal was worried...

hakim sahiba to jalaal:jodha begum ki haalat bahut naazuk hain...unka kyayaal rakhna hogaa...aaj ki raat un ke liye bahut zaroori hainn...

jalaal:(tensed) hum unka swayam khayaal rakhenge,,,,aaj raat hum jodha begum ke saath hi rukengee...

in jodhas room...

jalaal dissmisses everyone...now jodha and jalaal are alone in the room...

jalaal is staring at jodha..he was not able to sleep...as soon as he closed his eyes he could see her...not able to sleep...

he suddenly notices a strap of hair on her face...he softly removes the hair off her face..unable to take his eyes of her face...he feels a strong urge to touch her...but stops himself..he gets up to go away from her...but in deep sleep she helds his hand...his body feels numb...its like hes got a shockk..he slowly takes his hand off her (unwillingly)..he goes to the ground and tries to sleep...in the middle of the night...he is awaken by her sweet voice...shahenshaah shanshaah aap thik hain naa...he has a slight smile on his face...(as if extreamly releived to hear her voice)..he runs near her...she finally verry slowly opens her eyes...she sees a blurred image of whom she had been longing to see for soo ,long..

her eyes finally meets his eyes...they both are lost in each other as if both have got a new lifee...their eyelock waas intense and they could speak to each other with their eyes...finally jodha breaks the eyelock..

jodha:shahenshah hum kehna chahte hain ki..(she tries to get up)

jalaal (interrupts her):aap lete rahiyye jodhaa begum.. and helds her on her shoulders softly..she feels a bit awkward...he removes his hand seeing her awkwardness...he gets water for her..and gives her..she drinks it.. feeling a peace around him..

jodha:shahenshah wo hum..

jalaal shuts her mouth by puutting his finger in her lips...

that touch makes her extreamy awkward..as soon as reality strikes him.. he quickly removes it...

jalaal:aap aaj humaari baat ka jawwaab dengi jodha begum...

she bends down her eyes..jalaal:aap ne humaari jaan kyun bachaayi jabki aapki jaan ko khatra thaa...he comes near heer..his chest almost touching hers...kahin aapko hum se chaahat to nahi hoo gayii...

jodha gets angry..seeing her anger he moves back..jodha:shahenshah humein aapse koi chahaat nahi huyii...pehli baat ek patni hone ke naatir hum aapne sindoor ki raksha kar rahe the..aur dusri baat..aap shahenshaah hain ...is sultanate ki zimaddari hain aap pein..aap ek bete hain ek bhai hain...aur hum in sab ki raksha kar rahe the...humne sirf apnaa kartavy nibhayaa..she starts coughing..he makes her drink somee more water... and realizing her conditing asks her to sleep..they both sleep peacefully feeling extream comfortable in each others presence..

jalaal:shabhakhair jodha begum..aap chintaa naa kare hum hain na

jodha:wohi toh chintaa hain (slowly)

jallaal:kuch kaaha aapne..

jodha:kuch nanin shub ratri(she says slightly smiling)...

FOR MORE NEED 20 LIKES😆

GUYS LOVEE YOU ALL PLZZ READ AND LIKE..NEXT UPDATE AFTER FRIDAY AS I HAVE AN EXAM ON FRIDAY...MUAHH🤗

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sara5471

@sara5471

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Posted: 11 years ago

#96

Came home from awesome history paper to awesome FF update

Hay main mar gayee *faints*

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#97

Originally posted by: sara5471
Came home from awesome history paper to awesome FF update
Hay main mar gayee *faints*

awww thnkss sweety pie...your comments are my strength...

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Vincy Anne

@VincyAnne

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#98

Love it !!! ❤️

Thanks for the PM .

Keep up the good work !!! 👍🏼

All the best in your exam .. 😉

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ashvikanlonely

@ashvikanlonely

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Posted: 11 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: VincyAnne
Love it !!! ❤️
Thanks for the PM .
Keep up the good work !!! 👍🏼
All the best in your exam .. 😉

thnkss dearr.soo sweett... my pleas33..

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sara5471

@sara5471

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Posted: 11 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: khushbuahmed12
awww thnkss sweety pie...your comments are my strength...

Aww thanks 😃

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