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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA



hey if u were waiting...then when r u giving me next part...i m damm in luv with ur ff...

as soon as i can...actually dear i am going to start a new ff on akdha parallel with dis...so was working on its theme
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: littoos

as soon as i can...actually dear i am going to start a new ff on akdha parallel with dis...so was working on its theme



OKK bt plz dont make me wait much for this one update becoz i m alredy in luv with it...
though i know u r wonderful writer so the new one will also be fab...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SShreShthA



OKK bt plz dont make me wait much for this one update becoz i m alredy in luv with it...
though i know u r wonderful writer so the new one will also be fab...

thnks dii 4 such a beautiful complimnt
Edited by littoos - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
will do dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey nw its too long dear...update na
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey u neither start a new ff and nor updating this...
plz update it soon na
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Posted: 11 years ago
I know I owe you a review... I'll read and post my review soon😛😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER-6

Death is the ultimate end we all walk upto...one or the other day one shuld embrace our death...bt to know dat our love's life is at stake just bcoz they needed us to be safe cld be the worst feeling created in this planet earth...and jalal was now in such a circle...his jodha was dying before his eyes and he cldn't do anything...allah can't do this to him...he needed his jodha back hindustan needed its malikka back...noone at this time of stake shuld take jodha away 4m him...he won't let dat happen at any cost...he was determined to fight 4 jodha if it was wat written...


at last they reached agra...4 jalal he was there were his jodha's life cld be saved...sweat and tears were still restlessly flowing through his face fogging his eyes...on haring jalal's arrival news everyone gathered aroung to recieve him bt to most of them's terror and astonishment they saw a grieving jalal and almost lifeless jodha in his arms...ammijaan moti and all ran to jodha...they were profusely crying and screaming to jodha to wake up...bt jodha didn't answered their cries...her eyelids were still closed on them hiding the fire of those beautiful eyes...rukaiya was awestruck as well as worried over jodha and jalala's such pathetic condition...jalal took jodha to her chambr and laid her carefully...royal doctors were called upon to check on her condition...their expertise checked her pulse her breathing and her eyes bt nothing was so abled enough to promise shehanshah his begum's life back...all the while jalal was just luking at jodha's eyes longing 4 it to open...


ammijaan cldn't take all dis...she started mumbling letting her tears out..."allah wat have u done they came to pray 4 my one child's safety and u can't take my other one's life away...u shuld let my jodha live..." moti was also devastated by her friend's condition...jodha ws always with her 4m the time she remember like a true frnd and wen jodha was in need she was nowhere near her...she cldn't do anything to save jodh's life...wen her life was at stake her frnd had done all within her power to save her and now its her turn bt hee she stands doing nothing..."he kanha save jodh's life...she isn't supposed to die now...she shuld live on...there is alo more things 4 her to do on this earth 4 the wellbeing of people...plzzz let her live kanha...plzz give my frnd back..."


AT ANOTHER PLACE
sheraffudin never imagined this outcome...his on plans backfired on him ...jodha's life is in danger...he plotted all this to killoff jalal and to win his jodha...4m the time he planned atacking amer he planned on marrying jodha bt thn jalal overtuk him and married jodha...bt dat was never an end to his dreams he still wantedto defeat jalal and achieve jodha the queen of his dreams...he was always mesmerised by her beauty and smartnes...now evrything were in ruins...he bashed the bottle 4m wich he was drinking onto the floor...no this is nevr the end he won't let jodha like dat...wen he becomes the king he want the ultimate beauty jodha by his side as his queen...


BACK TO AKDHA
jalal was still string at jodha...bt there she lye without even luking at him...his herat felt aching each and evry moment he stood there...the rays of hope he had seen while bringing her here had already started fading...the doctors weren't able to give any definite assurance...they asked him to gain courage and be ready to face watever was to happen...it was easy 4 them to say,bt his grief saw no ends...he was constantly praying 4 his jodha to get well...

many expert hands in medicines were called 4 help...they were helping jodha to fight agnst her own death...ammijaan cldn't stand seeing all this...she was very weak now of crying and fainted...she was moved to her chamber were some bandis were taking care of her...moti and jodha's other frnds refused to leave her side and were always present with jodha...rukaiya was a little confused by jalal's state.she thought he may be guiltstruck by jodha's illbeing and is blaming himself 4 all dat happened...bt still she cld feel something changed in him bt she yet didn't know wat was it????once or twice she went near him to console him bt he never paid attention...though this action hurt her she didn't complain...she also prayed 4 jodha to get well sooon...she didn't want jalal to spent much time in being guilty...bt was it guilt that was holding him????
yes ofcourse he was guilty 4 watever had happened bt there was more to it...each and every cell in hisbody craved her they were in need of her...now in this world nothing mattered to him more than her being alright and breathe in the placid air of agra as lively as ever...bt the god hadn't tested him enough...the doctors informed him dat jodha begum's heart beat was unstable and her breath intake is rougher than ever now...everyone around jodha was crying so hardly like her time was up they had all given up...salima begum moti reva all other bandis and begums present there were crying and even rukaiya bugum stood their with heads down...jalal cldn't stand this scene...no his jodha wsn't dying they were all wrng she is gonna live he can't give up on her...he got up 4m there and went to the mandir in jodha's chamber...there stood her kanha in front of wich she always sat and sung...he removed his jootha and lit the lamp before lord krishna's diety...he know no prayers still he stood their with his eyes filled and those tears told all dat was needed...he stood there silently luking at kanha he cldn't find his voice...all of his body was aching even his heart...he cldn't even cryout loud...the kanha whom jodha worshipped for all these years shuld save his devotee now...he remembered all those time he had seen jodha praying and now he was here to seek the answers 4 her prayers...five feet aside the mandir he started his niskara offerings to allah to pray 4 his begum his love his life...wen he finished some voice reached him"shehanshah jodha begum opened her eyes..."... finally god had answered his prayers...


NOTE:SORRY GUYS FOR SUCH A DELAY IN UPDATING...THIS CHAP IS DEDICATED TO SHRESHTHA DII,NANCY AND MY PINKY FRND ANNE(VINCYANNE)
Edited by littoos - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heart touching update dear⭐️i felt like crying reading Jalal's condition😭😭trust me it was too too good😊😊I liked the dialogue "HIndustan needed it's Mallika".Beautifully written Litty dear😃😃😃And Jalal prayed to lord krishna..😳😳😳omg...really indeed this was a meaningful chapter.This shows that love doesn't have any religion.LOve is just love😊😊.I dnt knw what to say yaar..you're an amazing writer⭐️And the starting was also too good👍🏼.Nice dialogues and language👏👏.You expressed Jalal's feelings so nicely👏👏.Thank god my Jodha opened her eyes and Jalal also is happy..😊😊😊eager to read more..pls update soon and thanks alot dear for the pm😃😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb. now next part update soon

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