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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: PrincessNany

🤗That's exactly what I feel for you!!!🤗
Wow here we go again🤣... Man I love you and our discussions so much!! I can't wait for your reaction to my next chapter!! I hope you love it because it's all for you!!!!!!!!!!!!😳😳😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Lol...Our praises for each other will reach out of Universe and none of us will stop..That I am sure of..So let me now say I love you and stop it..lol.. Cuz If continue this, This post will become
"Azra-Nancy ki Unkahi Daastan love story"...lol.. ANd wow..The more u mention the chapter,and its cliffhanger.. I am getting impatient by each second!!😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
hey when r u planning to update this ff...plz do soon.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
Guys , Thank you for such an overwhelming response! I don't have words to express my gratitude! Heres is the Second Chapter!😊😊
Recap :
On one side Hameeda was happy that jodha atleast got distracted from her painful feelings, but on other hand,
She was so sad to core..Jodha followed everything one would say her. She would never say No or would never hesitate for anything.
From that day on, She had lost her power of fierceness and denial, She would no longer deny to anything, She would just follow every order
and will not think of her pride.
Hameeda goes in Flaskback of what all had happened, as Jodha continued to do her extra routine prayers.
Chapter 2 :
Hameeda's FB :
Hameeda and all Hakims were called urgently by Jalal on the next morning after their marriage.
When they entered the room, what they saw was devastating! Their didnt blink !
Jalal eyes were very tearful and lost.
Jodha laid on bed..Her condition was worst.

She was totally unconscious. Her lips were red swollen..Her bangles broken and wrists bleeding..
Nail scratches all over her hands, neck and legs. Her hair were tangled badly.
Her eyes and cheeks had marks of innumerable tears, which must have flowed otherwise.
It looked like a beast had just made her his feast.
Jalal (in a serious and low tone) - Hakim Sahiba..
Only after hearing Jalal's words, did they come out of their trance.
Obviously they understood what all must have happened. Hameeda looked At Jalal with utter disgust.
Hameeda rushed towards Jodha..

She screamed - Jodha beta.. Aakhein kholiye.. Jodha.Jodha!!
Hakims rushed towards Jodha and started their examination.
They were so shocked with her condition.

She was brutally bruised. Her breathing was low, pulse fluctuated every now and then and Blood was oozing out of her wrists.

They immediately started their treatment.
Hakim Ladies asked Shahenshah to go out of the room as they needed to tend to her.
Jalal walked out without any word.
Hameeda could not bear with Jodha's condition, she immediately walked out of room, but before that She asked all the doctors to take care of her.. Nothing should happen Jodha..She said sternly out of care.
Hameeda had loved Jodha, since her arrival in Agra.
Jodha's innocence and pure sincerity always made Hameeda bow down to her.
Hameeda came out and Slapped Jalal hard.

SHe shouted - Ye sab kya hai Jalal?? KYA HAI ye sab???
Jalal fumed a bit. No one had slapped him ever, but she was his mother.And the reason was most valid.
He didnt say anything.
On being asked again by Hameeda,
Jalal(soft tone) - Ammi Jaan! Humse bahut bada gunah ho gaya hai!!,...He couldnt speak further.

Hameeda was shocked to listen to Jalal. Another slap came on his face. Hameeda clutched him with both of her hands,
and asked him - Why did you do this?? Why?? Why ..tell me..What had she done to you? Yesterday only , both of you got married,
and today you have done this..!!
Jalal was himself in trance. He never had a soft corner for Jodha, but he had basic etiquettes towards women.

Also, He was not left untouched by Jodha's serenity and natural softness.
He hated her for what she had done to him in Amer, but the crime he did last night ate him up inside.

He could not believe he did that.
Hakim Sahiba came running to Hameeda and said - Mallika..Jodha begum ki haalat bahut naazuk hai.. Unki tabiyat thik nahi hai..
Humein unke ilaaj ke liye kuch durlabh jadi-buti mangani padegi..She said all this in one go.
Hameeda was shocked, So was Jalal.
Hameeda- Kya?? Haalat behad naazuk hai.?? Her fears were coming true.
Jalal immediately said (he was shocked)- Hum abhi apne aadmiyon to dawa lane ke liye bhejte hain.. And he moved to go.
Hameeda clutched his hand and said loudly - Rukiye Jalal! Jodha ke liye tumhe sochne ki zarurat nahi hai..Hum hain abhi zinda! Vaise bhi, aap jitna kar sakte the, aapne kar diya hai. Aapse ye umeed nahi thi humein.
Hameeda ordered one of the guards to bring the prescribed medicine immediately from the Bazaar.
Hameeda went inside the room..Jalal was so much in trance. He could not just believe the reality.
He followed Hameeda inside the room.
Hakims had wrapped up Jodha's wounds.
Hameeda cried profusely and sat beside Jodha.
Hameeda asked Hakims - Humein inki haalat ke baare mein vistaar se bataiye Hakim Sahiba.. Hum Jodha ko kuch nahi hone denge.
Hakim's voice trembled - Mallika..Vo..Jodha Begum..Vo.
Hameeda - Bataiye!!!
Hakim - Mallika! Her condition is really very critical. Its better than before but still critical.
Actally, after our examination, we found that ...that..(her voice glitched)..She has been Molested very brutally..
She has lost lot of blood..But we have applied some medicines and have also called for special medicines.
If Allah wishes, She would be fine in 1 week.
Hameeda's condition was beyond deadly trance. She looked at Jalal with uttermost digust and anger.
Jodha asked - Ammi Jaan kya hum thori der ke liye so sakte hain?
And Hameeda came out of her Flashback.
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How was it? Should I really continue? 😳 Hit LIKE pleaseee!!
Edited by PrincessNany - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yiiipppiiieee... finally u updated... thanx darling... luv u...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

yiiipppiiieee... finally u updated... thanx darling... luv u...

Aww..thank u di... itni jaldi padh bhi liya???😕😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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auwsome update dear...👏👏👏
feeling disgust for this jalal... that d reason which had change jodha fully and HB has turned her face away from jalal...

different concept it will be interesting to see hw u unfolds it further...👍🏼
keep it up dear👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

thanx for pm and do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

auwsome update dear...👏👏👏

feeling disgust for this jalal... that d reason which had change jodha fully and HB has turned her face away from jalal...

different concept it will be interesting to see hw u unfolds it further...👍🏼
keep it up dear👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

thanx for pm and do continue soon...

Thank u di.. U always make me smile.. Surely will reach upto ur expectations and will make this story amazing!! 😊😊😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
awesome update👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50
Its quite interesting,very different,plz do continue,

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