SS ~: Dead Love :~ Part 13 Updated (Page 140)Thread 1 Closed - Page 74

Originally posted by: Pallavvi

omg...

beautiful chapters yaar...

amazing story...

contnue soon👏

Originally posted by: alee001

nyccc update dear!!

Originally posted by: Az3003

I have returned!!!🤗 It's Good Morning from SA and I'm sorry for reviewing so late Nancy my love😭😭😭😭 I promised you a long review and I hope I deliver, because I have truly and honestly run out of words to tell you that you are the most amazing writer and human being I have ever had the good fortune to come across❤️🤗

This update was beyond beautiful!!!👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️ Jalal's apology was the highlight for me!! Your dialogues are so fantastic I could actually see the entire scene in my minds eye and I teared up. He is in so much pain and he has so much to make up for😭😭😭 He needed his mother and Hamida was there for him. I'm glad she didn't forgive him immediately, he still has to prove himself😉😉😉 But Nancy the dialogues in that scene... Subhanallah!!!!👏👏👏👏 I wanted to cry with happiness as Jalal stopped running from his heinous crimes and finally faced up to what he had done. He fell to his mother's feet and cried for forgiveness, he may be the Shehensha but this one deed of his would ensure that people would love him and bow to him for centuries to come👏👏👏 It was excellent and I can't praise your writing style and dialogues enough😳😳😳

My favourite part though, and this may be a small thing but it has stayed with me throughout this story... The way Jalal's subjects love and respect Jodha. Unlike Ruqaiyya, all right in this story she hasn't done anything wrong (yet??)😈 and she takes all the important administrative decisions of the Harem as Begum-E-Khaas, but I love the fact that Jalal's subjects see Jodha as their true queen... My fave part:

No matter, Jalal's "Khaas" Begum was Ruqaiya..But all of the palace residents and ministers had taken Jodha to be their queen.
Their hearts bowed to Jodha.

I am so excited to see how Jalal makes this up to Jodha and I'm looking forward to how you write the AkhDa scenes!! I know you are going to nail it!!!👏👏👏👏👏

The Precap is a stroke of genius!! No-one can build suspense like you my Jaan🤗⭐️⭐️⭐️

I hope Jodha will be all right.😳😳😳 All-in-all... Your update was amazing❤️And I'm gonna miss your updates when you go on hiatus😭😭😭😭 I just want to thank you again for giving me the honour of being able to call you my friend, sister and Inspiration!!!🤗 Take a bow my love your chapters are getting better all the time!! And I didn't think it was possible because every update of yours is pure perfection😛😛😛😛🤗❤️

Originally posted by: PrincessNany

Oh My Jaan... I missed you sooo much on Forum..😭😭😭 but I am so glad I was in touch with you all time.. I am so honoured to get a review from THE BEST WRITER of forum..

Literaly..I have run out of words to thank you..WHat I can just say is that..I love you!!

I am so moved with your review..Literally..I wanna hug you and smooch you😛😛

And I love you!!!😊😊😊

Thanks again for being there for me...You are THE BEST!!!

Originally posted by: Az3003

Aww Nancy my love!! This is YOUR thread!! This is where I praise YOU not the other way around😆😆😆 But Thank you... Now you are chadaofying me (is that right??😕😕😕) lol... YOU are my inspiration so naturally, if YOU inspire ME and you think I'm the best than the natural inference is... YOU ARE THE VERY BEST!!!🤗❤️... Lol let's continue this by the AkhDa in the jungle thread, I'm gonna go read your update and review now😆😆😆